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Published: 2008-07-17 06:13:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 822; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 18
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Description Because I have too much time on my hands...

Story (Because, I again, have too much time on my hands):

Somehow Shego/Ron reproduce by some mistake, and Shego gives the kid up for adoption. I guess I'll name the kid Eric, even though it's a girl. So Eric floats about the orphanage scene and never gets adopted. By the age of 13 she decides to run away and takes a bus to Nebraska. After living on the streets for a period of time she finds a job working on a local farm, but because the farmers wanted male workers only Eric pleads and offers to work at half the cost of the boys and promises if she can't physically cut it she'll leave without pay. By working longer hours to prove herself and gradually getting stronger by forcing herself to push her limits Eric is allowed to stay. By the time she is 17 the family's farm is bought out by a large corporation and she is forced to leave along with the other workers.

She has made two male friends while working on the farm who she has become close to. They travel within the city living off other's hand outs and other questionable means of survival. Somewhere along the way Eric decides that being a girl on the streets she should find a way to arm herself- for safety purposes, so she buys a gun.

When her friend wakes her up one morning in panic with a bag of cash she finds out that he has robbed the local bank and is asking her and her other friend to leave town with him. They run to the train station, but are cut off by the local sheriff, and when her friends life is threatened she decides to shoot the officer. They hitch a ride on the next passing cargo train and along the way decide to become serious criminals since Eric is now wanted for murder.

Eventually Eric decides she wants to find out who her parents are so that she can exact revenge on them because she feels that if it were not for them she would not be in this situation. Her resentment and anger towards her unknown parents becomes an obsession and eventually drives away her friends who only want to be criminals for the money, while Eric becomes somewhat of a sociopath because of her extreme confusion.

Yeaaaaa.....

I'm not long winded.
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Comments: 18

TheLadyWolverine [2013-10-26 01:03:36 +0000 UTC]

Cool

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ohlookachicken [2011-09-15 17:23:07 +0000 UTC]

SWEEEET LOVE IT

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GreenScar1990 [2010-10-01 00:43:17 +0000 UTC]

Interesting... sorta like Hulk's son Skaar, who hates his father & his mother. Believes his father, the Hulk abandoned him, and Caiera, his mother banished him from Sakaar. Really interesting. I'm surprised you've have written any RonGo stories. It's my fav pairing, and this seems like it has potential.

Maybe their offspring Eric (Erica works too), can bring her parents together romantically. It worked for Bruce/Hulk & Betty/Red She-Hulk in World War Hulks. Just sayin'.

Good work

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TheImmortalGriffin [2009-03-03 09:22:13 +0000 UTC]

woah, I just remembered, I said was gonna write a fic for her and I totally forgot.

whoops.

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loser7 In reply to TheImmortalGriffin [2009-05-14 11:58:46 +0000 UTC]

eh, it happens. we all have lives to attend to every once in a while.

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Saqism [2008-07-24 18:38:06 +0000 UTC]

Interesting idea. Things would be akward between Ron, Kim, Shego and Draken in any case.

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themanwhobuiltgod [2008-07-17 19:32:27 +0000 UTC]

That's really cool.
How long did that story take to make up? lol. (:
That would have taken me days...xP

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loser7 In reply to themanwhobuiltgod [2008-07-18 01:56:51 +0000 UTC]

I was just kind of thinking while drawing. It kind of spawned from my love of the 20s, with people being poor and working on farms and catching rides on trains.

It just sounds so fun.

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jelloshotgun7 In reply to loser7 [2012-04-02 15:50:09 +0000 UTC]

i'm sorry, i think 30's was what i meant...my history is a little shitty.

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UncleFester84 [2008-07-17 15:49:06 +0000 UTC]

Wow...

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Jersey7 [2008-07-17 13:43:34 +0000 UTC]

nicely done story! and great job on the spawn!

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CodyMacArthurFett [2008-07-17 12:05:03 +0000 UTC]

Fantastic picture here ma'am, though I'm sure about her her back story (Powers aren't even mentioned), but then again who am I to judge? I mean, one of my Rongo spawns is a cold-hearted super-soldier, another is a hardened military commander (Navy) that makes Col. Tigh look sensitive, and still another is . . . a Sonic the Hedgehog act-alike, speed and all.

But that is irrelevant, my job here is to criticize the picture, not the story. So in that vein of thought I'd like to say that considering your style of art this a pretty good picture, a little sketchy, but that's part of the charm.

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loser7 In reply to CodyMacArthurFett [2008-07-18 01:57:34 +0000 UTC]

I didn't want to give her powers- it seemed to obvious. I wanted her to be more subtle.

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CodyMacArthurFett In reply to loser7 [2008-07-18 02:00:55 +0000 UTC]

Makes sense. I believe Charles Grey also did something like that in "Unexpected".

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turbolover175 [2008-07-17 08:34:16 +0000 UTC]

Ron and Shego?! ...I'm sorry, you've lost me.

Shego: Me too...

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loser7 In reply to turbolover175 [2008-07-18 01:59:14 +0000 UTC]

I wasn't really thinking they hooked up...something more creative and unsexual- like a Drakken experiment gone wrong.

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LordFunkyFist [2008-07-17 07:44:51 +0000 UTC]

Wow, that was a very well put together back story for her =] And the drawing is good too!

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loser7 In reply to LordFunkyFist [2008-07-18 01:59:30 +0000 UTC]

Thanks friend

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