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Published: 2010-08-27 14:56:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 1298; Favourites: 32; Downloads: 24
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Description lolz, i drew something else than pokémon/Sonic stuff XD
i know i know, i bet i will get comments like "i tought you hated vocaloids/UTAUs!" and my answer to that is, i USED to, i accept it now, and Teto is my fave of them so lolz. AND i want to learn how to draw Manga! D:
i know it looks crappy byt LIVE WITH IT cause at the moment i can not do better. critiques please? so i know what to work on in the future TwT

and no, you may not recolor/edit/trace -w-;
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Metalilly1 [2010-10-10 04:14:48 +0000 UTC]

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Sutaru, I'm gonna be honest here ok? I must say this: This picture is........ is.......... INCREDIBLE! MARVELOUS! FABOULOUS! It is wayyyy better than some of my art e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/> The drawing was good, but the shading is FANTASTIC! I mean wow! This must of taken you hours to make this fantastic picture! I mean wow! Sutaru, youdid a good job on this picture and I think it's one of your best drawings you've made e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/> Heck, you might even inspire me to make a picture because of this picture! That's how good this picture this is! Ok, that's my opinion on this marvelous drawing! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/> Bye e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>

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Ribbons13 [2010-09-09 17:16:26 +0000 UTC]

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I think this is a very good job,even though i see a few things that can be approved.First,hands.I know they are hard and take a complicated,I have trouble with them too.But if you look at your hand you will see that the thumb does NOT go over the two fingers.Second,the drills- i mean Pigtails, they should have more of a curl to them and should look like they connect, not like rings overlaying eachother.

Other than these small details i think you did an outstanding job With eveything else, (I expecially like the backround)

Good luck and hope to see more from you,

Ribbons13

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LynxBot In reply to Ribbons13 [2010-09-09 20:57:39 +0000 UTC]

i know, hands are the part i fail the most at no matter what i'm drawing XDD i am going to sit down and only draw hands some day to learn XDD

that was the first time ever i tried to draw that kind of hair so, lolz XDD

thank you for the advice tou :3

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Ribbons13 In reply to LynxBot [2010-09-11 13:15:40 +0000 UTC]

It is fine i have trouble with hands too but i do try studying my own hand before i try a pose.But i am glad that i (at least tried) helped you out.

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LynxBot In reply to Ribbons13 [2010-09-11 13:33:28 +0000 UTC]

lolz, i do that from time to time, but not often cause i'm lazy xD

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zxfgio [2010-08-27 15:02:24 +0000 UTC]

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Well it is a very good picture of teto but i would have to say just kepp at it and you'll get much better at it! plus if i were you i would work on making the hands less like bigish and i would have to say the background sorta goes with the theme and sorta doesn't plus if you want my personal opnion it would look best with the "anime/manga" type shading they use but it just my opinion you dont have to do it if you dont want to e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a… " width="19" height="19" alt="" title="Sweating a little..."/> and i think the shirt came out quite well if this is 1 of your first tempts at drawing Teto then its a very good 1!

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Metalilly1 In reply to zxfgio [2010-10-10 04:23:00 +0000 UTC]

I thought the picture was AMAZING

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LynxBot In reply to zxfgio [2010-08-27 15:06:19 +0000 UTC]

lol yes, it is my first XD
it's my first manga picture in years so lol.

the hands looks messy, i know, that is one of the flaws i can point out aswell, i am stuck in the sonic style.

and no, i did not want to use that shading, i like this one better

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zxfgio In reply to LynxBot [2010-08-27 15:07:51 +0000 UTC]

I just said in my opion

plus i could tell

Yea thats the point of crits. to help you point out things but you mgiht already know but just tohers opions

x-x

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LynxBot In reply to zxfgio [2010-08-27 15:08:56 +0000 UTC]

lol

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zxfgio In reply to LynxBot [2010-08-27 15:10:16 +0000 UTC]

Muahaha... btw i have a favor to ask could you crit. on 1 of my works? you dont have to i just want someone's onpion on something i drew x-x

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LynxBot In reply to zxfgio [2010-08-27 15:11:20 +0000 UTC]

sure, if you link it

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zxfgio In reply to LynxBot [2010-08-27 15:20:23 +0000 UTC]

Here: [link]

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RoanaMasieDimwitty [2012-01-16 17:59:54 +0000 UTC]

That's adorable!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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LittleFunNut [2010-09-24 14:11:14 +0000 UTC]

Hmm...I think she kinda looks like she's in seedrian style.The chin should be a little bit sharp for girls,and the head shouldn't be too round.And I think you should make the body bigger.And the shading for the skin should be more pink-ish,and instead of highlights on the cheek,you should add blush(by he face,it looks like she'd need blush ).I;m making a b-day pic for Amy,and its a human drawing.Would you like me to upload the line art in a PS format for coloring practice?I'll color it later too.

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LynxBot In reply to LittleFunNut [2010-09-25 12:13:11 +0000 UTC]

i don't like blush D:
and no thank you. i don't want to color it, i don't even have a computer atm

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LittleFunNut In reply to LynxBot [2010-09-25 13:16:16 +0000 UTC]

Nether do I xc.But for some reason,its a important detail to the face and arms and legs.
Ok,I see.I read your journal,that was the same problem whit me once T^T.But try practicing whit pencils(the basic sketch,inking and even coloring).Its not that hard.
Hmmm...What kind of Photoshop do you use?CS4 ore CS5?Maybe I can help(Meh...I'm supper annoying)

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LynxBot In reply to LittleFunNut [2010-09-27 20:21:33 +0000 UTC]

lol no it's not inportant, trust me, i added blush to it and it looked horrible.
and i KNOW it's not hard, look at the rest of my gallery before complaining about my coloring please, this is not how i usually color. look at these before complaining
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and about the traditional stuff if that's what you meant
no, i will only sketch with pencils cause i do not have a scanner, coloring them would be a waste of time.

