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LoneWolfHBS — [SFM] CoP - The Dead Pool Part 7: Wolf's Den
Published: 2014-05-16 21:08:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 29153; Favourites: 84; Downloads: 239
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Fixed the Photoshop issue again and thus, managed to get this part done! This part features Legion almost entirely and is also quite possibly the only part with absolutely no humor involved. Hope you like it!Synopsis:
"After approaching the Medic about the crazed oWn robot attack, the oWn Medic angrily complained to G.M. over his defective robots and the possibility of a betrayal. However, G.M. insisted that the robots were not *that* defective and they're well behaved in his workshop. He also insisted that their alliance is not broken in anyway and that he's still actively supporting them. When FemScout mentioned the strange Eyelander they found, G.M. guessed that the oWn mercs may have unlocked its unusual powers accidentally, powers which even he know nothing about. He suggest they deal with it quickly, although he admitted that he couldn't help them much from his current position.
With the Pyrovision Goggles, the RED FemSniper and FemScout started their investigation but things did not go quite well when FemSniper heard mysterious voices before they were both attacked by an oWn robot Soldier. However, from FemSniper's Pyrovision point of view, she instead see a BLU Soldier who taunted her before attacking. The oWn robot/BLU Soldier started retreating, prompting the due to give chase to find the location of the culprits behind the robot behaviours. Unfortunately, it turns out to be a trap and the Soldier was nothing but a bait. Unusual figures pop out of nowhere and quickly knock out the duo. The RED FemSniper and oWn FemScout were both kidnapped by an unusual force they unintentionally provoked somehow."
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We're those WWE refenrences in the Legion's dialog at the end? I'm pretty sure I recognised Randy Orton theme here
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Yep. Intentional because Orton's character partially inspired Legion.
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Oh really? How so? The legend killer persona or the Apex Predator one?
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The Apex Predator. His character is one that is deranged of a sorts who hear voices in his head that drives his actions, even as a face or a good guy. Legion's modus operandi is similar; they possess robots and and subtly drive people around them insane through voices in their heads, though they focus on the ones that they want to turn into their host, which is in this case the oWn Demoknight and later, oWn FemScout.
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Heh. Never noticed this, but when you decided to show the rest of the 'Legion' group, it looks like you decided to mimic that of meeting Legion in Mass Effect 2 - especially this line:
"We are Legion, for we are many" (Christian Bible, Gospel of Mark, Chapter 5, Verse 9)
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Yes, i am agree. I am Buddhist but i already read this line. I think a demonic-like entities Legion of LoneWolf's CoP got inspired from Legion in Christian.
This is my theory about Legion, sir!(It's have spoilers .-.)
My Theories about Legion of CoP series.the real *Demons* were rise.
**My theories about Legion in CoP series. (sorry LoneWolfHBS, if you are angry, that is just my crazy fan theories about Legion in your series, not real. ). **
(Spoiler Alert!) if you all read this, something may be spoiler, thus, if you want not watch this spoiler, you must not read it!. (I'm already alert to you.)
--- It have somethings that makes me can connected conformities of both Legion in your series and Legion in other. In legend of Christianity, "Legion" is a group of demons referred to in the New Testament, in an incident in which *Jesus* performs an exorcism. The earliest version of this story exists in the Gospel of Mark, described as taking place in "the country of the Gerasenes". Jesus encounters a possessed man, and calls on the demon to emerge, demanding to know its name – an important element of traditional exorcism practice. He find
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I like White lie and your other stuff better than this, still cool btw
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Interesting story line. Amazing the amount of content has come out with TF2, I hope that others haven't ruined your interest in finishing up your storylines thus far. They are quite enjoyable to read/watch. In any case have a good time.
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WOW, this is awesome! I love how Snipes got to like Scout and care for her. (gosh their parent-stpry were crazy XD; But even though Scout has her mom... I remember her bio saying "abusive parents" so 'Im not so sure it's a good thing. 
Anyway, the story is getting more and more intriguing! I could see teh Legion's reasoning about the "sheperds", however I don't really think what they want is any better. Actually The Medic thought the same and started his own agenda for that same reason,I much more support that one! Not to mention their line about "hunting the prey until extinction", that's totally not how nature does, when that happens the predator dies out too so usually there is balance so they are screwed with their ideas. And it was just SO shocking with that Blue Scout and dead fellows... Ugh, no wonder Belle was shaken by that...
You have pretty cool female characters btw! Okay, not just the females, I like your characters in general, but you have a LOT of badass women, who has active role in the story and that is a rare gem to find. :3
And I also liked how Belle (sorry, I keep calling her like that because of the bio, must make difference between all the scouts after all XD; ) was bonding with The Medic, haha. And the conversation between the Medic and that robot Heavy (it was surprisingly intelligent though XD).
Anyway, I just looooove the way you handle relationships between characters!
I see it was updated a long time ago but I hope you will continue it eventually! I love it and can't wait to find out more! *__*
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Hey, thanks for showing so much love for this comic series! It is indeed a shame I couldn't finish it (yet) due to other commitments and lack of time but I will eventually get to it one day. And it is ok if you want to keep calling her Belle. I am intimately familiar with the "original novel names" of most of the characters since they are all based on my original novel characters, including personality and their story role. I still have the drawing of her character's novel incarnation. Just haven't shown it yet
So yeah, thanks for the interest
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Haha, my pleasure! Both I and my 12 years old son are extremely hyped up about it, we can't stop trying to figure what's behind all this.
Oh, I understand, I'm the same about my creative activities, it's hard when you have so many things to do.
Oh waaaittt... Is there an actual NOVEL of it? We'd LOVE to read that!!!! *o*
Really, when I mentioned to my son he said even though he is not as good in English yet he want to try, haha. So please, if it's available somewhere to read, could you give me a link to that? THANK YOU!
