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Loup-De-Chocolat — Aima Meiritsu

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Description IN NO WAY IN HELL DO I SUPPORT OR CREATE ALL-OUT MARY-SUES (any more, and I'm sorry I did it accidentally), THIS IS PURELY FOR THE FUN OF MOCKING THEM.

Drawn by me, beautifully colored by Marine-Depths13, the person who deserves cookies and plushies and all sorts of other nice things for being a great, amazing person and for helping me out because I epically fail at coloring and I loveseseses her, thank you Sammy, I love you!!!! ^^

Meet Aima Meiritsu, cousin (fourth, I believe) and arch-rival of Imo Meiritsu. She has a long and very bright and perfect story, so I'll start at the beginning! :3 Alias Yusuki "Yue" Ibaro (she officially changed her name to Aima when she turned 17 because she thought it sounded prettiry than Yue Meiritsu), she is Sasuke's twin sister, but almost her entire family hates her because she doesn't look like them (brown hair and silver eyes instead of black and black), but her mother, Sasuke and Itachi still love the hell out of her!! The locket around her neck has a picture of herself and Sasuke, who has a matching one, that their mother gave to them when they were born. Fugaku doesn't speak to her because she's a girl, so Itachi and Sasuke treat her extra-special, because she's worth it!!! ^^ <3

Anyway, so when she was eight years old and Itachi was ordered to kill everyone, she was spared earlier than Sasuke. He stayed later to work on his ninja skills, but she got bored because she was so good at them, anyway. She came home and got hit in the back of the head with the hilt of Itachi's katana so she wouldn't have to suffer the horrors Sasuke would.

Anyway, Itachi had a contact take her to Takigakure, where she was found and adopted by her amazing foster-dad Takara Ibaro because she was just so cute and had amnesia and he felt sorry for her and she just reminded him so much of his dead fiance. Again, she had absolutely NO memory of the Uchihas, so she also didn't know why her locket was so important, and she didn't know how to open it (it's only accessible by using her chakra or the chakra of another Uchiha). When she was about twelve and taking a test to make sure she and her fellow chunin teammates (Mitsu and Kaida, who are totally normal, so please don't hate them, they are very much loved people xD) could become ANBU, two other teams showed up, one she knew, and one she didn't, and that team had Mr. Akira from the Sand Village who got kicked out because of HIS super special awesome power. This is when the readers find out that she has a kekkei genkai that's not the Sharingan, but one she developed herself with mere practice (it's where her eyes scan the environment, then send a message to the brain, which sends off the best chemicals to change her body type to perform the best in that area). Akira falls madly in love with Yue, but at the end of the whole thing, she breaks his heart because she just doesn't love him T^T So sad. Anyway, he goes off and Yue and her team become ANBU black ops. The next year, Team 7 come to Takigakure for some mission, and they get stopped Yue's team, who are on guard duty at the waterfall. Yue and Sasuke get into a huge fight while the other four just sit there and chat because, well... it happened a lot. Yue always did the fighting because she's the best at fight strategy in the entire village!

Eventually, however, the amount of chakra in the air from Sasuke and Yue and the locket snaps off and opens. Yue gets all teary-eyed because Sasuke tells her she must be his long-lost twin sister!!! Readers, please say "Awww!!!" So, they all walk into the village together where Sakura (jealous of all the attention Yue is getting) gets freaked out by the small colony of squirrelfoxes (so NOT a knock-off of foxsquirrels XD) because they breathe fire, and Yue has one as a pet! Anway, the next day while Team 7 went to check in to get the full details of their mission and someone special turned up in Takigakure: Itachi!!! Apparently, he'd been visiting her periodically since he joined the Akatsuki and they became very close, though she never knew he was her brother! Awww, such a reunion when Sasuke started trying to kill him and Yue jumped in the way of a Chidori attack. She had to be hospitalized and the two brothers temporarily reconciled their differences for the sake of their lovely sister!!!

Anyway, when she got better, they all started talking, and it was decided that, though Sasuke begged and pleaded for her to go back home with him, she would stay in Taki where she would undoubtedly be happier. And also during this time period, Sakura and Yue became good friends because Sakura decided that she wasn't bad, she was actually one of the most amazing people she knew!!! So, Team 7 and Itachi left with no further trouble. Then, when she was 15, she decided to go visit Japan, where she met the Yu-Gi-Oh! people and she met Yami Yugi.

