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Zabchan [2011-01-25 19:54:27 +0000 UTC]
sorry, i'm not usually so harsh in my critiques, but it said you asked for a well-rounded response....
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Zabchan [2011-01-25 19:53:08 +0000 UTC]
the art quality of the monster-pin is 3 times better than plain-pin. I think it's because on the monster you got more of a chance to show off subtle shading techniques and the monsterpin's composition is over all better, probably because you have him cropped interestingly and he fills the space more dynamically. right-side pin doesn fill the space quite as well, and sadly all that negative space calls out how you put his neck and face off center and that neck is probably too long as well. I do like the highlighights in his hair and it adds some visual interest that that side is sorely lacking. even though tristepin doesnt have a traditional human face, i think you could have given it more depth and shading, say, defining his lips or his brow ridges. maybe you could have tristepin smiling with teeth in the right one instead, providing another comparison point to his 'dark side' and adding more visual complexity to his face.
another option is to set tristepin at a slight overhead angle to match the set of the monster's shoulders. another great way to enhance that light vs dark side feeling youre going for is to align their eyes at the same height. it would provide a point of comparison and create a stronger connection between the two for the viewer.
The canson grey paper is brilliant for mimicking monster-pin's skin and adds a great texture. I particularly like the shading of his jaw and teeth. you really get a sense of the weight of that jaw, helped even more by the excellent line variation and quality. that's probably my favorite aspect of the overall piece, is the skillfully rendered lines that add a whole 'nother layer of quality to the drawing. I can honestly say I am jealous of those lines. my drawings tend to have shaky-sketchy lines i'm trying to train myself out of.
i hope you do more sketches in this medium, you really have a knack for the material!
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Maiden-Chynna In reply to Zabchan [2011-01-26 03:22:14 +0000 UTC]
Yes I do agree that monster Tristepin was more fun to do and better looking.
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XeonaAquaine [2009-10-20 13:08:12 +0000 UTC]
This is really cool! Also I love the coloring and shading with the grey paper. C:
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AdisCrow [2009-05-18 23:27:19 +0000 UTC]
The shading and depth of colour look amazing--what did you use?
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Maiden-Chynna In reply to AdisCrow [2009-05-18 23:34:46 +0000 UTC]
I used Prisma colored pencils on grey paper. Not sure what kind of paper it is exactly. Thank you!
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AdisCrow In reply to Maiden-Chynna [2009-05-18 23:37:20 +0000 UTC]
Hwah, that must have taken for-ever. -doesn't have that kind of patience- My pleasure!
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Wilkoak [2009-05-17 12:00:12 +0000 UTC]
Wow! Colors really went out brilliant! And i really like the monster. Fine shading. What kind of pencils or so did you use?
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Maiden-Chynna In reply to Wilkoak [2009-05-18 01:18:57 +0000 UTC]
THanks! I used Prisma colors.
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Maiden-Chynna In reply to Wilkoak [2009-05-18 20:05:29 +0000 UTC]
there... IS ALWAYS THE INTERNET!
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Maiden-Chynna In reply to Wilkoak [2009-05-20 01:55:52 +0000 UTC]
(*shrug* never used Ebay.)
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Wilkoak In reply to Maiden-Chynna [2009-05-20 18:25:26 +0000 UTC]
(why? do you have other selling sites?)
we have this thing... >_<
[link]
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Maiden-Chynna In reply to Wilkoak [2009-05-20 23:06:19 +0000 UTC]
Yes, Amazon.
I don't buy online cause i'm not old enough to. I have to be 18. So if I ever need anything, I tell mom and she buys it, ushaly from amazon.
And ebay you can't really buy, you have to auction, and buying is easier.
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Wilkoak In reply to Maiden-Chynna [2009-05-21 18:31:49 +0000 UTC]
But auction can be cheaper and you can find interesting things ;>
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Tristepin [2009-05-16 13:48:06 +0000 UTC]
OH yeah, I look more then awesome in that picture! *Stabs monster side*
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Maiden-Chynna In reply to Tristepin [2009-05-16 14:09:01 +0000 UTC]
Your jsut jealosu that side is prettier then you. 8P
Jk, your beautifull man.
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