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or:how to write to peter
i. sprinkle pixie dust on
one feather of a whisper
ii. blow a kiss to nudge
the dictations of your heart
from a fourth-story windowsill
iii. crawl (sloth-toed) onto the roof
& stretch your third eye
to watch your letter cross state lines
iv. shiver restlessly until
v. suddenly!
vi. you feel your feather of a whisper
nestle in his concave
mailbox:
the space where his left collarbone meets his neck strings
"if i were you i would want me back"
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To make your heartlight is more than I could of asked for. Thank you darling for being you.
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Dear.
Dear.
My heart got really big when I read this and I think it woke up from the coma highschool induces upon hearts.
This is so lovely that I want to put it in a box and peek at it periodically. And smile.
Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful.
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Ohmygosh.
Reallyreally??
What an incredible comment, thank you thank you thankyouuuu.
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You're so wonderful, thanks so much hon!
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Oh do you?? Thanks so much!
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Wow. Will you be so kind to telepathically (sp?) send me some of your writing skills. (': Pretty please?
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Sure, here you go!
Thanks so much hon.
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Finally!
You're welcome. (:
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well this nearly made me cry and i'm not exactly sure why
but you
you are so...
fantastic. i don't even know i can't even find words
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it's real and true and... it's there.
thank you so much.
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i'm glad it's true 
ohhh you're so welcome, love<3
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Oh, very nice. Especially that last line- it makes the rest shine.
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You're very welcome. ^^
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i love peter too. (:
thank you so much!
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You're the only one in the whole world, darling.
Ask me to clarify, I can't.
I just love the way you send your messages...
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I just hope he will get this one.
And at the same time.
Maybe not.
Thanks hon. (:
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I hope so too.
No maybe(s)...
You're welcome, dear. (:
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I LOVE THIS. it's so magical and mystical and wonderrrrrful.
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this is my favoriteeee of the series...its endearing and i love the way its written, the imagery has a soft hopeful sadness to it, and i love the roman numerals breaking it up...this is beautiful
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^_^
I do love my peter.
Thank you so much darling!
It means a lot that you read the whole series. ^_^
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i read everything you write 
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I could just kiss you right now!
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oh baby well dont hold back
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"the space where his left collarbone meets his neck strings"
A beautiful space.
I'm starting to get attached to this Peter of whom you continue to write.
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I really just squeed and clapped my hands at reading this comment.
My peter is a big shy at so much attention, but I love that you love him.
Thank you so so so much.
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Yes and no.
He is of flesh but not the tangible sort.
(:
He is mine and will always remain so.
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I see. It's curious the way fiction can immortalize the best within all of those we know. It's also the root of an extreme possessive power, to transcribe someone from real life to your words. And an extreme display of affection, as well. Like saying, you are good enough to be in this world I created. I created a world out of this world, and I want you to be in it.
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Wow, that's powerful stuff!
I suppose I could tell you my peter secret, eh?
I'll note you. (:
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Thanks so much for sharing with me!
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Thanks for expressing interest!!
That means a lot. (:
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If I were Peter, I'd be the luckiest damn idiot in the world.
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awe.
this made me smile.
he's not really an idiot, though..
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forgetting the person it's -about- or...peter on the whole
more like the last line
about wanting you back
i think i'd be an idiot if i were him and didn't
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that makes sense.
yes.
i just wonder if he does.
peter is not -him-
..
long story.
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no no
i know
that's my point
we're not talking about Peter [the original character you've created] nor Peter [the person he MIGHT be related to, if he is at all]
we're talking about me as Peter lol
confusing, i know
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ohhhhh.
i get it now darlin.
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