They started dating, but then Marik met her one day and fell in love with her. He begged and pleaded and promised her nice things and got her the Millenium Ring, which is the finger kind of ring, not the first Millenium Ring (Err, niirasri would actually know what I'm talking about because she was there the day I thought she meant some Millenium Item in the form of a key ring and a finger ring that didn't exist as opposed to the actual ring xD), but she broke his heart and stuck with Yami Yugi, but those two really fought a LOT. One day, they argued so bad that they just never got back together and she left for home again.

Anyway, another year passed and then Yue turned 16. She had kept in touch with Sasuke and Itachi until Sasuke ran away from home, essentially, and he told her not to follow him just in case she got hurt (she was begging him not to go). Anyway, he left Konoha and she decided to leave Taki for a while in order to see the world again, and Takara was just okay with that and paid for everything. So, she moved to Tokyo and started visiting the Full Moon Cafe, where she met the hyperactive werewolf ironically named Akira, who instantly was charmed with her (Misoka and Nozomu liked her immediatley, too, of course, but not as affectionately as Akira, and Mitsuru put up with her quickly). This was when she discovered that she, too, had amazing powers that were descended from a demonic ancestor, and the trait hadn't popped up with anyone else

She found out she can control the elements and transform into any kind of animal she wants!!! Which made the first three love her even more and Misturu became friends with her (Mahiru was her friend already, because she's that awesome). Akira fell totally in love with her and then, one day, about 10 months after the gang met her, her and her boyfriend Akira had a daughter, Mizuiro, who was a werewolf (they decided not to get married because she was content with just dating him). Takara was TOTALLY okay with it and kept her financially supported because he was excited to have a grandchild. Nozomu got insanely jealous, but Misoka sort of got over it because she was too amazing and he preferred to see her happy! So, the next year when she was 17 and changed her named to Aima, she gave birth to her and Akira's son Kangen, who was also a werewolf. Then she slowly got closer and closer to Nozomu because he was a hot-ass vampire and ended up having an affair with him, which got her pregnant a third time, so she had another son, Shichi, but he was a vampire. When Akira found out it wasn't his, he cried a lot because he was heart broken, and Aima left because she felt so terrible and returned to Taki with her three kids. And she was about 18 at this point, I do believe, and still with her perfect, gorgeous figure!

Zomg, anyway, so her father takes care of the three kids when she wants to go out, which is a lot, but her kids totally love her!! Shortly after she returns to the village, she decides to try to take up Beyblading and goes off to Russia where she hears some of the best Bladers live, and she goes to ask the Blitzkrieg boys to teach her how to do it, and they totally agree and let her join the team after a little while because she just picked it up in the blink of an eye! She was given the amazing bitbeast of Fukurou, a Barn Owl-type, ice bitbeast with great stats and then, guess who fell in love with her? Ian did! He loved her because she was just so pretty and good at blading and she didn't care that his nose was the size of his face. She fell in love with him back and when she was 19 and he was about 20, she had his twins, Manako (wolf demon) and Shiro (bat demon). They got engaged, though, because he just loved her so much!

A year later, they got married and had triplets, female Katarina (panther demon), female Chishika (bengal tiger demon) and male Nikolai (Nikki the white tiger demon). They were only slightly perplexed at this wide array of different demons, but, whatever! Ian and his teammates weren't even freaked out in the slightest! Then they went to their first tournament two years after the triplets were born and kicked ass because of Aima winning all their battles, but she also got an even more staggering fan base, now consisting of Brooklyn, who thought she was the most beautiful and talented thing ever because she beat him, Max, Kenny and some other random bladers.

Aima had her eye on Brooklyn since the start of the tournament, but her kids kept her too busy to really talk to him. But then he approached her and they started to secretly see each other. She got pregnant (what a surprise, right?) and Ian thought it was his. When Rose turned out to have red hair like Brooklyn and blue-green eyes like Brooklyn, it was assumed that Aima had family with that color (what does he know, he doesn't even know she's adopted, let alone what her family looks like). Then, one night she happened to be at a bar and met Lee there, who was drinking for reasons unbeknownst to us, seduced him, screwed him because she's thought he was hot since the moment she first saw him, then had HIS baby (Raiden, another tiger demon, but he was half-regular tiger, half-white tiger with odd eyes... the works). She never told him, but he fell in love with her after that night anyway, but then she ditched her husband and the others and went back to Taki, again with her kids.

