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Commission forHer OC Sorren
(if anyone can spot whats wrong with the legs do tell so i can fix it...
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regarding the legs:
the lower part of both legs seem a tad too long, a little more so on the right leg (right leg from our perspective)
the right foot (once again from our viewpoint) feels like it needs to pushed up the canvas a bit more, because of perspective.
You might also want to put an emphasis crease where the toes bend from the rest of the foot, to show that she's on her tippy-toes (if that was what you were going for) . Right now it seems like both her feet is straight but the backs of the feet are off the ground...so she's semi-levitating i guess, which makes it look off.
I would suggest emphasizing the crease on the right foot, but to redraw the foot to be more flat on the ground.
That shadows on the ground also seem to be a tad off, but that might just be me.
(these suggestions were from my own observations, im just a junior in highschool with no formal anatomy lessons, mostly just reading books and internet charts on my free time, so it might not be right at all.)
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Ahh thank you very much, originally I did have her left leg (right in out view) behind her but i couldnt get it to look correct enough, but i will try fixing it using your suggestions. Thank you for the help
Btw congrats on the contest ^^
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oh just a quick correction on my first post:
"I would suggest emphasizing the crease on the right foot, but to redraw the LEFT foot to be more flat on the ground.
That shadows on the ground also seem to be a tad off, but that might just be me. " (forgot to put in 'left')
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Alrighty, i'll keep it in mind when i can change it
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left and right from our perspective.
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oh yeah,and thanks for the fav on my ninja
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You're welcome, i really liked the action poses too those caught my attention (i have a knack for dynamic stuff)
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Damn, she's cute. I like her clothing style, and specially her hair style too.
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crap im late seeing this i see the legs look alot better and i love the hair i said that before but i wanted to say it again
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lmao
Yeah i love the hair too
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Oooh gosh! You made Sorren look so cool! The legs look perfectly fine, by the way!
Thank you so so much!
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Very happy you like it ^^
You're very welcome
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I don't see anything wrong with the legs, personally ;w;
I love this <33333
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maybe a slight curve on the right leg but you can leave it like this, 'cause she got long boots on!! Leave it, I love this drawing a LOT
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that's different from your regular. space age sort.
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She originated from the Star Wars universe ^^
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no flaws on legs, seems like they're right where they're supposed to be
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Her legs look good to me O:
Also it is nice to see u draw a girl different from MK
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Im glad to hear you think so, i think i re-did them about 7 times >.<
And yepp it is ^^
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DAMN XD
Me too i can re-do something over and over until im happy with it
Good job on it
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