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Published: 2009-09-28 03:57:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 2038; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 36
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an example of bad perspective drawing...I think I made it wrong so I have to redraw it. uargh...
Iām not good with dynamic movements. have to get new angles and of course new expression. I'm getting tired with this gloomy drawings... can't be helped though...
flaws:
perspective,
unidentified object on the girl's left hand
, the guy's tooo big...
and it's still a sad drawing... i want big grins...
cheap marker and drawing pen on used copy paper...
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I love your works ...This expression is amazing ^^
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hmm...
sebenere dari mataku seh perspektif gak masalah...
karna itu style kamu
cuma leher si cowo emang kegedean
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sudah memperhatikan berulang-ulang... keliatannya gede banget yah... oke itu jadi satu poin lagi yang mesti diperbaiki...
Thank You Gita...
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wah mba lagi2 saya salutin karena gbr mcm gini yg bwt seorang prmpuan...hoo
klo soal angle sy plg demen sm style perspektifnya naruto sm onepiece...perspektif nya gk realistis (brlebihan) cm jd trlihat asyik n keren...
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Terima kasiiih...
setujuuu angle Naruto dan One piece emang asik banget. kadang bisa buat bentuk pandangannya berupa bola, dilhat dari teropong...
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ya mrka slah satu inspirasi saya huhu...
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ummm gimana ya? hubungannya agak aneh. Bukan musuhan cuma yang cewek (namanya Nina) memang takut sama si lelaki dan orang2 di sekitar si lelaki. Si lelaki ingin Nina kembali jadi kadang suka terkesan musuhan.
cerita lengkapnya nanti dulu yah...
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thank you...
teruslah beri gw masukan, bang... gw lagi butuh tamparan nih...
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eksperimen lo sih salut lah gwe dengan perspektif segala macem,tapi yah itu...jangan sampe ngebuat elemen penting macem piso itu jadi gak jelas
sebenernya sih bisa lo buat tuh peso terlempar gitu
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Iya itu dia... kadang suka lupa mana yang jadi fokusnya... Terlalu mengeksploitasi sampingan, intinya malah sembunyi...
Thank you Fan....
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ada baiknya bikin sketchnya lama
yang penting jadinya sesuai harapan
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the girl's grip on the knife. need some correction too, i think...
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Is it too loose?
I guess the grip is not strong enough to wound some one.
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mm..its not about strong enough to wound or not..
its just look unusual.
with that grip, i think the blade shuld be facing upward (mata pisonya madep ke atas)
aaargh.. i dunno.. the angle n perspective are so confusing...
get someone do that pose for u may be help...
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Ah begitu toh...
(capek pake bahasa Inggris, maaf 
thank you for the suggestion... 
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anda adalah selamat datang....
(capek bahasa inggris juga. lho?
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iya... seharusnya lebih keliatan biar lebih jelas...
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I can see the flaws in this, certainly--though I find it is mostly with the man's shoulder. His neck gives one the idea that his body should be bigger overall.
Despite this though, your linework is good and the execution is better than average. C: If you'd like a more in-depth crit, I can give you one if you wish.
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sure, please do... because I have to redraw this and if I don't do it right I'll have to redraw it again...
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gah! stop speaking so poorly of your own work, its excellent!
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