Since they had so much money from no where, they got a way bigger house as the kids started ninja training (the oldest three were already genin because they inherited their mother's mad ninja skillz and the oldest two were getting ready to become chunin). There were still a lot of guys clamouring for Aima's attention because she was still so beautiful and retained her figure after 10 kids, but she didn't want any of them. Instead, she was thinking about going back to Yami Yugi because, you know, she still had feelings for him. So, she went back to Japan and found out that Yami went back to his own time, but then returned because he just missed her too much and hoped that his one true love would come back again!! And Marik was there again, too. But, this time she had Yami's twins, a boy and girl, Taka and Megami, before giving in to her feelings for Marik and then having his baby (I think she's about 26 now... I don't know, it's hard to keep track. xD), a girl whom they named Sunako. But that pissed Yami off even more, so he ditched her because he was so heartbroken, so she left and went back home, where her 12, 11 and 10 year-olds were becoming ANBU, her 9, 8, 7 and 6 year olds were hitting chunin, and her 5 year old was working on going from Genin to Chunin. Again, every skill was inherited from their mother and they were all super-powerful, like their mother.

When she returned home , she found that Takara had befriended a boy about her age named Rio, and the kid would help take care of Aima's little mini-clan. They got very close, he fell in love with her, they got married and they had two kids, twins Haru and Cosima (a wolf demon and a girl who can just do the element control thing). And, and and... I think... Yep, that's it!!!

... ... ...

Okay, I thought I'd NEVER finish that!! That took me two hours to write!!! xD WTH?! Anyway, so, she's more of a whore than a Mary Sue, but she still qualifies. Although, she's nowhere NEAR as well-written as Marine-Depths13's or niirasri's, of course. But I had fun with the character, mostly because she's been my accidental Sue for years, now. So, that's about all there is to her, really. xD Fifteen kids, and she's about 29 years old! Wow, and she never had any issues with her uterus or anything... The Sue has a bit of talent.

Needless to say (I'm sure it's obvious), the whore-like qualities stem from someone who actually does exist, except this person doesn't attract men, she just creeps them out. She's also a complete controlling, self-centered, attention-whoring bitch. But none of this comes out in the Sue, just because... well, Aima's a Sue. It just doesn't happen. xD Anyway, I'm good.

Okay, I own NOTHING except the character design and all the little kids. Everyone else go to their respective owners, mkay? xP Okay, I'm done. Now you may all pick which Sue you like best, either Imo or niirasri's. Or bananasandcreme's if hers is up, yet. xD I'm not a good enough writer to be in the running, really. Have fun!
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Comments: 51

Loup-De-Chocolat In reply to ??? [2011-09-07 02:15:23 +0000 UTC]

... she's the love child of bad fanfiction and Naruto, she doesn't HAVE to make sense! XD

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Anomimel [2011-08-18 17:07:13 +0000 UTC]

Why did you make such a mary-sue oh god WHY?!

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Loup-De-Chocolat In reply to Anomimel [2011-08-24 21:28:51 +0000 UTC]

Because she's THAT BAD.

XD

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K3nel1OS [2010-05-17 05:03:24 +0000 UTC]

Oh my God

Oh my God

Oh my God

Oh my God

Oh my God

You just killed my brain

Oh my God

Please fix it

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Loup-De-Chocolat In reply to K3nel1OS [2010-05-17 22:47:57 +0000 UTC]

xD Why thank you! I can't fix it, but I can recommend you to the excellent brain doctor that MY brain had to go for WRITING the thing!

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SkeletonInk [2010-01-30 08:04:39 +0000 UTC]

OH GOSH, THE DESCRIPTION.

Where's a "bleeding eyes and puking gastiric juice" plz when you need it!?

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Loup-De-Chocolat In reply to SkeletonInk [2010-01-30 13:51:04 +0000 UTC]

XD And that's why it's there. Part of our little "competition" was to see which background was the most sickening. So I'll take your comment as quite the compliment :3 Thank you!

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SkeletonInk In reply to Loup-De-Chocolat [2010-01-30 19:14:32 +0000 UTC]

It was a compliment, of course XD All "omg, MY EYES" are compliments on Sues. I've gotten a few myself, and I must say they're most gratifying XD

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Loup-De-Chocolat In reply to SkeletonInk [2010-01-31 02:42:11 +0000 UTC]

xP It's a great feeling when you mean to do it.

