Comments: 6
streetlights-candles [2008-12-13 18:04:19 +0000 UTC]
this is really beautiful. i like poems that don't need to say more.
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turbotyler [2008-12-13 09:02:12 +0000 UTC]
I think the line "when you saw me naked" kinda draws the mind to a different image then the poem is suppose to portrayed towards. But overall a marvelous poem that does as everyone else mentioned contain much emotion in little space.
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lwoodnj [2008-12-12 06:53:28 +0000 UTC]
I liked it at first. I like this less each time I read it though. Hmm...
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Gia-Seren [2008-12-12 05:31:49 +0000 UTC]
Did it become more real?
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atbarnett [2008-12-12 03:20:16 +0000 UTC]
I like the layers of emotion in just these few lines.
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