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LittleFunNut In reply to LynxBot [2010-09-27 21:40:49 +0000 UTC]

I didn't want to complain .I know you drew that wonderful stuff,I just didn't see you add too much detail(the coloring looks nice,but I think you should have added a bit more darker shades).And I'm sorry if it does sound like I complain ,but it did say in your artist comments "critiques please?".And yes,I know you can do way better,I just said what I think for this picture.

I said what could you try whit traditional,I don't know anything about your time,ore your personal life.

I'll shut up now .And,sorry again.

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shadnirafan3 [2010-09-02 20:38:26 +0000 UTC]

I wish IIII could draw like that!

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LynxBot In reply to shadnirafan3 [2010-09-03 13:58:24 +0000 UTC]

ehe, it's not that good to be honest XDD;;

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shadnirafan3 In reply to LynxBot [2010-09-03 20:06:36 +0000 UTC]

I can't even get CLOSE to that!

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LynxBot In reply to shadnirafan3 [2010-09-03 20:20:46 +0000 UTC]

all it takes is practise

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shadnirafan3 In reply to LynxBot [2010-09-03 20:24:28 +0000 UTC]

YAY!!

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VideoGameQueen64 [2010-08-29 02:02:21 +0000 UTC]

eee!!! Teto! ^^ lol welcome to the Vocaloid fandom ^^

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LynxBot In reply to VideoGameQueen64 [2010-08-29 10:17:27 +0000 UTC]

lawl x3 thanks XD

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xNosidex [2010-08-28 02:12:40 +0000 UTC]

Nice job

Have no clue where she comes from but i'm still clapping ^^

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LynxBot In reply to xNosidex [2010-08-28 09:41:05 +0000 UTC]

lol thank you :3

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xNosidex In reply to LynxBot [2010-08-28 13:56:49 +0000 UTC]

don't mention it X3

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Joohaan93 [2010-08-27 23:19:00 +0000 UTC]

Jag tycker inte du borde nervedera dig så mkt när det inte finns något fel alls på vissa saker. och det jag märker är att en del blir så besatta av att vara bra i något att dom glömmer att man gör saker och ting för att man tycker det är kul.
Bilden är fin och LIVE WITH IT! :3
sådär, antar att jag gjort mig hörd nu x)

Btw, TEETOOO <3

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LynxBot In reply to Joohaan93 [2010-08-28 09:41:50 +0000 UTC]

lol tack men jag vill att folk hittar fel på mina bilder så jag vet vad jag kan fixa D:

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Jblaze267 [2010-08-27 22:11:10 +0000 UTC]

i havent the first clue who she is or what she is from but this is adorable :3 the colours shading pose and expression are all great :3 you have a unique style of anime and its cute :3

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Jblaze267 [2010-08-27 22:10:46 +0000 UTC]

i havent the first clue who she is or what she is from but this is adorable :3 the colours shading pose and expression are all great :3 you have a unique style of anime and its cute :3

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LynxBot In reply to Jblaze267 [2010-08-28 09:34:15 +0000 UTC]

she is an Utaloid lawl

thank you :3

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Gardevoir-trainer [2010-08-27 22:08:39 +0000 UTC]

EPIC WIN!!!

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LynxBot In reply to Gardevoir-trainer [2010-08-28 09:34:28 +0000 UTC]

lol thank you but it's not that good xD

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Gardevoir-trainer In reply to LynxBot [2010-08-28 12:31:13 +0000 UTC]

I think it is. I would like to see other art like this.

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ScittyKitty [2010-08-27 20:54:22 +0000 UTC]

daw so cute! I love the style. ^^ i wish i had this much feedback on my other art. ;w;

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LynxBot In reply to ScittyKitty [2010-08-27 20:57:09 +0000 UTC]

aww thank tou :3
but i only get feedback on this one cause i complained, lolz

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ScittyKitty In reply to LynxBot [2010-08-27 21:01:35 +0000 UTC]

lol if i were to complain, no one would give a shit. LMAO

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LynxBot In reply to ScittyKitty [2010-08-27 21:04:19 +0000 UTC]

i would owo

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Sandette [2010-08-27 20:24:11 +0000 UTC]

Riktigt najs! Gillar hennes hår och kläder.

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LynxBot In reply to Sandette [2010-08-27 20:25:54 +0000 UTC]

ja hennes hår är sött XDD

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Marlowe-Smith [2010-08-27 20:22:55 +0000 UTC]

Good work on it Sutaru

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LynxBot In reply to Marlowe-Smith [2010-08-27 20:25:35 +0000 UTC]

lol thanks, but i want to be able to do better D: i need critiques D:

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PhyscoKitteh [2010-08-27 20:01:05 +0000 UTC]

YYAAYYY TETOOOO <3
she is win X3
LURRVVVV ITTTTT

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LynxBot In reply to PhyscoKitteh [2010-08-27 20:07:38 +0000 UTC]

yes she is >w<

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PhyscoKitteh In reply to LynxBot [2010-08-27 20:42:24 +0000 UTC]

I love ALL your work >w<

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LynxBot In reply to PhyscoKitteh [2010-08-27 20:42:47 +0000 UTC]

thank you :3

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PhyscoKitteh In reply to LynxBot [2010-08-27 20:44:01 +0000 UTC]

Welcome :3

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