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AttitudeAbout half an hour later, everyone was up and in the dining room. The kids were chattering about how they would train today; Blaze and Blizzard were teasing Spark over his messed up fur and sleepy eyes; Shadow, Celia and Raven were cooking some French toast; Inferno was discussing with his father and Lightning; in short, everyone was doing their usual business. Jerry entered the room and stared at this huge family all in the same room at the same time, happy to see them again. When he sat down, the children's heads turned to face him. They started asking him countless questions:
-Wow mister, how come your rings are green?
-Were you born like this?
-Your tail is fluffier than mine, is that normal?
-How'd you get here?
-Onikuro, be more polite!
-What's your name?
-Are you one of grandpa's friends?
-Why'd you get in my room last night?
Unable to answer a question without another one being asked, he turned his head to stare at Spark, who just shrugged.
-They're kinda right you know, the Jolteon said. We have no idea who you are, so it's natural everyone asks you.
-B-but Spark... Everything we lived... Jerry let out.
"Wait, that's right!" Jerry remembered. "Since I'm in his past, he didn't meet me yet! Akarui isn't here, so it's proof I'm in the past!"
-Everything we lived? Spark asked. What do you mean?
-It's nothing, Jerry replied. Say, where's Mikazuki? I haven't seen her.
Silence fell around the dining table. Jerry watched around, confused at the Pokémons' reaction.
-What is it? he asked. Did I say something wrong?
-Mika was kidnapped two days ago, Bolt said. We're training to go get her back.
-I'm so sorry Bolt...
-How? Blizzard suddenly asked. You seem to know us all, while we never saw you! Who are you?
-I'm Jerry, the Umbreon replied. And the reason I know you all is because... Um...
-Well? Aqua asked, an impatient look on her face. Explain yourself.
-I already visited you... in your future.
-... He must have a screw loose in his head, Lightning whispered as he leaned towards Inferno before being elbowed in his hip by his mate.
-In our future? Aqua asked. You think I'll buy that?
-It's true! Ask Shadow!
-Shadow?
-Do you mind if I read your mind, Jerry? the Umbreon asked. It's just to make sure you're not lying.
-Just don't go too deep, there are some things I'd like to keep to myself, Jerry blushed.
Shadow chuckled before his rings started glowing a little brighter. He searched Jerry's mind, coming across some funny anecdotes before finally finding what he was looking for. Jerry had come to their house, but there were some Pokémon Shadow didn't know. A Flareon Jerry knew as Hector, a Glaceon Jerry knew as Crystal, a young Eevee known as Ryko, a young yellow Shinx named Hikari and a young Jolteon named Akarui.
-He's telling the truth, Shadow finally said, his mental excursion over. There are a couple new kids too.
-Really? Storm asked, her eyes glittering. Are they healthy? Are they cute?
-Yes ma'am, Jerry answered for Shadow. They were all healthy and very cute.
-That's good to hear.
-So you're some kind or time travelling Pokémon? Pyro asked. Are you like Celebi?
-No, not time travel, more like world travel, Jerry answered.
-You lost me there, Spark let out.
-There are many different worlds that co-exist, Jerry explained. They're all linked though by portals.
-Portals? Zeke asked. Like a point where you can teleport something to another place?
-Yup. They can teleport anything they touch to a different place or world.
-So, you're saying that's how you got here? Kiba asked.
-Couldn't you have chosen a better place to appear than Kira's room? Aqua grumbled.
-I can't control portals. It's really hard in theory, and I'm really bad at it... I'm lucky I even ended up in your world in the first place.
-So why did you come? Neka asked.
-When I came for the first time, which is in your future, you told me I had already came from my future, so I needed to come to maintain the space-time continuum.
-Such hard words... Spark let out, his head dizzy. Space-time continuum?
-To put it simply, if I hadn't come, your world could have been altered.
-And what about what you tried to do to Axel? Aqua asked, a menacing look in her eyes.
-Aqua, please calm down, Raven asked from the kitchen. You of all Pokémon should know Axel sleepwalks. He probably ended up downstairs by accident.
-Thank you mister Raven, Jerry said.
