TheYellowstoneWay [2012-01-31 04:38:38 +0000 UTC]
Overall
Vision
Originality
Technique
Impact
Vision and originality, about as good as I could hope for, just short of the eurieka moment.
Technique, rather good, however a few things bug me. The overhead glass...its one piece...looks cool but wouldn't be practical. The door, behind the front seats? Just that I am sure would violate safety requirements. The lights look too deep to be very effective, and not far enough appart. For safty alone, I think the lights should be nearer the edge of the vehicle. Look at the front seats, whats right next to them? A wall, you couldn't see to turn, whoops? If you ran into the back of the truck, the back would be high enough that the impact would be just a few feet in front of the drivers, I doubt that would allow for adequet crunch space. All wheels need splash gards, the rear one desperatly needs it...just think how high mud and rocks could be flung otherwise. I see the door handels, looks like you are sugesting suicide doors...besides being harder to get into, I think its no longer legal (safety standards.) No mirrors to see whats behind you, or on your sides? Perhalps just a little luggage storage space? Perhaps behind the rear seats?
Uh, woa, that was more than just a few things....sorry. Impact was lessened by those designing complaints I just mentioned. Otherwise, I am impressed! For some reason I am thinking of somthing from Star Wars. Is this submersible?
Personally I would like too see a couple small and low fog lights, and the lights far apart. Also for cars behind you, I think the two front wheels should have blinker lights, and brake lights. Also back up lights somewhere.
Ciritical though it may be, that is my critique: Brilliant, too cool, in need of a few adjustments.
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CajunMom79 [2012-02-25 23:04:36 +0000 UTC]
Very original concept - even if some aspects are less the practical. Only thing I think should be tweaked would be how much light you used it the render - the glass is so reflective that you can barely see the seats within the car. Also, maybe turn down the shiny red mat just a touch.
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sherwi [2012-01-31 05:50:59 +0000 UTC]
sweet design,maby add some detail to da lights
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