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Lortenglas — If you care by-nc-nd
Published: 2010-10-25 23:15:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 140; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 2
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Description If you care, why don't you dare – come to me !
If you 're scared or not prepared,
I will wait as long as it take.

I'm staying in the dark, watching , waiting  for you…
Shivering and trembling …

I'm looking at the mark,
that you gave me … will you escape me ?

Do you expect from me to just  forget you?
I remember, on that bridge,
the sun was setting,
the wind – playing with your hair,
you glared at me.

I smiled and looked at you with hope,
you said that my smile is  broken, curvy and calm …
Then I realized what have I done…
My heart was  in your hands.
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Comments: 10

Lortenglas [2010-10-27 15:38:58 +0000 UTC]

OK, count me in

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LokiTheSaint [2010-10-27 15:10:32 +0000 UTC]

I hope I'm not insulting you but it kinda sounds like a stalker's line

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Lortenglas In reply to LokiTheSaint [2010-10-27 15:13:09 +0000 UTC]

not at all

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LokiTheSaint In reply to Lortenglas [2010-10-27 15:17:23 +0000 UTC]

but if its your first its quite good you just fave my first ever poem you know

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Lortenglas In reply to LokiTheSaint [2010-10-27 15:20:47 +0000 UTC]

Thank you yes it's my first try, well in my humble opinion, I think you are pretty good

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LokiTheSaint In reply to Lortenglas [2010-10-27 15:36:34 +0000 UTC]

I'm making a group care to join?

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LokiTheSaint In reply to Lortenglas [2010-10-27 15:32:24 +0000 UTC]

Rock on Ivan and if you want to go on a holiday in Asia pick Malaysia theirs a lot of cool benefits beside the cheap foods and their still tasty too

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Lortenglas In reply to LokiTheSaint [2010-10-27 15:35:36 +0000 UTC]

I've always wanted to go in Asia

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Lortenglas In reply to Lortenglas [2010-10-27 15:38:02 +0000 UTC]

Malaysia is very mystical and charming. I hope I can visited some day

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Lortenglas In reply to Lortenglas [2010-10-27 15:14:27 +0000 UTC]

I just wanted to show the struggle in his heart

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