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anatiidae [2014-01-10 21:04:58 +0000 UTC]
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I adore that you've tried to draw a caiman- an animal that isn't common around DA , and you've done very well. I like when I see different things like this. 
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" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/> The 'dotty' brush used to shade the caiman in places gives a great scale definition, as does drawing a few of the scales as opposed to all of them. The ridges in the mouth are effective, and those jaws look deadly. You've done well anatomy-wise, I think. There is a lot of action in the image that gives great impact. The cat's very near miss with that caiman's jaws are quite thrilling, as are the silhouettes of the other battles taking place in the background; it's almost like full on caiman-cat war has broken out. The pose of the cat is great and also action-packed, and I love how the expression on the cat's face says the words of the title so well. The smudged effect on the fur details make them look like they're flowing with her fur, and it works well. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>
To further improve this piece, I would suggest making the lineart of the glowing patterns lighter than the glow to give it extra luminescence. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/> To illustrate what I mean, this 'GLOW!' sign's lines are lighter than the glow: www.hobbyglow.com/images/glow.… e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>
Overall, this is a lovely picture; keep up the good work. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>
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Lukia26 In reply to anatiidae [2014-01-10 22:00:41 +0000 UTC]
Thank you once again for your wonderful critique!! ;w; The assignment was the final event of the Caiman War, so it's awesome that you think that comes across well! I'm honored! ^^
This really means a lot to me, it seems a lot of what I wanted the picture to show has worked out pretty well!
OOOOOHHHH! Thank you so much, that is incredibly helpful X'D I'm still experimenting a lot with glows and lighting, so this is really great feedback! Your critiques are always so helpful! ;u; Thanks once again!
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anatiidae In reply to Lukia26 [2014-01-10 22:01:41 +0000 UTC]
No problem! ;D It's lovely!
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Lukia26 In reply to anatiidae [2014-01-10 22:15:56 +0000 UTC]
Aww thank you! You're so kind! >w<
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Fluffeh-Kat [2013-12-21 20:08:06 +0000 UTC]
CUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUTE! It's amazing! ^w^
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Lukia26 In reply to Fluffeh-Kat [2013-12-21 20:39:25 +0000 UTC]
Aaah thank you so much! ^.^
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Fluffeh-Kat In reply to Lukia26 [2013-12-21 20:39:52 +0000 UTC]
You're very welcome! ^w^
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Cwolf0615 [2013-12-18 17:36:20 +0000 UTC]
How did I not notice this till now?! IT LOOKS AMAZING! >:I
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Lukia26 In reply to Cwolf0615 [2013-12-18 17:53:30 +0000 UTC]
Aaah thank you! ;w; It was really quickly done, and I used a shading style I didn't like that much but thankssss ^^
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