-S-so you're not a pervert? the Vaporeon asked.
-I told you I'm not! Jerry protested.
Aqua suddenly got up and went towards Jerry. When she was next to him, she stared at him straight in the eyes. Jerry was cowering and trying to hide behind Spark, afraid of the Vaporeon's reaction. Aqua took a deep breath before bowing her head to Jerry, leaving him bewildered.
-I'm sorry I misjudged you, the Vaporeon apologized. I tried to protect my children without thinking you might not be a threat to them.
-Um... Eh... It's alright I guess... the green ringed Umbreon said. But that blast last night hurt!
-I'm sorry about that, Aqua blushed.
-I think you're the first one to have been able to make Aqua mad, Kiba commented. I've never seen her act like this before.
-I didn't try to!
-Um, Mister Jerry? Koneka asked.
-Uh... you're Koneka, right? the Umbreon asked back. What is it?
-Why are your eyes and rings green? Were you born like this?
-I don't know and no, I wasn't born like this. I was...
-Breakfast's ready! Shadow and Celia happily said as they came in the dining room, dozens of plates floating around them.
Both psychics settled the plates of French toasts in front of every Pokémon. Jerry stared at them, hunger in his eyes.
-Oh, it's been so long since I ate your food! the Umbreon exclaimed. Shadow, you're the best cook I know!
-Thanks Jerry, Shadow chuckled.
-Could you show us how a portal works Mister Jerry? Onikuro asked, enthusiastic.
-Um... well... I guess I could, Onikuro.
-Can anyone open them? Shadow asked as he finally sat next to his mate after everyone was served.
-That's what I was told, though it's probably harder for others.
-Okay, I think everyone should let Jerry breathe a little, Raven chuckled. I know you're all very curious, but let him time to think for himself a little!
-Thank you Mister Raven! Jerry said before digging his muzzle in the warm French toasts, making everyone laugh.
After eating breakfast, the children all went outside to play before training. Koneka and Kira were watching Axel, Onikuro, Marik and Snowy pouncing on themselves like little kids. Zeke didn't want to join, fearing he might hurt someone or get hurt, while Hope just watched them and laughed at the boys' clumsiness. Koneka was about to join the wrestling boys when Snowy told her to back off.
-Why not? the Purrloin asked. I always do it with Oni and Marik!
-Yeah, but you could get hurt with now, Snowy replied.
-And you couldn't? Kira asked as she got closer.
-Girls are softer than boys after all, the newly evolved Glaceon arrogantly said.
-Oh really? Koneka growled. Want to test?
-I won't fight you Koneka, Snowy chuckled. It'd be too easy.
-How 'bout both of us? Kira asked, staring at Snowy with dark eyes.
-Come on girls! I got Articuno on my side, remember? And you still want to fight me?
-If we can make you shut your sexist trap we will! the two cousins shouted.
-...Those two scare me sometimes, Marik commented.
-Yeah... Axel added.
The three Pokémon got positioned for their battle; Koneka and Kira on one side of the battlefield, Snowy on the other side. The rest of the children, along with a couple of adults who came outside to see what was going on, sat in a circle around the "arena".
-Why do Koneka and Kira look so worked up? Shadow asked as he sat next to his sons.
-They got in an argument with Snowy and they want to prove girls are as strong as boys, Marik explained.
-Oh boy, Snowy's in trouble, Pyro, who was sitting close, chuckled.
-What is it Uncle? Onikuro asked, confused.
-There's nothing more dangerous than an angry girl, the Flareon laughed.
-I hope I'm not interrupting anything, Celia said as she kissed Pyro's cheek before sitting.
-Not at all.
-Daddy! Celest yelled as she jumped on her father's back, hugging his neck.
-Hi sweetie, was your breakfast good?
-Hum hum! the Eevee nodded.
Marik and Onikuro giggled at their little cousin's wide grin. They were happy at least someone in the family was able to keep their smile even with the current situation.
-Did I hear right about what's happening? Emmi asked. Snowy said girls aren't as tough as boys?
-Koneka and Kira are already going to prove the contrary to Snowy, Marik said.
-It's going to be an interesting battle, Onikuro commented.
