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Published: 2010-08-23 17:49:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 941; Favourites: 30; Downloads: 3
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there's a lamp postbehind those trees
and it looks like a forest
fire
she calls nine one one
but by the time the
paramedics arrive,
it's too late, she's already
dead
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Comments: 94
Wow. It's rare to find something so short that makes such an impact! I know I shall have this in my head for a good few hours now!
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Awe, that's awesome. Thanks!
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Wow. That was awesome. My favourite part was where Mapleine faked her death, then ran for Congress and forced legislation against the evil gnomes to prevent them from building lamposts in weird places without a decriminalizing permit.
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You, my friend, are so right. ^_^
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ohmy this is love 
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i think we all are.
thankyou deary.
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me too (: you're welcome!
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;-;
I was definitely in Narnia, too, for three lines... then you said fire... and then I was painfully reminded of something I did to a character that I feel guilty about. I made him think his little sister burned alive in a forest fire. I'm a terrible person :[
But wow, this is incredible. I love the impact--even though I hated it--when you realize you're not in a happy place any more. It's disturbing. I like it :]
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Hehe. I kill off my people sometimes too.. >.>
Thanks so much!
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Everyone does at one point or another. But I felt particularly guilty about that one X3
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i want this as lyrics. i want this read over joy division or yeahyeahyeahs or prettygirlsmakegraves or bikini kill.
i love it.
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Oh, thankyou so much dear! I have so missed your comments.. really, though, this isn't one of my better pieces since you've been away.. [link] here's one.. don't feel obligated to comment, it just means an awful lot to me, so I would be so happy if you'd read it.
p.s. the yeahyeahyeahs are awesome, im going to have to check out those other bands. (:
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So simple yet profound. I like this a lot.
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Awe! Thanks a lot. I wasn't sure about this one.
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Your welcome, it was really good.
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thanks so much.
her name killed her.
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Hm, simple and strong. It's the kind of poem that I'll read now and forget about, but tomorrow it'll drift into my mind and stay there all day. Ill comment this tomorrow if that's the case. lol
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Simple and strong, I like that.
^_^ Thankyou very much.
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yup, still thinking about it
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Awe! Thankyouuuu.
<3
I was really unsure about this one.
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whenever i read your stuff, i have such a "WHY DIDN'T I THINK OF THIS" moment.
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That makes me feel so good, you have no idea.
I get that all the time, when I'm reading your stuff sometimes too.
Freal.
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do you really? that makes me six kinds of happy!
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Yes, honestly.
I can go find a specific poem or two of yours that made me do that, if you want. Probably the ones I've faved.
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Sure!
I love you too, and your beautiful words! :hearts:
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So sad.
The simplicity is beautiful though - I love how much is left to the reader to imagine.
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You're like, the sweetest thing ever.
Just thought you should know.
I can always comment on a beautiful comment from you, and you always make me smile. (:
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You're amazing ... I hope you know that!
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Hmm..I like the image I'm getting from this. Nice. <3
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XD I didn't really expect her to die, but I like it that way. ^_^
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She likes it that way, too.
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