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L3monJuic3 [2012-04-09 16:48:34 +0000 UTC]
regarding the legs:
the lower part of both legs seem a tad too long, a little more so on the right leg (right leg from our perspective)
the right foot (once again from our viewpoint) feels like it needs to pushed up the canvas a bit more, because of perspective.
You might also want to put an emphasis crease where the toes bend from the rest of the foot, to show that she's on her tippy-toes (if that was what you were going for) . Right now it seems like both her feet is straight but the backs of the feet are off the ground...so she's semi-levitating i guess, which makes it look off.
I would suggest emphasizing the crease on the right foot, but to redraw the foot to be more flat on the ground.
That shadows on the ground also seem to be a tad off, but that might just be me.
(these suggestions were from my own observations, im just a junior in highschool with no formal anatomy lessons, mostly just reading books and internet charts on my free time, so it might not be right at all.)
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L3monJuic3 In reply to MadiBlitz [2012-04-09 16:57:04 +0000 UTC]
oh just a quick correction on my first post:
"I would suggest emphasizing the crease on the right foot, but to redraw the LEFT foot to be more flat on the ground.
That shadows on the ground also seem to be a tad off, but that might just be me. " (forgot to put in 'left')
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L3monJuic3 In reply to L3monJuic3 [2012-04-09 16:57:39 +0000 UTC]
left and right from our perspective.
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MadiBlitz In reply to L3monJuic3 [2012-04-09 17:04:32 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome, i really liked the action poses too those caught my attention (i have a knack for dynamic stuff)
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DeadCobra [2012-04-03 12:14:14 +0000 UTC]
Shes nice
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MotorRoach [2012-04-02 21:34:57 +0000 UTC]
Damn, she's cute. I like her clothing style, and specially her hair style too.
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fatguy88 [2012-04-02 20:49:57 +0000 UTC]
crap im late seeing this i see the legs look alot better and i love the hair i said that before but i wanted to say it again
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lirodon In reply to MadiBlitz [2012-04-02 05:47:42 +0000 UTC]
Ask Subject, she'll know.
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dualomniblades [2012-04-02 04:02:05 +0000 UTC]
Oooh gosh! You made Sorren look so cool! The legs look perfectly fine, by the way!
Thank you so so much!
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NatyHibou [2012-04-02 03:27:36 +0000 UTC]
I don't see anything wrong with the legs, personally ;w;
I love this <33333
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superhermit [2012-04-02 02:10:24 +0000 UTC]
It screams star wars
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mortalshinobi [2012-04-02 01:49:09 +0000 UTC]
that's different from your regular. space age sort.
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MadiBlitz In reply to mortalshinobi [2012-04-02 05:01:23 +0000 UTC]
She originated from the Star Wars universe ^^
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SaiSaotome [2012-04-01 22:42:44 +0000 UTC]
really great
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Mel-Desu [2012-04-01 22:23:21 +0000 UTC]
<33 She LOOKS AMAZING~~
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MadiBlitz In reply to xxCuteEmmyxx [2012-04-01 22:22:58 +0000 UTC]
Im glad to hear you think so, i think i re-did them about 7 times >.<
And yepp it is ^^
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