Comments: 10
groovus [2002-08-23 18:57:51 +0000 UTC]
Some statement. Compliments to both of you.
gandure? probably grandeur!
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hikaru-kun [2002-08-18 06:24:36 +0000 UTC]
great one you two...+fav
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dise [2002-08-16 23:33:47 +0000 UTC]
"Can you face death and tell him that you did it 'your way'
Can you do that and be sure that he won't laugh in your face?"
I really like these 2 lines, and the whole message (for me, at least) of the poem... good luck on your submission.
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fatelessmirror [2002-08-16 22:19:54 +0000 UTC]
Besides some glaring simple grammar errors that spike into my skull and distract me from the poem, decent. *kisses* Its all good...
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