Also, I hope you decide to show her then, I'm really interested.
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Unfortunately, no. I mentioned "novel" but they are not written yet. They're just an idea. However, there is a blog of mine where I keep an outdated version of one of my novels that are in-progress. It doesn't have the oWn FemScout's novel version but it does have the RED FemScout and the oWn Medic's novel character. English is bad though because it was written years ago so yeah, try to tolerate it. As for the drawing of the novel Belice, I'll see what I can do about sharing her.
lonewolfhbs.blogspot.sg/2010/1…
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Thanks for sharing it! I'm surly going to check it out when my time lets me! = D
So... it's an original story you have where you have similar characters? o.o
Okkay, looking forward to it! ^^
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The comics are amazing! They look really neat. But I have 1 question.
How do you make them? I'm really curious how you do it.
I would love to make my own comic just for fun.
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Arghhhhh! I love this too much help me-
Also, if you need voice actors, you can go to this website ( www.behindthevoiceactors.com/c… ) to cast for some roles.
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I'm not too crazy about the series, but I especially loved this comic, specifically this Part. You sir have done a great job with the story, but I think you may soon need to move on to working with more voice actors than just using in-game dialogue.
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Thanks. The lack of voice actors is precisely why my series hasn't advanced past Chapter 5. Chapter 6 onward really involves Legion and without voice acting, it will be nearly impossible to explain them.
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Hmm, what you can try is have them use the whispering sound effect(s) as their way of speaking and have dialogue boxes of them speaking, similar to what Lemurfot did with his stories. If not, try asking for/hiring voice actors. You are bound to find people you want. Just ask for people to record and send you their voice clips of a segment you want them to say so they say it. I have a mic and I can record for you, but my voice may not work. :/ You can talk to me on Steam if you want to discuss this more.
Name: [G.o.D.] Strashniy Velikhan
Your series is great as it is, and I hope the story continues to be great. Also, the fact that you have a following means that you are doing something right if your aim was to inspire people to work together.
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The things the Legion Demoman said is kinda confusing...
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There is still one more part but lately, I never had a chance to work on it. Eventually though but it might be a very long wait.
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Okay Then 
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Hey, I only just recently found your project and have been blasting through the first five videos, plus the ??? one and these comics. Sure, they could use a little polish here and there, but all in all I think you've produced some serious quality work - from what I've understood there's been some drama and stuff, but I do hope you'll keep on doing these. There's plenty more awesome storytelling to do with this!
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You and your brother are awesome the story in the videos and the comics are awesome
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OKAY, YOU KNOW WHAT?! I'M BEGINNING TO THINK THAT LEGION IS JUST SOME ALLIANCE-BASED COUSIN TO THE REAPERS OF MASS EFFECT! BECAUSE IN SOME ATTEMPT TO RESTORE A COSMIC BALANCE NATURE, THEY'RE...THEY'RE...THEY'RE HARVESTING US! OR SOMETHING LIKE THAT! GAAAH!!! I BETTER GO BUY A SPARE HEAD, BECAUSE I'M LOSING MY CURRENT ONE! DX
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He's in the 2nd last row 1st pic on the right of the sniper and scout
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Oooooh cliffy
The Legion is scarryyyy
Now I really wish there'll be an episode 6
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damn now things just got dark.
And is it me or is legion creepy me the crap out of me
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Idk why, I feel oWn would of been better a comic than a video.
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Can you tell me a way to get Femscout's Brutal Bouffant to be red? I'm still a noob at SFM.
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First thing, I used the FemSniper's version of the Brutal Bouffant. Male Sniper's one could do too but may look only slightly weird. You'll have to adjust them to make them fit the FemScout's head. Before trying to change the color, turn off SFM first.
Second, you need to learn how to reskin VMT and VTF files but for Brutal Bouffant, you just need to touch its VMT file. I suggest finding a tutorial on how to edit VMT and VTF files onlines. Once you've learned how to open up VMT files at least, find the BB's VMT file at (Steam/SteamApps/common/SourceFilmmaker/game/tf/materials/models/player/items/all_class). The file's called brutal_eddiehair.vmt. Backup this file in case you mess up.
Open it up with VTFEdit and a window with a lot of text will appear. Find "$colortint_base" and change the numbers next to it to "{102 25.5 25.5}". Then change the numbers next to "$color2" to "{26 26 26}". "$color2" should be right below "$colortint_base".
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Even using oWn bodies to taunt her. Was that Spy from Badwater? Seems strange that she brought up avenging him.
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is that heavy with teath the heavy from rabid heavy taming enigineer because he kinda looks like it
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No. It's probably a coincidence. I never watched that video.
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Something with him and sheep. Sheep aren't the only animals that get hunted but always sheep. Somehow despite this not being made to be funny, I just laughed.r
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I like the comic, but Legion's cryptic talk of 'wolves', 'sheep', and 'shepherds' got annoyingly repetitive. It honestly made him look less intimidating, in my opinion.
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Thanks! Honestly, though, they were never meant to be intimidating (except for the fact that they can't be killed). The repetitive talks were supposed to make him seem not right in the head and to make him much less likable than oWn. If you find it annoying, then I think I did fine with his characterization. Anyone who finds him intimidating would be a bonus lol. Even in-universe, FemSniper gets increasingly annoyed by their constant talking 
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You did your job well, if that's the case. Looking forward to more!
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Love the series but I don't get we're your going with the lezzi side of the story but so far so good keep it up lonewolf
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Thanks! You're welcome to make a wild guess though and I love reading guesses about my series. If you want a hint, the oWn Demoknight doesn't seem "normal" when he holds the Eyelander and considering the first time he ever appeared in my videos (and a titantron video no less)...
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