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Published: 2004-04-01 21:29:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 3414; Favourites: 88; Downloads: 700
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Err well I was in a bit of a random mood. So I drew this. Very quick drawing, hence the messyness and general lack of detail of it.---
In dreams I've felt this all before
In dreams it lived for ever more
No dream do I walk here today
I've felt it pass and fade away
Just one more step, just one
For me the final dream's begun
I'll make the jump, I'll step and fall
I hear it beckoning, its call
Life is behind, now look ahead
To where the dreams of life have led.
Just one more step, just one
For me the final dream's begun
Just one more step... just one...
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Right. Now please don't flame going on saying this is a depressing poem thing. It's not meant to be. It's not meant to be about suicide. Not in the bad way. Argh. Nevermind. I AM in an odd mood so there
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freakin amazing colors
remembers me to the book "New Moon" from Stephenie meyers...twilight series....wont tell ya what happens....>.<
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i really love this 
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It's so pretty...I love the way she has her arms out..it made me smile. The poem with it is beautiful also. Excellent Job!!
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I like it. The picture is really cool looking, and the colors work really well. The poem I think is great, both in construction and emotion. I didn't think that it was depressing, it seemed to be more of a feeling of freedom than depression. Nice work.
-Vetch
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I like the title too.. just makes me fall off into daydreams
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this is wonderful. the colours are really warm. it makes me feel happy
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It's nice. I like the water and the light on the water.
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I think this reminds me of the Ring.. maybe. Except for the grass, which was obviously quickly done, this looks really beautiful. That sunset is so rich. I like how the sun reflects off of the clouds and the light siloettes the girl.
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Her left arm looks a bit too long, but really the pic is amazing. Very warm.
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The drawing is great and the poem just adds to it. very nice.
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I didnt assume your poem was depressing in any way *hugs* and the artwork matches the peice perfectly, with its lacking of detail with its messy lines, it sutes the poem perfectly.
Not the best writter myself but I wouldnt worrie, it still soundsgood tome and I really do like it,it shows alot of character ( in a good way)
*hugs*
Keep up the great work
~Chicka
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i simply adore the sketchiness of it, the colors are beautiful...... it just strikes me...
and then... the poem... to me, it's beautiful.
"Life is behind, now look ahead
To where the dreams of life have led." - this means...so much. I'm useless at putting things into words. let's just say... yup, it means a lot.
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Messy?!?! That what makes me love it 
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wow that is soo beautiful!!! i just have to fav it
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Quick drawing? QUICK?! Damn; this is SO gorgeous.. if this is your idea of a QUICK drawing; you're f'in amazing. Wow. o__o *Worships*
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Ooooo...
I like it!
It looks like a real paiting...
Lovely poem too! :3
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Beautiful poem -and- picture! I love the poem... I don't think of it depressing, but more of a happier thought... I don't know, when I read it in my head the little voice thing was happy, which made the poem and picture happy...
yes.
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That's good
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beautiful..
wish one could do someting similar.. sigh..
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what lack of detail?, it looks gorgeus to me, and thatΒ΄s a lovely poem btw...
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i don't think its depressing, it's kinda like a leap of faith..... like in Indiana Jones.....
Oh well maybe im tired and and reading to far into this.
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*hug* Only a depressive could interpret that as suicide.
It's like transcendance. Malta, you're getting better every second. I love the way you did the reflations on water. THe lighti is just plain mindboggling. Such perfect composition, the way the gold just touches the clouds...
*cuddles*
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aww... so purdy... *wants to jump into the sunset*
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OMG that beautiful. I can't stop looking at that sky
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If you think that has no detail then you dont wanna see my artwork o_o
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Hmmm...I bet it would be fun to jump into the sunset.
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The colors you used for the sunset are so pretty and you blended them so nicely!
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Well, for a quick doodle I'd say this looks incredible. The whole thing has a soothing mood. I love the use of colors. Nicely done.
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When I first read the poem, it sounded like suicide, but when I read it again I could think of something else it could mean, but I can't quite describe it. But very nice poem and picture. I love how the picture has a mysterious, yet peaceful feel to it.
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=o___o= pretty...
I love the colours...it's got such a warm feel to it.
Ever watched Moulin Rouge? Cuz Satine's version of "One Day I'll Fly Away" is going through my head while looking at this. Mmmmm....delicious.
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It's beautiful, both the poem and the image representing it.
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I love it! ^^ Its beautiful, I love the colors in general. It doesn't look like a sad/depressing/suicidal picture to me.. More like a happy innocent childhood. Anywho.. Awesome job.
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