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Description houf....finally i finished it!
but the stone looks messed up....

technique: ink
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Comments: 32

ClimbToTheStars [2012-06-05 07:19:36 +0000 UTC]


Your eye for details is amazing!

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lotusbiru In reply to ClimbToTheStars [2012-06-10 07:45:59 +0000 UTC]

thankies! those houses didn't draw in detail actually,,

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Philliewig [2012-06-03 21:24:12 +0000 UTC]

I love this. The perspective is great, the attention to detail is marvelous! I love your linework, it is excellent

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lotusbiru In reply to Philliewig [2012-06-10 07:47:34 +0000 UTC]

thankies!
i admit it in some part, yes, it's quite detailed, but those houses, i didn't draw it detailed. i just like to do some line shading

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HyperKangara [2010-12-09 10:01:26 +0000 UTC]

O.O
Wow! O.O
Impressive! O.O
Nice! ^^

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lotusbiru In reply to HyperKangara [2010-12-09 15:41:48 +0000 UTC]

thank you
i really appreciate it

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HyperKangara In reply to lotusbiru [2010-12-09 15:59:14 +0000 UTC]

^^
My pleasure! ^^

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bethwhowishes [2010-11-14 12:12:07 +0000 UTC]

Simply gorgeous amount of detail! Well done!

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lotusbiru In reply to bethwhowishes [2010-11-14 14:36:30 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much for comment and fave

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whatonearth [2010-11-14 04:29:02 +0000 UTC]

its pretty!

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lotusbiru In reply to whatonearth [2010-11-14 04:41:08 +0000 UTC]

thanks for comment and fave

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whatonearth In reply to lotusbiru [2010-11-14 04:58:31 +0000 UTC]

your welcome

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cubicdemigod [2010-10-31 00:05:52 +0000 UTC]

The perspective looks very convincing, which is good. I also like how simple this seems in it'swhole complexity; even the rocks, which you have complained about, look quite believable (except after a closer look; it looks wood-ish because the lines are too straight and long). Also, I think you could've risked a bit more dark here and there, since the nearest tree becomes way too obscured when compairing with the rest of the objects. Finally, the lines surrounding said tree's leaves are too thick when perhaps you could've worked it so that they wouldn't be necessary.

One last question; is that a river I see?
(PS: It may look like I am an aggressive critic, but this is the way I usually observe things; I have chosen this piece because I like it and thought I could give you an impression on how to make it better )

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lotusbiru In reply to cubicdemigod [2010-10-31 14:43:34 +0000 UTC]

thanks for comment. i really appreciate it
i got some trouble with line thickness..humm maybe because i draw it just in A6 size paper, i should've draw in larger paper so i can put some different line thickness

oh i don't think that such an agrresive critic. i can get along as far it not such a judge "you're drawing suck, terrible, etc" without giving a clue where's wrong and which part i need to do better. LOL

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cubicdemigod In reply to lotusbiru [2010-10-31 15:32:17 +0000 UTC]

Yes, I hate those almost as much as a single "cool" or "nice" -.-'

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sythesite [2010-10-26 05:52:58 +0000 UTC]

very fascinating... this is very detailed and lovely

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lotusbiru In reply to sythesite [2010-10-26 07:54:24 +0000 UTC]

thx

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MrColon [2010-10-16 11:22:31 +0000 UTC]

Hello!
Thank you for letting me using this piece in my feature. I do really appreciate it. The feature is now up and you can see it here !

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lotusbiru In reply to MrColon [2010-10-16 11:33:34 +0000 UTC]

hi! i thanks too, you put my artwork on your feature.

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jedgar22 [2010-10-11 14:46:09 +0000 UTC]

Great work, the details/textures are really well done

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lotusbiru In reply to jedgar22 [2010-10-12 01:16:42 +0000 UTC]

thx. i really appreciate it

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Pandemoniumswings [2010-10-07 01:28:43 +0000 UTC]

This is effing awesome as far as technical pieces go. You've nailed all the bases in perspective and generated a truly intriguing landscape that is both believable and in balance with itself. I also notice that you've done a spectacular job inking in such a way that the nature of the object is apparent and readable. While I'll agree that the texture of the stones is out of wack and is more similar to bushes, and the mountains lack personality and are too uniform, this complaint is really only a minor inconvenience that does not distract from the beauty of this piece. Well done!

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lotusbiru In reply to Pandemoniumswings [2010-10-07 04:32:48 +0000 UTC]

thanks thanks
ohh....i'm running out of words to reply your comment

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fish-o [2010-09-29 17:33:19 +0000 UTC]

Wow, I am incredibly impressed. Honestly, I have never drawn a proper landscape in my life, and even less houses. I'm so envious of people who can draw like this.

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lotusbiru In reply to fish-o [2010-09-29 17:40:14 +0000 UTC]

then try it!
it's fun u know, as long as not much details...

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Carthegian [2010-09-16 18:15:12 +0000 UTC]

Nice work ini tinggal ditingkatin aja supaya bisa keterima di artitechs laen kali

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lotusbiru In reply to Carthegian [2010-09-16 18:34:37 +0000 UTC]

makasih senpai..
iyah belum ketrima karena 1 dan lain hal
harus usaha lagi ini!

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Carthegian In reply to lotusbiru [2010-09-16 18:37:57 +0000 UTC]

Ah jgn kuatir, gw juga sering blm keterima koq. Standar kualitasnya cukup tinggi di sana.. jadi pecut supaya lebih bagus lagi dan lagi

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lotusbiru In reply to Carthegian [2010-09-16 18:46:46 +0000 UTC]

*ctaaarrr!!!*
(kagak usah pake efek beginian juga kalee)

oh sering ditolak juga? padahal sering liat gambar situ di grup lho...

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Carthegian In reply to lotusbiru [2010-09-16 19:14:52 +0000 UTC]

*ctaaarr!* <- asik juga..

Yah mungkin krn submission gw gak sama kualitasnya seperti submission gw yg sebelumnya. Konsistensi penting bgt sih

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elfthekiller [2010-06-01 13:41:24 +0000 UTC]

uwaw... keren, aku suka gambar pohonnya, detailnya sip... b

--
visit my gallery ! open for commission [link]

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DEBORATOZZEartes [2010-05-31 12:37:52 +0000 UTC]

Ow! Great!!

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