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SkeletonInk In reply to Loup-De-Chocolat [2010-01-31 04:04:44 +0000 UTC]

Yep XD

Actually, I once posted a REAL OC as a parody Sue (made her when I was 11, looked back on it, and realized how bad it was, lols) and I got so many "OMG! Perfect parody Sue!" XD

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Loup-De-Chocolat In reply to SkeletonInk [2010-01-31 05:03:20 +0000 UTC]

XD That's awesome. Aima's essentially that with just a couple of extra kids.

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SkeletonInk In reply to Loup-De-Chocolat [2010-01-31 05:13:43 +0000 UTC]

XD

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niirasri [2009-09-04 00:57:27 +0000 UTC]

LAWLZ I REMEMBER THAT!! Actually I remember most of that. XP OMG HOLY CRAP 15 KIDS WUT?!111 XD
And dude... I haven't thought of Full Moon Cafe in forever

I think we all win at writing ridiculous Mary Sue backstories... XD

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Loup-De-Chocolat In reply to niirasri [2009-09-04 01:04:00 +0000 UTC]

xD Nahh, you guys do. I don't so much. She's not really a Mary Sue, just a whore, really...

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niirasri In reply to Loup-De-Chocolat [2009-09-04 01:58:56 +0000 UTC]

But but BUT you're forgetting that "Mary-Sue" is synonomous with "whore" in most fanfics anyway XD So you win! YAY WIN

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Loup-De-Chocolat In reply to niirasri [2009-09-04 02:01:14 +0000 UTC]

Thanks... I still don't think I win, though. xD You guys are way better.

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niirasri In reply to Loup-De-Chocolat [2009-09-04 21:34:21 +0000 UTC]

Pff naaaw XD

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Marine-Depths13 [2009-09-02 00:11:21 +0000 UTC]

PARAGRAPH BREAKS ARE YOUR FRIEND, JESUS CHRIST MY EYES

... ... and as a reader, I will NOT say "Awww" D:<

... ... ... ... Imo's better >:

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Loup-De-Chocolat In reply to Marine-Depths13 [2009-09-02 00:31:58 +0000 UTC]

>.< I'M SORRY!!!!

xD I know.

... I know. xD I've said that once, if not twice.

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Marine-Depths13 In reply to Loup-De-Chocolat [2009-09-02 00:42:11 +0000 UTC]

XD Well we will let the voters decide, once Katie puts up her Mary-Sue!

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Loup-De-Chocolat In reply to Marine-Depths13 [2009-09-02 00:51:32 +0000 UTC]

... THey'll pick one of yours'. xD Mine's too long to read and therefore, judge.

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Marine-Depths13 In reply to Loup-De-Chocolat [2009-09-02 00:55:41 +0000 UTC]

xD THEN PARAGRAPH BREAK IT. It'd be easier if it just was split up!

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Loup-De-Chocolat In reply to Marine-Depths13 [2009-09-02 01:07:52 +0000 UTC]

xD Nahh, I don't feel like it. Besides, I don't feel like joining the running, really... It was just fun to make her to mock other Mary Sues, that's all I wanted to do, really...

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Marine-Depths13 In reply to Loup-De-Chocolat [2009-09-02 01:09:41 +0000 UTC]

XP while killing my eyesight??

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Loup-De-Chocolat In reply to Marine-Depths13 [2009-09-02 01:42:12 +0000 UTC]

XD YOU DON'T HAVE TO READ IT!!!

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Marine-Depths13 In reply to Loup-De-Chocolat [2009-09-02 01:52:07 +0000 UTC]

I DID ANYWAY

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Loup-De-Chocolat In reply to Marine-Depths13 [2009-09-02 02:14:28 +0000 UTC]

xD Then, I'm sorry, but it's your own fault. Sorry!!! I shouldn't have made it so long in the first place!!! >.<

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Marine-Depths13 In reply to Loup-De-Chocolat [2009-09-02 20:02:02 +0000 UTC]

D8 because I was curious of what you read in the first place? not fair

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Loup-De-Chocolat In reply to Marine-Depths13 [2009-09-02 20:09:04 +0000 UTC]

>.< Again, I'm sorry sorry sorry x10!!!!

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bananasandcreme [2009-09-01 22:12:38 +0000 UTC]

Dammit. You even beat me. D< XD.

