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Published: 2010-08-23 17:49:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 941; Favourites: 30; Downloads: 3
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there's a lamp postbehind those trees
and it looks like a forest
fire
she calls nine one one
but by the time the
paramedics arrive,
it's too late, she's already
dead
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Comments: 94
But that's why it's sad!
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I guess.
But only if you want it to be.
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I don't want it to be! I'm just a Debbie Downer! ... XD
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Why the heck don't they have a taco emoticon?!
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I just want to know what part of that made you feel the need to have a taco emoticon. XD
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I don't really know for sure.
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wow!! what an ending... so final and straightforward and wow!! luuvvvv it
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I agree with Jordan, the first part made me think of Narnia.
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I hope that's a good thing. (:
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It is, what could be better than Narnia ?!
My friends and I decided that this year, since we are seniors, we're going to put a sign on the handicapped stalls in all the bathrooms that says "WARNING; Portal to Narnia within." And at some point, when the bathroom is totally full, I have to flush the toilet and figure out a way to make my hair all wet and rush out screaming, "THERE REALLY IS A NARNIA !"
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OMG, that is ridiculous and amazing!
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I hope we actually do it, I'll be so excited. I'll be sure to tell you about the whole thing=]
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This would make an awesome chorus for some kind of song. It's beautiful.
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wow. this is beautiful in its simplicity because its actually not simple at all.
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i really did. the reader can make this into anythingggg. theres so little and yet so much in this. =]
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^_^ Less is more!
That's true of cake as well...
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yeah but more is better when it comes to cake ;]
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Not for my thighs!!
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The simplicity in this, I think, is what really gives it a huge impact. On top of the fact I love the beat in it. The little voice in my mind that reads the poetry my eyes see sounded very hypnotic.
Lovely.
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The voice in my head actually wrote this one. (: Thankyou love!
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Ahhh. The voice in your head speaking to mine? It's a universal language, poetry is. (:
Of course!
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Yes, exactly!
And I'm serious.. sometimes I write the poetry and sometimes my head just does it and I don't have much say about it.... so when I read your comment I grinned.
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I do that a lot too. Sometimes my fingers just decide it's time to write, and there isn't anything I can do to stop them xD
Awww. 
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I'm glad that jumble of words made sense to you.
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It made perfect sense to me.
[And it was beautiful.]
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At first two lines, I was all, "Narnia!" and then the rest of the poem hit... not Narnia. Not Narnia at all.
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>.> I'm sorry I took you away from Narnia..
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It's okay, that's what the books are for! Or so I have read!
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Hmmm....one of those you're making us wonder. I really like the simplicity and randomness of that first part regarding the likeness to a forest fire. Kinda makes me want more to the story, though. BUT the way it suddenly ends without a good elaboration kind of works... I'm in wonder.
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Anything can look like a disaster if you want it to. She ruins everything she touches.
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Excellent explantion...that brings the poem to a new height.
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