-Are you still sure you want to do this? Snowy taunted. There's still time to give up!
-Not in a million years, Koneka replied.
-We'll show you just how strong we are, Kira added.
-That doesn't change that I have a god's protection, Snowy bragged.
Annoyed by the arrogant Glaceon, Koneka charged forward, dark energy surrounding her scythe-like tail. Kira followed her cousin, preparing herself for a Water Pulse attack. Snowy smirked, ice shooting out of the ground to hold the two girls in place. Kira and Koneka tried to get free, but the ice was too strong.
-You lost pretty quickly, the Glaceon smirked.
-Shut up, Snowy! Kira shouted as she built up energy inside her and shot a Scald attack, making the ice start to melt.
"You're not getting away!" the Glaceon told himself as he ran to his two cousins, ice spikes floating around him. Before he could get to them, they freed themselves from the weakened ice and both jumped on Snowy, making him fall over.
-Get off me! Snowy yelled, his paws flailing.
Kira ignored him as she shot a Water Gun on Snowy, wetting him from the ears to the tip of his tail. The wet Glaceon stared at her with angry eyes.
-Oh, ha ha, very funny, he let out.
Snowy was about to retaliate when he felt a shiver shake his whole body. "Wh-what's happening?" the Glaceon thought as the shivers multiplied. Ice suddenly started forming on his fur, making it difficult for him to move. Snowy tried shoving his cousins off of him, but moving with the ice covering him was too tiring for him.
-What's the matter? Kira taunted. Can't get up?
-Shut up! the trapped Glaceon retorted. If that ice wasn't there I'd...
-You still lost, Snowy, Koneka interrupted. Want me to help you? she added with the same smile Snowy was giving them a couple of minutes ago.
-Grr...
Koneka gathered eerie energy in her paw and carefully thawed the ice off the Glaceon. Snowy tried jumping on her afterwards, but the Purrloin pinned him down on the ground, an annoyed look in her eyes.
-We beat you fair and square, and we want you to apologize, the devious Pokémon required.
-I don't need to apologize to you! Snowy protested.
-Koneka didn't need to get you out of that ice either, Kira replied.
-And I didn't ask for her help!
-Snowy, stop being so childish, Emmi sighed as she stepped forward. You tried to prove you were stronger and lost, apologize and get over it.
-Just so you know, we're a lot on Kira and Koneka's side, Leaf added. A lot more than you think.
All the girls, including Storm, stepped forward and circled Snowy. The young Glaceon looked around, intimidated by the females' angry stares. He tried fleeing, but the girls weren't going to let him go that easily.
-You girls know what we should do? Storm said, a mischievous smile on her lips.
-Are you thinking what I'm thinking? Leaf asked.
-Makeover time!
-NO!!!!! Snowy yelled as he was dragged in the house by the female Pokémons of his family. I'M SORRY, I SWEAR!
-You deserve that, Axel chuckled. Maybe you'll have better manners.
-COME ON! ONI HELP ME!!
-Sorry Snowy, you know what they say, the Umbreon said with a wink at his uncle Pyro.
-There's nothing more dangerous than an angry girl, the Flareon laughed out loud.
-I think I disagree, Lightning chuckled as he got closer to his brother in law. A bunch of them is worse!
-...Wow... Jerry let out at the sight of the begging Glaceon being dragged inside. Any idea what they're going to do to him Spark?
-Yeah, the Jolteon shivered. They'll make him suffer.
-By the way Shadow, Blaze started as she came closer. Could you tell Yami to come here?
-Sure, what is it?
-Could you explain what happened and tell him I'd like it if we were able to show Snowy some manners.
The Ninetales got closer to her Umbreon friend. She whispered something to his ears, making his eyes widen.
-Are you sure it's a good idea? Shadow asked, worried.
-Did you see how he treated Kira and Koneka? the Ninetales replied. Your own daughter! And he targeted all of us girls and...
-Okay okay, I understand. Just make sure he believes it's you.
-No problem with that, Blaze winked as she ran back inside.
-Waah! Snowy yelled as he was pushed in his room, the girls surrounding him.
-So, what should we start with? Kira asked.
