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Luigiluva11 [2011-01-19 05:43:39 +0000 UTC]
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Ok ok ok, now, I commented on the little picture of just Kurt, didn't comment on the one with Logan and Blaine, BUT I am going to review THIS ONE.
Yes, you're background is lacking. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title="Wink/Razz"/> But at least you know that. I like the little random blurps of (fireworks?) lights in the background out the windows. ;D I also love how you colored this, loving the shading on Kurt's and Blaine's outfits and I love Blaine's 'OMGKURTLIKESMEBACKFANGASM' expression. It's very well drawn, I envy the wonderful drawing aspects of it.
I wanted to see this scene drawn, and I have to say I'm happy about it. Only problem I can see is (cept for the background) is Kurt's hair color. I love how it's chaded, and all, but I imagine it a little darker. Don't listen to that though, I just feel the need to find something wrong with this.
I'm glad it doesn't look too cluttered too. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/>
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Luigiluva11 In reply to Maitia [2011-01-19 23:15:29 +0000 UTC]
No problem at all! I love writing critiques!
No problem at all, seriously, I'm glad that you drew it! Haha, I remembered that there were fireworks in the story, and I clicked the two together.
Yeah.
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mayasong [2011-03-18 06:17:29 +0000 UTC]
RAWR, look at kurt <3. GOSH, you drew him so adorably. That incredible blush just adds so much to the expression.
Blaine's expression makes me smile~ So damn happy. I can almost feel his heart beating wildly against his chest 'cause he's so excited 8D. But I'm kind of wishing we could see Logan's expression... maybe something for a head shot picture? >w> *nudge* *nudge*
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magnus-xox [2011-01-20 23:19:53 +0000 UTC]
I would love to write a critique, but sans premium membership, I can't so I'm going to do it here.
Alright, so first off, I have never read this fanfiction before but I can tell exactly what is happening in this scene from your picture (that is an AMAZING thing, just so you know.) The backround may be plain, but I think it suits this picture very well, as your eyes are now focused on the drama happening in the front. I like how the one boy (I believe his name is Logan) is turned inward for it gives it a kind of flair and makes it seem more like a real photograph. I adore Kurt's expression. There is so much emotion in that face, I cannot stand looking at it for too long. That is some very good craftsmanship there.
However, I am personally not a big fan of Blaine's face. I find it very lacking compared to Kurts. In any other picture, I would look perfectly fine but I think it's a bit too almost cartoon-y for this one. I do still enjoy the face, I would just prefer something a bit different, that's all.
Overall, this is a very nice piece of art and is something I look forward to seeing again and again.
Im not gonna do the star things cuz I'm lazy
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Maitia In reply to magnus-xox [2011-01-22 01:10:10 +0000 UTC]
Thanks.
It did. I was sort of just vaguely unsure about Blaine, but your critique made me look critically at him and realise what was wrong.
And I also felt the need to draw Blaine or, well, Darren, so that's what I'm doing now. I've actually got quite far, so I may post a wip of it i an hour or so.
Man, that dude has some wonderfully thick eyebrows!
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equinewolf [2011-01-19 05:49:09 +0000 UTC]
I love this! Kurt looks so adorable =3
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Maitia In reply to fantasylover42 [2011-01-19 23:41:48 +0000 UTC]
I'm right in the middle of my post-horribly-long-workday-stress-out therapy. First step is watching AVPM on youtube, second step is DA-ing for a bit and next I'm going to read some Dalton. Mmmmm... so relaxing....
I'm not really that much of a gamer. I dunno. I just think reading, fanart and fangirling in general are more my thing.
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Maitia In reply to fantasylover42 [2011-01-20 00:00:57 +0000 UTC]
Oh, well I don't have any brothers to rub off on me. Don't have any sisters, either. Hence the massive amount of reading and fantasizing about being the ruler of the world.
I would like to have a big brother. Don't know why, exactly, but I just would.
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