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Published: 2008-07-09 01:42:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 89; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Description Mute

Open lips, Strangled cry.
Words choke off, wave good-bye.
Sting in throat, a lot more pain.
Phonation gone, nothing gained.

Silent mouthing, silent noise.
Button on mute, gone the voice.
Wishes and hopes, dreams and fears.
Reach for face, find no tears.

Lips almost close, decision made.
Offered help, need no aid.
Centimeter there, ready to be
Quiet and shut, hear, smell, and see.

Lips come to a close, finale is set.
Now show's ever, that you can bet.
Mouth stitched together, voice alone.
Now it's done, set in stone.

I am mute.
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Comments: 7

GameraGX [2008-07-10 19:44:39 +0000 UTC]

you are awesome!!! much better than me!

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LovelyHearte8 In reply to GameraGX [2008-07-10 19:47:43 +0000 UTC]

awww*blushing* am not. ur writing is more realistic and likable then mine,but, thank u very much

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GameraGX In reply to LovelyHearte8 [2008-07-10 19:55:12 +0000 UTC]

yours are totally deeper though

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LovelyHearte8 In reply to GameraGX [2008-07-10 19:58:37 +0000 UTC]

hmmmm, nah, i say yours are. thank 4 the comment though.

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GameraGX In reply to LovelyHearte8 [2008-07-11 11:34:12 +0000 UTC]

your welcome

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ChibiGaraaLover [2008-07-10 05:30:27 +0000 UTC]

I really like it. It's not dark persay but really shows alot of emotion in words which is a good talent to have. Great work!

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LovelyHearte8 In reply to ChibiGaraaLover [2008-07-10 05:31:49 +0000 UTC]

thnx.

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