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Malvino β Battle scene
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Published: 2007-02-26 19:43:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 1606; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 23
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this is a big battle scene between human and orcs, i've made this cover for an italian game campaign about a gw game, all subjects are based on gw backgrounds!give me some feedback!
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Dio, cosa darei per avere la pazienza e la bravura nel fare il chiaroscuro che hai tu!!
Subito nei 
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You are an awesome artist! Great style. It all looks really good.
Except for one thing!
It is really difficult to realize what is going on in the picture.
In your used style, there is nothing that separates the foreground from the background. It all mingles together and the viewer has to concentrate hard to recognize where one person ends and another person (or object) begins.
You should try to find a means with which to highlight more important parts of the picture.
For example, I have the impression that the two human riders in the foreground (one in full armor, the other with a fanciful hat) are more important than all others behind them. Thus you should try to find a way to contrast them from the surrounding scenario and also from one another, which will be hard because one is directly behind the other.
Of course, it is a very normal condition that an observer is not able to quickly make out details in a battlefield. But in your picture it becomes even harder due to the lack of colors.
On another note. Since you used colored paper for the work, I think it would be a good idea to draw highlights with a white colored pencil.
A good example is this [link]
done by voya [link]
I hope that is in any way helpful!?
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thanks so much ! you are allright! now i'm working with graphic tablet and soon i show you my new works with decent hoghlights!
thanks for precious links!
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Come cavo fai a nn perderti con così tanti particolari e dettagli???
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grazie remus hai visto che bello il copyright!?...
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Questa scena di battaglia Γ¨ spettacolare.
mi piace un sacco il tratto morbido e la dinamicitΓ del tutto... uhm... come sempre, del resto!
ciaoz!
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thanks k'dar troppo buono! quando ho letto che grazie a me hai continuato a disegnare mi è scesa una lacrimuccia!...ma solo perchè mi era entrata una bruschetta nell'occhio!
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troppo buono, ma de che?
comunque, Γ¨ tutto vero, probabilmente sarei persino rimasto a copiare i manga della mia collezione >.>
(meno bruschette al peperoncino la prossima volta, mi raccomando! 
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Awesome. It's just a pity that this picture has so much detail and so low resolution and I cannot zoom it to see it all. But I think the composition is well-there are two fighting sides, chaos everywhere, two leaders giving orders... in short a nice battle
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thanks you have understand my real intentions about this work!
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thanks my dwarf friend!
i have some pics of details in particular...i can post in this page more than one pic!?
so i show you!
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i've upload a detaliled image but i've lost the original how can i post two or more pics!? please i'm newbie!
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You have to paste them together in Photoshop if you want to submit them both at once. Or you could submit two separate pics of the details.
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yeah you are riìght! thanks for suggestions!
ah! the dwarfish wisdom!
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ies many detalis but i think that these works has no a great coerency between the figures...sigh i must study hard composition!...
thanks to you edwin!
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