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Violet-flowers [2014-11-23 00:15:56 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


I would like to start of by saying I really enjoy the concept and the composition of the piece. Normally I would say to move the camera over to the left a bit so it takes care of the "rule of thirds" but for this photo I don't think it would have made a difference negatively or positively. I really love how the background outside the window is blurred because it brings more attention back to her. However If this had a wider depth of field inside the building, with the items on the wall and the booth behind her not being blurred I feel that it would really just make this photo flawless.

I hope you found this critique fair and helpful. I am just starting taking photography so I don't know everything please keep that in mind.

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coacherik [2015-11-13 17:31:03 +0000 UTC]

She is so beautiful... Reminds me of the little place in Rome.

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whitestone [2015-09-01 22:23:01 +0000 UTC]

This shows the magic of medium format!
Beautiful shot!

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williamson13 [2015-06-02 00:32:20 +0000 UTC]

Love this shot,
the smile on the subjects face,
the detail of her immediate surrounding
and the rest of the background is blurred.
finally I love the position of the flower on her table.
Fantastic work.Β  Β Β Β 

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InCenter [2014-12-01 03:42:47 +0000 UTC]

Such Beauty Transcends Peace...

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mecengineer [2014-11-27 18:39:36 +0000 UTC]

impressive

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Marcellyne In reply to mecengineer [2014-11-27 18:49:56 +0000 UTC]

Thank You

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Noekkvadis [2014-11-25 08:25:01 +0000 UTC]

What a beautyful girl. Seems like she is waiting for someone and he/she come right in time, she looks happy about it. Is it a romance?
I like the blur effects too and the decision to keep it black/white.

Very GJ.

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Marcellyne In reply to Noekkvadis [2014-11-26 20:50:33 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot Now that you mention it, it does look like that, maybe because of the surroundings.

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Chazzier [2014-11-24 00:54:50 +0000 UTC]

Nice photo.

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pearwood [2014-11-23 20:12:23 +0000 UTC]

Depth of field is perfect.Β  With all the stuff around there's no question what the focus of the photograph is.Β  The fact that she is beautiful certainly doesn't hurt.
Steve

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Marcellyne In reply to pearwood [2014-11-26 20:48:06 +0000 UTC]

Thnak you, I'm gald it came out that way

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AlisterThatchel [2014-11-23 19:54:24 +0000 UTC]

Such a wonderful picture! Β The girl in the picture reminds me of one of my cousins when she was younger

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Marcellyne In reply to AlisterThatchel [2014-11-26 20:48:38 +0000 UTC]

She must look nice I'm glad you like the photo

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AlisterThatchel In reply to Marcellyne [2014-11-26 22:03:26 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, she's pretty, and of course I like the photo; it's awesome

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avidart87 [2014-11-23 18:05:01 +0000 UTC]

gorgeous

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TAGFoto [2014-11-23 16:37:41 +0000 UTC]

Nice work, good DOF (I like the window), good contrast, etc. Well done.

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SAVALISTE [2014-11-23 02:07:22 +0000 UTC]

great portrait!

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Marcellyne In reply to SAVALISTE [2014-11-28 15:00:49 +0000 UTC]

Β model will be glad!

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NINA-SOARES [2014-11-23 01:03:35 +0000 UTC]

Romantic photo...beautiful.

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Marcellyne In reply to NINA-SOARES [2014-11-28 15:00:24 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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NINA-SOARES In reply to Marcellyne [2014-12-01 22:07:00 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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SabakuNoShi [2014-11-22 23:40:04 +0000 UTC]

To Ty jesteΕ›?

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Marcellyne In reply to SabakuNoShi [2014-11-26 19:45:09 +0000 UTC]

Oj nie Modelka!

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SabakuNoShi In reply to Marcellyne [2014-11-26 20:09:20 +0000 UTC]

PrzekaΕΌ w takim razie, ΕΌe super wyglΔ…da

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Marcellyne In reply to SabakuNoShi [2014-11-26 20:44:14 +0000 UTC]

Dobrze, powiem jej

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SabakuNoShi In reply to Marcellyne [2014-11-26 20:53:03 +0000 UTC]

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Minato-Kushina [2014-11-22 23:33:41 +0000 UTC]

Such a lovely model!!

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Marcellyne In reply to Minato-Kushina [2014-11-28 15:00:08 +0000 UTC]

I agree!

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Jenny42 [2014-11-22 22:15:22 +0000 UTC]

I just love everything about this!

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Dancing-Miriam [2014-11-22 21:28:16 +0000 UTC]

O Boziu to Ty? . /////////////////. 'Β 

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Marcellyne In reply to Dancing-Miriam [2014-11-26 19:45:43 +0000 UTC]

Nie, poprosilam ja o zapozowanie mi
Moim przeznaczeniem jest pozostac po tej jednej stronie aparatu.

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Dancing-Miriam In reply to Marcellyne [2014-11-28 14:45:14 +0000 UTC]

AAa rozumiem! : DΒ 
ale dlaczegoo!!! D: <Β 

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CarlosAE [2014-11-22 20:39:24 +0000 UTC]

Neat emotive photo. ^^

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DaddyHoggy [2014-11-22 19:59:47 +0000 UTC]

I love the sharp detail of the model and her surroundings compared to the pale softness of the background through the window.

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Marcellyne In reply to DaddyHoggy [2014-11-26 20:49:10 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, it took a bit of trying to get it that way, good to know it worked

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DaddyHoggy In reply to Marcellyne [2014-11-26 22:24:53 +0000 UTC]

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SelfieFan [2014-11-22 19:34:08 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful photo and model.

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DaisukeAlexandria [2014-11-22 19:20:07 +0000 UTC]

AWESOME! AWESOME! AWESOME PHOTO!!!!!

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Marcellyne In reply to DaisukeAlexandria [2014-11-22 19:26:37 +0000 UTC]

Thank You!Β  Β 

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DaisukeAlexandria In reply to Marcellyne [2014-11-22 19:39:26 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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Friendofox [2014-11-22 19:14:10 +0000 UTC]

Whoa, is this actually drawn?! This looks so amazing! A amazing example of what you could do with a simple pencil.

*edit* Oh, I jut read it's a photo. It still looks great!Β 

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Marcellyne In reply to Friendofox [2014-11-22 19:15:22 +0000 UTC]

This is a photo

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Friendofox In reply to Marcellyne [2014-11-22 19:16:06 +0000 UTC]

Yes, I just realised! But still, great resolution and just a amazing picture! ^^

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