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Lynnelle — The Misreable Queen
Published: 2006-12-10 00:30:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 156; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 3
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Description "oh what a lovely night to dance" she said smiling
"how can you smile?" he said lighting another cigarette
"I fool myself" she said

"have you decided when to die?" he asked
"when the summer hits the bloom" she said smiling
"The leaves have turned grey" he said
"The birds are still sleeping" she said smiling
"You play the drama" he said throwing his cigarette away

She played with her hair
closed her eyes and sighed
Sang an old tune
played with one of her curls
smiled and opened her eyes

"will you join me?" she asked
"I'ld rather stay alone" he said lighting another cigarette
"I'll ponder around for a while" she said
"I'll join you when you decide to plunge" he said

they argue for a while
He pushes her into the ground
She just smiles
He walks away
She just lies there
Waiting for the sun to die

She stops smiling
stands up and walks away
"I'm the misreable queen
The one who would not stop smiling
The one who lost it all
the one who..."

She finds Him
Grabs his hand
Screams in his ears

"I dreamt of you the other day
I dreamt that you were sitting on my feet
I kissed your eyes
You turned all black
What a wonderful dream love"

She walks away
He stands there
Lights another cigarette
Waiting for the sun to die
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Comments: 20

TheOtherBunty [2006-12-13 10:34:44 +0000 UTC]

Wonderfully abstract and ambient

Have you ever read aaron belz?

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Lynnelle In reply to TheOtherBunty [2006-12-13 19:12:39 +0000 UTC]

No I haven't
I will look it up as soon as I can

Thank you
so happy you liked it

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TheOtherBunty In reply to Lynnelle [2006-12-16 12:38:45 +0000 UTC]

[link]

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Lynnelle In reply to TheOtherBunty [2006-12-19 00:25:35 +0000 UTC]



it's amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I will be reading some more

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vampireempress [2006-12-12 21:51:53 +0000 UTC]

Habibti inti. Bravo! That deserves a fav! will you do me a favour hon and keep smiling? I heard it's contagious and it will soon hit the most unwelcoming hearts. I had the chance to see your smile in person. Plant your seeds, they DO give a effect even if late.

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Lynnelle In reply to vampireempress [2006-12-12 23:39:03 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!!!!! That really really made me smile!!!!

thanks for the fav
I'll defenitely keep smiling

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da14u [2006-12-10 07:22:32 +0000 UTC]

mmmm

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da14u In reply to da14u [2006-12-11 06:14:54 +0000 UTC]

it has no meaning,,,,,its just mmmmm
yes i'm fine..when r u coming to leb...at what day?

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Lynnelle In reply to da14u [2006-12-13 21:11:43 +0000 UTC]

I'm coming back on the 17th of Dec

when are you coming back?

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da14u In reply to Lynnelle [2006-12-14 06:17:49 +0000 UTC]

well..sorry..bas ma 3am 2ol la 7adan
but i am sure i am coming after u and before xmas

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da14u In reply to da14u [2006-12-15 20:17:09 +0000 UTC]


lol..tekram 3aynek.. bas nshala we will meet

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Lynnelle In reply to da14u [2006-12-19 22:56:51 +0000 UTC]

akid we will

just tell me when you're back in the country

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Lynnelle In reply to da14u [2006-12-14 23:12:38 +0000 UTC]

hahahahahahahhaha ok as long as u get me somehting special

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Lynnelle In reply to da14u [2006-12-10 21:50:16 +0000 UTC]

I know I know it's weird

I can't read your "mmmm" meaning?

hope you're ok

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ZOtherOne [2006-12-10 05:19:50 +0000 UTC]

one of your best writings love !

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Lynnelle In reply to ZOtherOne [2006-12-10 21:38:54 +0000 UTC]



Thank you habiby!!!!!!
I'm so happy you liked it

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ZOtherOne In reply to Lynnelle [2006-12-11 19:19:12 +0000 UTC]

its amazing

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Lynnelle In reply to ZOtherOne [2006-12-11 20:47:04 +0000 UTC]

habiby!!!!! Thanx love

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theredherring [2006-12-10 02:50:57 +0000 UTC]

Interesting one!! Good job hun.

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Lynnelle In reply to theredherring [2006-12-10 21:30:50 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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