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Femfan1 [2016-07-26 03:58:00 +0000 UTC]
Hi, I found your image through and really enjoyed the subject matter.
Your positioning of the foreground dancer and the blurriness or uneven nature of some of the lines really gives the image a sense of flow and movement that immediately suggested that she was dancing. The white specks on the dark background add to that freewheeling sense of dynamism that make me think of flashing lights in a dark club or even light reflecting off raindrops outside at night. The positioning of the background woman, more tightly drawn into her space, with a more static pose, does not identify her as another dancer, however. If not for the title, she might as easily be somebody watching the other girl dance or preparing to take a photo of the foreground girl. A more dynamic pose for her would really identify the image as being "Dancers," plural. Nevertheless, whether dancer and watcher or just dancer, the overall impact was to leave me smiling at the carefree feel that the image evokes.
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KidtheCat [2016-07-25 01:23:01 +0000 UTC]
The detail of this deviation caught my attention. I like the small splashes of white paint around the two women. The different shades of the skin tone give the woman in front more detail. I like how you put in a lot of attention into the red piece of cloth. The line on the woman’s back give more detail. But, I’m curious to why are there spots of white on the woman? I think the reason why the woman wearing the black swimming suit doesn’t have shading, it’s because the woman wearing the straw hat is the main focus here. The detail on this deviation is what made this great.
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KidtheCat In reply to MarcoPellino [2016-07-25 12:48:54 +0000 UTC]
No, but I believe it’s unnecessary detail. What is legibility in your definition?
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MagicFanny [2016-07-25 00:59:44 +0000 UTC]
drops? wow you are hard core how long did it take?
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MagicFanny In reply to MarcoPellino [2016-07-25 18:46:18 +0000 UTC]
lol im so sorry for your laptop. btw that is an awesome idea I never thought to use a toothbrush I always just used my paint brush but it wasn't stiff enough to make dots like that. I think you just gave me a new way of painting stars and stuff.
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