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loner-gurl — Middnight toils
Published: 2004-04-03 20:58:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 71; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 9
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For hence;Midnight tolls.
Dark, danke misst rolls in,
An eerie silence covers all.
Demons creep to haunt the youth.
Their blood, red eyes shine like fire,
Fangs glisten as a drop of venom falls.
They come to gather our children,
To make them their own,
To make them out dead.
Into the house they go,
Up the stairs.
Checking the rooms
Gleefully the smile,
Sliding under beds.
"Posses the children"
Their orders say.
"And bring them down to Me.
Harvest pure and loving souls.
Feed Me and make my POWER grow.
Gather enough souls and you shall be free"
They cast the children down.
To forever fall,
In a never ending pit.
As their work for the night is done.
They start to dance around,
The sacrad, evil fire of their trade.
Comments: 3
Here I had better do this before my bestfriend kills me.
Patialy inspired by Manna's story of a nightmare deamon that ends up getting blown up.
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yeah I usually do that before I let other people read my work but I havent gotten to that yet.
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if you fixed the spelling errors it would flow better ya know. ^_^ do you have microsoft word on your computer? spell check is a godsend. i'm shite at spelling so i know.
it's good though. has a nice rythm to it. i like.
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