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Lynnelle — I
Published: 2007-06-13 23:14:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 235; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 1
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Description I’m writing this…

To clear my mind…
To get over…
To embark a new…

I’m stubborn
I’m ambitious
I’m an…

I have brown hair
I have brown eyes
An exotic laugh

I rarely smile
I used to daydream
I used to believe in fairytales

I’ve had experiences that changed my life
And those that remain to haunt me
I don’t regret a thing
Yet I ache to forget

When Alice asked the caterpillar…
I had forgotten how to chew
I had forgotten how to breathe

And sometimes…
I had forgotten the magic hour
The lovely break of dawn

I’ve been sucked into…
Oblivion
Just like so many times…
I…I…I

I had raged against myself
Instead of…
I feared concepts of thoughts
Sometimes…

I’ve been proposed too
Twice…
I felt like such an idiot
Endlessly…

I withheld many emotions
I only expressed a few
I had forgotten how to surrender
Until it hit me in the face

When I can’t sleep
As always…
I ask myself random questions
Certain memories…

A friend once said
If I died when I had to die…
Would I still kiss you and hold you
Would never know…

The green dress
The black eye shadow
The painted nails
The tainted lip gloss

I had undergone the trauma of thinking
I might miss you…
I might love…
I definitely hate…

What seems to be a struggle
Is a concept of letters
A concept of jammed thoughts
Projected through my iris
Through the images of yesterday

I would say
If I had written what I had thought
Why would the…
Why would the…
Why would the…
Clown

I write
It’s complicated
In my head
Because I refuse to forget
Because I want to capture the moment
Because I want to relive the emotions
Because…because…because…

Because I fear that someday
My thoughts
Would Climb out
Float away

Leave me…
There…
Just there…
Stuck in a spiral…
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Comments: 41

Bourji [2008-05-24 03:51:47 +0000 UTC]

I love this
It also reminds me of a little something I recently wrote. Sometimes we write things down to remind ourselves of who we really are.
Lovely.

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Lynnelle In reply to Bourji [2008-05-25 10:22:08 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

it's true we need to write these things to remember who we really are
Thanx again

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Bourji In reply to Lynnelle [2008-05-25 20:53:39 +0000 UTC]

Thank YOU

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ViviPhalloids [2007-06-21 19:26:48 +0000 UTC]

beautiful..... !!!!!! u sukd us in ur spiral.

a very reflective and haunting piece... ur amazing

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Lynnelle In reply to ViviPhalloids [2007-06-22 15:08:03 +0000 UTC]



Thank you so much sweetie

yes you're in my spiral

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corpsebride00 [2007-06-16 19:05:46 +0000 UTC]


i dono wat to say... so..

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Lynnelle In reply to corpsebride00 [2007-06-17 12:01:21 +0000 UTC]

hehe

Ok

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theredherring [2007-06-16 00:37:19 +0000 UTC]

I love you Lynn!

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Lynnelle In reply to theredherring [2007-06-16 13:02:45 +0000 UTC]

I love you too!!!!!



Thanx for the fav sweetie

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trifletrepidation [2007-06-14 17:40:23 +0000 UTC]

well i do love spirals...

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Lynnelle In reply to trifletrepidation [2007-06-14 22:13:09 +0000 UTC]

me too

care to join???

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petitemistress [2007-06-14 08:50:55 +0000 UTC]

i liked this a lot

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Lynnelle In reply to petitemistress [2007-06-14 10:52:57 +0000 UTC]

Thank you sweetie

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art176 [2007-06-14 06:34:06 +0000 UTC]

I read
I re read
I liked
I really liked

am I in the same spiral?

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Lynnelle In reply to art176 [2007-06-14 10:56:54 +0000 UTC]



I don't know are you? Then let me search for you in my spiral

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art176 In reply to Lynnelle [2007-06-14 15:39:01 +0000 UTC]

i asked the question first, and you are the talented writer...

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Lynnelle In reply to art176 [2007-06-14 15:46:21 +0000 UTC]

hehe you did and you consider me to a talented writer Thank you sweetie

And yes you are in my spiral

care to dance?

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art176 In reply to Lynnelle [2007-06-14 16:48:42 +0000 UTC]

i am pretty bad dancer (no rythm what so ever) what else can we do in your spiral?
and yes you are a talented writer

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Lynnelle In reply to art176 [2007-06-14 17:06:41 +0000 UTC]

I don't care if you're a bad dancer!!!! we can dance anyways

Oh and we can do many many things in spiral...just wait and see

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LouiseOdier [2007-06-14 03:12:14 +0000 UTC]

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Lynnelle In reply to LouiseOdier [2007-06-14 10:57:46 +0000 UTC]



Thanx for the fav sweetie

much appreciated

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LouiseOdier In reply to Lynnelle [2007-06-14 10:59:05 +0000 UTC]

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Lynnelle In reply to LouiseOdier [2007-06-14 11:00:51 +0000 UTC]

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LouiseOdier In reply to Lynnelle [2007-06-14 11:18:37 +0000 UTC]

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Lynnelle In reply to LouiseOdier [2007-06-14 11:21:43 +0000 UTC]

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fletchergull [2007-06-13 23:19:01 +0000 UTC]


this is one heck of a piece in here...
you're flaming lynnelle...
flaming...
my god spinning, spinning... and still spinning...

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Lynnelle In reply to fletchergull [2007-06-13 23:27:03 +0000 UTC]

Awwwwwww

thank you habiby



I'm kinda surprised it turned out that way

It was weird writing it in the first place

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fletchergull In reply to Lynnelle [2007-06-13 23:49:42 +0000 UTC]

weird in the most positive way one can think of...
and it turned out to be amazing...
fairytalish 3ala real tv 3ala mystery of the world...

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Lynnelle In reply to fletchergull [2007-06-13 23:51:31 +0000 UTC]

hahahahahhahahahhahaha

It is isn't it?

yalla as good as it gets

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fletchergull In reply to Lynnelle [2007-06-13 23:59:23 +0000 UTC]

the best it could get

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Lynnelle In reply to fletchergull [2007-06-14 00:00:24 +0000 UTC]



I guess nothing ever makes sense does it?

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fletchergull In reply to Lynnelle [2007-06-14 00:22:32 +0000 UTC]

everything does, in one way or the other...

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Lynnelle In reply to fletchergull [2007-06-14 10:58:38 +0000 UTC]

Then in that case...I'm happy

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fletchergull In reply to Lynnelle [2007-06-14 16:35:32 +0000 UTC]

then in that case... that makes two of us...

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Lynnelle In reply to fletchergull [2007-06-14 17:07:29 +0000 UTC]

yaaaaaaaaaay

I'm sooo happy!!!! yalla together

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fletchergull In reply to Lynnelle [2007-06-14 20:33:23 +0000 UTC]

it seems you spent your entire day at home on the pc?
dont you think you have somewhere ELSE to go, and some other THINGS to do

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Lynnelle In reply to fletchergull [2007-06-14 22:10:47 +0000 UTC]

I'll tell you all about it in a min

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fletchergull In reply to Lynnelle [2007-06-14 23:16:27 +0000 UTC]

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Lynnelle In reply to fletchergull [2007-06-14 23:17:37 +0000 UTC]

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fletchergull In reply to Lynnelle [2007-06-14 23:25:07 +0000 UTC]

love you add el deneh

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Lynnelle In reply to fletchergull [2007-06-15 13:20:35 +0000 UTC]

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