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Loup-De-Chocolat In reply to bananasandcreme [2009-09-01 22:24:40 +0000 UTC]

xD No, I don't. I just beat people at been long-winded. Thank you, though.

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Marine-Depths13 [2009-08-31 19:59:07 +0000 UTC]



Paragraph breaks are wondrous things D8

I can't read it as of this moment because mum hates my very existence right now <33 SO I'LL DO IT LATER PROMISE

if I'm allowed on the computer lololololol...

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Loup-De-Chocolat In reply to Marine-Depths13 [2009-08-31 22:34:43 +0000 UTC]

>.< I know, I know, I'm so sorry!!! I meant to put them in, really, I did, but I just never found a good place to do it... That, and I didn't think anyone would read the description anyway just because of how long it is. xD

You really don't have to if you don't want to!!! Seriously!!! ;~;

TT TT I'M SORRY.

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Marine-Depths13 In reply to Loup-De-Chocolat [2009-08-31 22:35:51 +0000 UTC]

I WILL READ IT

just as soon as I'm done with my vert outline.

and copy/paste it to word so I can insert paragraph breaks XD

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Loup-De-Chocolat In reply to Marine-Depths13 [2009-08-31 23:18:26 +0000 UTC]

>~< I'm sorry I'm so long-winded and horrible...

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Marine-Depths13 In reply to Loup-De-Chocolat [2009-09-01 01:40:48 +0000 UTC]

._. you are not.

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Loup-De-Chocolat In reply to Marine-Depths13 [2009-09-01 02:21:23 +0000 UTC]

>.< Am too, as has been proven hundreds of times.

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Marine-Depths13 In reply to Loup-De-Chocolat [2009-09-01 23:32:43 +0000 UTC]

wtf has not, emo U8<

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Loup-De-Chocolat In reply to Marine-Depths13 [2009-09-02 00:00:49 +0000 UTC]

Yes it has, what about last year?? That was me being a horrible person more horrible than Hitler, only I didn't physically order the deaths of anyone...

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Marine-Depths13 In reply to Loup-De-Chocolat [2009-09-02 00:28:03 +0000 UTC]

And you're NOT this year.

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Loup-De-Chocolat In reply to Marine-Depths13 [2009-09-02 00:32:22 +0000 UTC]

Well, I'm not AS bad... I still AM bad, though...

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Marine-Depths13 In reply to Loup-De-Chocolat [2009-09-02 00:42:17 +0000 UTC]

Not really, but

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Loup-De-Chocolat In reply to Marine-Depths13 [2009-09-02 00:53:04 +0000 UTC]

>.< Says you... No offense, but it feels like you're just trying to make me feel better, and I'm REAALLLYYYY sorry sorry sorry x10 for thinking that.

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Marine-Depths13 In reply to Loup-De-Chocolat [2009-09-02 00:56:30 +0000 UTC]

I don't lie to people anymore concerning behaviors P: if they do something to piss me off, I tell them... So no, I'm not.

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Loup-De-Chocolat In reply to Marine-Depths13 [2009-09-02 01:08:21 +0000 UTC]

;~; I knoww... Still...

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Blackout6 [2009-08-31 19:48:58 +0000 UTC]

Wow, long description, ill have to read this when im not crunched for time, lol

Btw, hows school? xD

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Loup-De-Chocolat In reply to Blackout6 [2009-08-31 22:35:40 +0000 UTC]

xD Uhh, you really don't have to. I wasn't excpecting it to be read by anyone, anyway, so... yeah.

Errr... Fine? xD I've been drinking four bottles of water at school so I can squeeze in my 6-10 a day, so I'm having a hard time finding good times to use the bathroom at school...

How is it for you?

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Blackout6 In reply to Loup-De-Chocolat [2009-09-01 00:19:09 +0000 UTC]

lol i will anyways. Might be awhile though.

lol, why would you wanna do that? lol.

Uhm, its alright i guess, = /
been catching up with my AP and math though, so i think ill be alright

Hows life other than school? lol

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Loup-De-Chocolat In reply to Blackout6 [2009-09-01 00:47:48 +0000 UTC]

xD I don't suggest it...

xD Gee, I don't know!

Ahhh...

Errr... Okay! ^^

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Blackout6 In reply to Loup-De-Chocolat [2009-09-01 01:26:00 +0000 UTC]

lol

uhm,

mhm

nice,

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