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Published: 2016-04-23 16:01:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 560; Favourites: 28; Downloads: 0
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follow me on facebook for exclusive sketches/drawings!Phew~ I should actually call it "finished Lineart with tonal base"
But as this is a friends character I can't offer the lineart for coloring Sorry about that *hides*
It's hilarious how long it takes me to do Lineart. I just can't do normal lineart without any difference in stroke size. No! It has to be super super complex to please me
I'm going to enter my colorphase now.. Or at least I try. Coloring is so much fun but I'm not pleased with my coloring skills
Hope you like ti :3
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made with Manga Studio 5 (Clip Studio Paint).
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Comments: 30
why do i like this better than the finished one? XD
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Oh, I can agree with this 
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true! that's also one reason why i love to sketch ;D
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beep
XD Nice work here! ALso, I think you draw AWESOMELY!!!
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beep!
I think food is awesome. And a foodparty even more badass!
So, you are awesome too! *got*s distracted by the username*
But I'm really happy you like it c:
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Thanks!!
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You can add them to any journal or status update and of course in comments . Just click the "add media" button below the textbox and click on "emoticons". You'll find tons of them in there
Use the search box to find something xD
I personally love llamas the most
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Oh ok! (YAY I FOUND PUSHEEN THE CAT!!) Llamas are cute !
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Oh my uh... those two other project comments listed absolutely everything I has in mind...
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I know that feeling! Every time I want to comment something, it goes like this: Goes to the groups gallery - sees a interesting picture - wants to comment it - already 3 comments there - leaves silently.
But I appreciate the thought
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It happens too often! Thanks for noticing me!
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This is for ProjectComment projectcomment.deviantart.com/ Let us begin.
For lineart, this is pretty good. The perspective, angles, and proportions of the body are all captured splendidly, and I can see the hair most of all. I can tell that a lot of detail went into the hair. Also, the sword is a nice touch. Sure, it's a katana, but hey; that's still a good a feature. I also like the knee and shoulder armor. That's a neat feature.
I'd probably say the lining itself is the best feature. There doesn't seem to be anything bleeding into anything else, and nothing is too straight or too wavy. Nicely done.
But I'm going to have to be critical on a few things. First off, the face of the dog warrior: Is that it's face in human/anthro form, or is it a mask? The way it looks makes it seem like plaster, what with the eyes being blank, yet it has the traces of being an anthro. That really needs to be worked on in the colored version.
Next, the legs look far longer than the body. And on the body, we can't see the armor. We can see the shoulder pads, sure, but not the armor on the torso. It's kind of... odd, that way.
Finally, forgive me for saying this in case that was your intention, but the hair and armor look like Inuyasha crossed with Naruto. Those are definitely NOT, I repeat NOT anime you'd want to associate your character design with in this age. I mean, the full body suit, the knee pads, the boots, the sword and knives, the knee pack, it's definitely Naruto-styled. And the hair? I'm not repeating the other anime's name again.
So, yes; this is a mixed bag. A very, very mixed bag. A lot of potential, but with some revision, it could be incredible. See you later!
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Whee, so many words ! Thank you for taking your time and commenting it 
Well, his head. It's mask but thank your for pointing it out, that it looks like a anthro-head. I'll just add details when coloring (that's why the eyes are blank too). Good to know!
And you just crushed my selfconfidence to pieces! xD I had tons of reference-photos from different batman-games and motorcycle-suits and his lore next to me, while drawing this and I'm actually not quite familiar with naruto. Just watched some episodes, when I was kid . This is crazy . A close friend to me said something like "it looks like a anbu" and I was like "what the heck is an anbu?" and I googled it and yeah . WTF! No need to apologize for pointing it out, 'cause you're right but it's rather funny I didn't know how they looked like. And at this point I had already drawn it and put to much effort in it to discard the lineart and start from new. This is just crazy
Haha, but anyway thank you!
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This lineart you have created is just 
It's so clean and precise ^^
The armor on the character is pretty cool-looking
The pose is firm, doesn't appear to be leaning on anything. This is awesome
You're talented ^_^
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Thank you so much for taking your time and commenting
I really appreciate it
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Clean and crisp line-work... Love it! You can clearly see that you put alot of time in to it.
I wouldn't' have the patients to do it cose when im trying to do clean line-art >>"draws a line, presses undo... draws the same line, presses undo... 2 hours later... draws the same line... ahhhh... that will do..."
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"draws a line, presses undo... draws the same line, presses undo... 2 hours later... draws the same line... ahhhh... that will do..." XD BEST COMMENT EVER! But I must admit, it's kinda like it oo
Thank you
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hehe You're welcome! Most artist got similar struggles...
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das sieht so cool aus *-*
aber eine frage: wie schaffst du es dass die linien so gerade sind?
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In MS gibt es bei fast allen Stiften/Pinseln/Airbrush-dings die Option "Stabilization". Da wird deine gezeichnete Linie quasi nochmal nachbearbeitet. Für Lineart hab ich das meistens ziemlich hoch (auf 30) und für normales Coloring auf 5 oder 6 . Wie sehr es dann lagt und hinterherhinkt kommt dann drauf an, wie stark dein PC ist C: Teste einfach mal ein paar Werte aus
Hihi, freut mich, wenn es dir gefällt
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Aahhhh das ja cool! Danke!
Ich werd mich echt mal so bald wie möglich wieder dran setzten was am PC zu malen.
Und wird es von dieses Bild auch noch colorieren?
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Ja! Ich bin definitiv gespannt, was du als nächstes zeichnest C:
Und ja - ich arbeite grad an der Colo . Aber ich colorier es diesmal komplett anders (vom workflow her) und mal schauen, ob das was wird.
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hehe :3 gib mir nur ein bisschen zeit
UUHH *-* ich bin mir sicher dass das mege gut werden wird!!!!
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