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Spacegryphon [2020-03-21 17:30:53 +0000 UTC]

Hi there from ProjectComment

The CV-pandemic is wreaking havoc across the world, that's why I'm making this short (time is precious): Your picture is good on the anatomy, nothing to complain here. Overall values are also very good, lights and shades are placed very effectively. Maybe the iris/pupil of her eye could go a little darker. And add some highlights to the eye, that will make the woman look more alive, I presume.
If I can give you some advice, I'd go and smoothen out the brush strokes. That would enhance the quality drastically. Also, work a little on the hair. Now it looks like straws.

Anyway, that's it for today! Keep up the good work!

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DamiannHXavier [2020-03-20 08:53:12 +0000 UTC]

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JustALittleAmerican [2020-03-19 15:04:17 +0000 UTC]

Nice job on the hair man.

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jdmorart [2020-03-19 01:59:17 +0000 UTC]

very cool work, I like the waves on the hair and the values are on point, one suggestion its that maybe you can try to avoid highlights on the sweater to match, the light of the fold below her chest matches the light in the fold of her arm, at first sight this makes it looks like a whole but after a second you can see the difference from chest and arm, sorry for my bad english I hope it makes sense, and keep the good work going on!

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