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Lynnelle — One Night
Published: 2007-05-02 22:48:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 78; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 2
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Description One night
Ages ago
I woke up thinking I had lost my hair

I thought of you
Wanted to hold you
To kiss you
To feel your skin
I missed you

I held my thoughts
My mind had been playing games
It wasn't the alcohol
Or the drugs
It wasn't a depression
Or any stupid form of antidepressant

I tore the wall covers
Cleared my desk
Disposed the nonsense that was surrounding me

I lit all the candles
Hugged the pillows
Did a little pagan dance
I couldn't picture you

I bit my nails in distress
Tried to listen to some music
I even tried to write
Nothing…nothing…

I lost you
Memories were too vague
Lost in some kind of trance
Buried deep inside

I went through your clothes
Those that were left
Your scent was gone

I searched the house
No trace of you
Not a single gesture

I counted my eye lashes in despair
You were gone
I was still here
Sitting here
Sleeping here
Daydreaming here
Foolishly waiting…here

One night
Tonight
I woke up
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Comments: 8

corpsebride00 [2007-05-05 19:33:07 +0000 UTC]

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Lynnelle In reply to corpsebride00 [2007-05-05 23:59:28 +0000 UTC]

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ViviPhalloids [2007-05-05 12:45:39 +0000 UTC]

im all messed up right now, n u manage to bring me even down-er !

very touching rly ... i love it . glad u wrote somthn new

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Lynnelle In reply to ViviPhalloids [2007-05-06 00:01:37 +0000 UTC]

So happy you liked it sweetie

But Noooooooo don't say "down-er" I prefer to create an "up-per" effect!

Thank you once again sweetie

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ViviPhalloids In reply to Lynnelle [2007-05-10 20:49:23 +0000 UTC]

hehehe

how u been ?? mis u !!

no prob

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Lynnelle In reply to ViviPhalloids [2007-05-14 19:27:11 +0000 UTC]

I'm ok been running around as usual

will get my cast out this week

miss you toooo

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intihaar [2007-05-02 23:14:06 +0000 UTC]

hi lynn,

touching piece; nice idea with the "one-night"-frame and interesting style with all the enumerations, though maybe too many of them. however, it flows. and sometimes it's maybe easier to wake up again if there's nothing left to remind you of those who you miss.

zahid

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Lynnelle In reply to intihaar [2007-05-03 11:40:02 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! I guess waking up is better than waiting

Thank you once again for your lovely comment

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