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maelinn — Alone
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Published: 2006-12-03 21:59:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 1320; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 24
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He told her to meet him at the tree,
he'll be waiting with a dozen roses.
But she didn't forgive him,
and the thorn grazed her fingers,
covering them with blood of his treason...
She didnt know, he wanted to be with her.
At the tree where they first met. in his mind,
shedding a tear was not an option.
Nevertheless, she cried,
near the tree which had seen them loving.
The thorns of the rose sank into her flesh,
as she thought of him,
swearing not to see him anymore...
He never thought in his wildest dreams,
that he could lose the one he had loved for so long.
However, he had to move away.
as painful as it was, it was beyond his control.
She would of loved so much to change their destiny.
But it was too late now.
She watched as the petals run away on the lake,
going away from her as her only love did as well...
Thanks to who wrote this little story with me, and corrected my mistakes
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Comments: 31
hey,morgane it is a very good work and I wish u give me a bit of ur time and take a look at my gallery to see my stuff
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J'aime beaucoup
C'est dommage que la fleur parait trop "digitale" (c'est pas une vraie fleur hein ?)
Et les pétales qui flottent sur l'eau sont un ptit peu grandes par rapport à la rose il me semble.
M'enfin, en somme c'est du très beau boulot, bravo !
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Merci 
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Ah bonn ?! c'est bizarre, on dirait vraiment une rose faite avec un programme 3D. Mouai, c'est peut-être le contraste, mais j'suis même pas sûr... j'sais pas comment ça se fait ^^
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Je suis trop forte quand même 
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ça m'intrigue c't'histoire ^^
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Je ne sais pas quoi répondre... J'ai augmenté le contraste, ajouté de la densité et plusieurs textures (en fait des calques de couleur). J'ai aussi diminué le bruit et aussi utilisé l'outil doigt... PLus d'autres choses sans doute
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t'as été timide alors avec toutes ces manip' ... j'ai pas tout de suite remarqué la différence
Sinon je passerais bien un ptit coup d'orange dessus, juste la rose... Ses couleurs sont, me semble-t-il, trop à l'écart par rapport au reste de l'oeuvre... tu trouves pas ?
- Rappel : j'ai pas forcément raison -
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lol ! mais non, par rapport à la photo d'origine
Possible que les couleurs ne soient pas juste... Je vais voir... Jouer sur le calque avec la balance des couleurs alors ? J'essaie.
Et t'as pas forcément raison ? Tu m'étonnes
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ahhh tout bon maintenant !
J'aime bcp n'empêche
je crois qu'on peut dire : [Affaire Close] !
(enfin moi en tout cas, je n'ai rien à rajouter! 
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"But she didn't forgive him, and grazed her fingers, covering them with blood of his treason..."
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"she didnt know, he wanted to be with her. at the tree where they first met. in his mind, shedding a tear was not an option."
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Nevertheless, she cried, near the tree which had seen them loving. The thorns of the rose sinked in her flesh, she thought of him, swearing don't see him anymore...
(sorry for my english, hum...)
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"he never thought in his wildest dreams, that he could lose the one he had loved for so long. however, he had to move away. as painful as it was, it was beyond his control."
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She 'd had loved so much change their destiny. But it was too late now. She watched the petals run away on the lake, going away from her as her only love...
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Thanks for your kind support dear, i really appreciate it
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