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Published: 2017-06-02 02:57:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 520; Favourites: 38; Downloads: 0
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Description Edit: I can't believe no ones noticed it but... look at Emil's wrist bands.
Ohhh shit boi! I'm back! I probably spent too much time on this.

"Don't think about them Emil, you'll always have me. I'll always be there to help you. Give me the chance to heal your heart Emil. Emil? Emil!"

'Never give up, even if they bring you down for what you are. Even if they stab you, play you, burn you, break you, no matter what happens to you there will always be a person out there! Waiting for you to give them a chance to love you! You may never know, maybe that person could be right in front of you.'

"It doesn't matter what you are Emil! You're my little sister! I'll love you no matter what!"

Wtf is this cringy shit I wrote? When was I literate exactly?
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Comments: 8

SuperSarcosmic [2017-06-02 05:37:02 +0000 UTC]

I took a look at your Draw This Again from December and... wow. You're only 13 this year but you made this? Nice job!! Looks like you learned a lot from drawing every day. Keep it up!  

If you don't mind some critique, please try looking at references more - the arms of the brown-haired character are very short and don't show the perspective you wanted, their face is oddly vertically squashed (especially compared to how well-drawn the other character is), and both their breasts are huge, covering pretty much their entire ribs (which is way too much for most people, particularly of such slight stature). 

Other than that, I rather like this! The way you drew the flaxen-haired character's hair and face is really, really nice. I really like the way their hair is layered and flows. And the colors are very mature, cohesive, and atmospheric. Great job, overall! 

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MakuHatsune19 In reply to SuperSarcosmic [2017-06-02 06:08:52 +0000 UTC]

Ah Thank you thank you very much! Yes only 13 years and made this it's very surprising I know and Finally some criticism I was waiting for it!

But anyways yes I don't mind any critiques just like it says on my page! I'll get to work on using references for arms and anatomy [I knew something was wrong with her arm] and yes I know her breast basically cover their entire rib cage, I'm still trying my best to get out of my anime style of drawing even though I knew breast weren't that big in real life but it's like I'm fighting with myself, one part of me is saying 'draw them small' then the other is just like 'NOooo draw them big animu tits'. 

Thank you! Ever since I changed my style a bit hair has the way I draw hair has changed drastically and hair flowing just naturally came over like, okay the hair I want it like this then it can also turn out the exact way I want it to. And because I've always been looking at hair for a good portion of my life. As for colors I don't really know how I can make it look like that anyway.   

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IAmNoxArt [2017-06-02 03:54:04 +0000 UTC]

i see a lot of improvement
Good Work! ^^

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MakuHatsune19 In reply to IAmNoxArt [2017-06-02 04:22:01 +0000 UTC]

Thank you dear!   
I didn't realize it was that much improvement I just drew every day then, yeah just went from there.   

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IAmNoxArt In reply to MakuHatsune19 [2017-06-04 20:00:12 +0000 UTC]

thats the spirit keep it going ^^

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Dashigriffins [2017-06-02 03:06:18 +0000 UTC]

Ahhhh i love it!!!!

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MakuHatsune19 In reply to Dashigriffins [2017-06-02 03:11:47 +0000 UTC]

Ahah Thank you darling!    

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Dashigriffins In reply to MakuHatsune19 [2017-06-02 03:24:03 +0000 UTC]

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