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Published: 2010-03-05 23:00:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 1986; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 0
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::EDIT::sorry guys for my grammar and spelling errors/typos, im really REALLY bad at part but i do try my best~
as soon as people come in to chat thats when im all good, other wise i suck at this part X'D
tell me about the errors and i wont moan, i'll just change it and thanku for it
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FINALLY, here is the first page
sadly nothing too great or interesting, but i promise you if u stick by this it should be very interesting
YAAAAAAY so glad ive finally got it up ^^
- - - you read Left to Right - - -
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Front Cover
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every canon character is copyrighted to nintendo, redesigns are my ideas so their copyrighted me (*Twilight-Zelda ), all OC characters will copyright me as this comic is ment to be about my characters~
plz do not bash or flame if you dont like what im doing with the canon characters, or if you dont like the plot of the story, Grammar and spelling/typos are my weakness.. if you spot one tell me nicely and dont moan~ i will change it and thanku for it XD
hope you enjoy the wait for the next page/chapter ^^
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Comments: 29
I LOVE your "Link comes to town"It's so funny!
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First page and I'm uberly excited! 
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yaaay its the story of the century. i cant wait to see it
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I'm so waiting for the next pages >w<
The twilight world sky you have made is beautiful <3
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Very nice start. Glad you're getting back into this. Though for future reference you may want to get an editor or something. Some of the grammar is a little off.
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changed my grammar, hopefully looks better now
thanku ^^
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That it does. You're welcome!
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YAY The first page is finally up! This looks like it could be really good. One thing I would change though: grammar. The text isn't so great.
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i suck at grammar.. tho hopefully looks better now
thanks ^^
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It looks much better now! Can't wait to see more of this comic
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Mmmm, just from the text here I would recommend asking around for a skilled editor, just to ensure the text has it's full power.
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edited it~
hopefully sounds better, i was typing really early in the morning
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"Tried" is still spelled as "Tired"
I probably sound like a git at this point, but as this is the first page of this comic and it looks like you're going to put a lot of work into the future pages it would be a shame to have any typos on the first page.
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LOL omg i notice this so late, will change now
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Nice opening bit of prose there; sets the scene nicely. C: And seeing this page definetely reminds me of the sketches I saw in July last year. (we should totally meet up again this summer)
The Twilight Palace looks particularly awesome here too btw! ;D
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thanks ^__^ im so glad ive finally got it up XD
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You're welcome. C: As am I; I look forward to seeing the rest of the pages~
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yush ^o^ slowly i am makin the pages,
also it would be totally awesome to meet again CX forgot to say in last comment *bricked*
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That's good. C: Be sure to take your time.
Awesome! We should definetely arrange something. haha, no worries
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