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Malthinae β€” Chocolate Milk
Published: 2009-04-08 18:31:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 164; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Description Kaeru had just bought himself a cup of warm choco and walked towards the park. Within the gates of the park, he walked towards his favourite spot to enjoy the sky, the weather and his choco. But before he could do so, a smaller, blonde boy bumped into him. He was breathing heavy, panting a little and had a panicking look in his eyes. The boy mumbled a fast and little "sorry" and wanted to run further, but Kaeru gently grabbed the boy's wrist.
"Relax, ok? Why are you in such a hurry? What are you running-"
Even before he could finish what he was saying, a group of three kids around their age came running towards them. When the blonde boy noticed the three, he tried to pull his wrist loose. Tears appeared in his eyes.
"Let go! Let go, I tell you! They're gonna do something to you too if you don't watch out! Why won't you let me go, damnit!" The boy seemed really angry now but had almost stopped struggling to get his wrist back. Though Kaeru didn't really notice. He just looked at the boys with surprise. He recognised two of them from when he was younger. The surprise slowly started changing into anger.
The three boys arrived at Kaeru and the blonde boy, which still didn't have his wrist back.
"Kaeru!" the leader said grinning, "Long time no see! Now, will you be so nice to give that little spoiled kid back to us? Because, if you don't, I'm afraid that we'd have to use violence against you too. And as far as I remember, you didn't really enjoy that now, did you?"
Kaeru let go of the boy's wrist and made himself as big as possible. The boy, meanwhile, hid behind Kaeru's back, holding his t-shirt. The leader of the three kids snickered.
"Thinking you're really something, frog boy?! You wanna fight us yourself? How were you planning to do thΓ‘t? By jumping around us?" The two other kids laughed, but Kaeru's face only grew darker, which seemed to irritate their leader even more.
"Geez, stupid toad! Move over!" The kid started to run up to him, with one fist ready to hit something. Kaeru let his cup of warm choco fall (which he was still able to save till now) and catched the boy's fist with one hand, though the power behind it almost threw him over, which made the blonde boy ran away a few meters. Then Kaeru raised his own fist and hit the kid right on his nose, still holding the fist with his other hand. The bone in the nose broke and the boy screamed it out. This made the other two come in action. One of them tried to tackle Kaeru, but he was able to avoid that attack. But the other took that chance to hit Kaeru on the side of his face, and he blacked out.

When he awoke again, Kaeru was in a white, big and luxurous bedroom. He had only barely opened his eyes, and the blonde boy from before already almost lay on top of him, arms wrapped around his neck and seconds away from crying out of happiness.
"Ohh, you're awake! I'm so glad you're alive! You really saved me out there, you were so heroic!"
Kaeru grinned, though the voice in his ear only made his headache worse.
"Young sir," a serene voice sounded, "come, let him go. We're sure he's safe now so let him rest a little more."
"Ah, yeah," the boy answered and let go of Kaeru. "I'm sorry.. He's right, you should rest."
Kaeru smiled a little. "Oh, it's alright. I'm glad you're concerned.."
Just when the boy wanted to get up from the bed, Kaeru thought of something.
"Ah! How were we able to get out of there? I mean.. I blacked out.."
"Yeah," the boy mumbled. "Not too long after you blacked out, Elen found us, or me, back and got rid of those boys."
While talking, the boy pointed to a long elf in the other corner of the room.
"It was only my duty," the elf gently replied.
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Comments: 8

insanityXfromXwithin [2009-04-09 08:35:56 +0000 UTC]

I hope the next part will appear soon! I wanna know how it continues!

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Malthinae In reply to insanityXfromXwithin [2009-04-09 14:02:30 +0000 UTC]

... Which means that you liked it..? xD

The next part is way less spectaculair though.. It only explains a little more about who is who and how it ends

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insanityXfromXwithin In reply to Malthinae [2009-04-10 07:32:09 +0000 UTC]

yes I really liked it!
I'm still curious about the ending even though you say it less spectaculair!

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Malthinae In reply to insanityXfromXwithin [2009-04-10 13:44:21 +0000 UTC]

8D

Thankyoouuu~~!!!

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Merenwen-luinwee [2009-04-08 22:32:13 +0000 UTC]

I like
I hope the sequal comes soon.
you have a neck for creating quite misterious stories though

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Malthinae In reply to Merenwen-luinwee [2009-04-09 14:04:06 +0000 UTC]

I have this feeling that if I don't make them somewhat mysterious, they're boring as hell
In the original, I already made mister Elf say Lune's name out loud once.. Though I didn't like his name being revealed already so I made it "Sir" instead of "Lune"

Thanks for liking

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Merenwen-luinwee In reply to Malthinae [2009-04-09 17:21:49 +0000 UTC]

well that depends, in short stories it's nice to have a little mysterie, if you're gonna build them out into longer stories we'll have to know more

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Malthinae In reply to Merenwen-luinwee [2009-04-09 18:25:51 +0000 UTC]

I wasn't planning on writing a book, so that'll be fine

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