-I say we curl his dangling thingies! Koneka shouted.
-Don't worry Snowy, it won't hurt, Blizzard told her son.
-Why do I have to go through this? the young Glaceon whined.
-Maybe next time you'll think twice before being so cocky, Leaf answered.
-Leaf's right, Snowy, Aqua said. By saying that, you could have degraded them.
-I got the curlers, Storm proudly said as she pushed two pink cylinders closer.
After having the adults' authorisation, Kira and Koneka, along with Hope, started rolling the tufts of fur on the sides of Snowy's head, making him growl at the same time.
-Oh, you'll be so cute, Koneka taunted.
-You're lucky the door's guarded, the Glaceon grumbled, Blaze smiling to him when she heard his comment.
The girls continued curling the Glaceon's tufts of fur. After it was done, they proceeded to fluff his fur up. First off, Aqua and Kira made sure to wet Snowy with their Water Gun attacks from top to bottom. After the Glaceon had been sprayed water on, Blaze moved closer to him, raising the air's temperature to make Snowy's fur dry. Despite being short, the Glaceon's fur started curling uncontrollably, giving him a puffed up look.
-Awwww, the girls let out, making Snowy blush.
-Okay, you had your fun of torturing me... the Glaceon muttered, his cheeks red of embarrassment.
-We're not done yet, Celia smiled.
-Celest, go get some of your jewelry, Blaze whispered to the Eevee's ear.
-Yay! Snowy's gonna play princess! the small Eevee shouted before bolting to her room.
-WHAT!? Snowy yelled as he backed up, his back hitting the wall.
-It's nothing compared to what we'd do, Koneka and Kira chuckled.
-Mom... I think I need a little help...
-I didn't raise you to be arrogant like you were, Snowy, Blizzard replied. I think you need a good lesson.
-B-but...
-Look mommy! I even found your dress! Celest happily yipped as she entered the room again, a purple gown on her back and fake jewelry in her mouth.
-That's going to be perfect, Celest, Celia congratulated.
Snowy stared at the dress, then at the jewels and then at his cousins, who had dark eyes except for Celest.
-You're not seriously asking me to dress up, huh? the Glaceon asked.
-Now, Koneka ordered.
-You're not gonna boss...
-Snowy, do you want me to get you in it myself? Blizzard threatened.
-S-sorry mom...
The embarrassed Glaceon slowly stepped forward his grinning Eevee cousin, shame flowing freely on his face. He silently grudged against the girls as Emmi, Celest, Kira and Koneka held the dress. "I have the worst cousins..." Snowy told himself when Kira passed the dress over the fresh snow Pokémon. Snowy's head poked out the opening, his cousins helping him putting his front paws at the right place. Celest happily put the fake earrings on the Glaceon's ears and the fake bracelets on his front paws, accentuating the girlish look. Storm got closer to put a small necklace around the Glaceon's neck, finishing the outfit.
-There, are you satisfied? the princess dressed Glaceon asked.
-Marvellous, Storm shinned, making everyone but Snowy laugh. Let's show the boys how you look!
-NO! I'M NOT GOING OUTSIDE LIKE THIS!!
-Why not? You look very handsome, she taunted in a sugary tone.
-Shut up, Kira.
-Snowy, Blizzard said with dark eyes.
-Fine, I'll go outside...
The Glaceon hung his head low in shame as he exited the bedroom, Koneka, Kira, Celest and Hope escorting him outside. Before the adults could go outside, Blaze blocked the door, a huge grin on her face.
-What is it? Aqua asked.
-When you're like this, it's because you have an idea, Leaf added.
-I asked Shadow to tell Yami to come, Blaze revealed. He's going to add a final "touch" to Snowy.
-What do you mean? Blizzard asked. Is it harmful? Snowy might not have been a good Pokémon today, but that's no...
-Don't worry, it's nothing that'll hurt him, the Ninetales giggled. Though he might be scared for life...
-Come on, what's this about!? the Glaceon mother asked, impatience gaining her.
-Just... don't freak out, okay?
-Now you're scaring me, Blaze, Celia sighed. What's Yami going to do?
-Show Snowy things from a different angle, the fox Pokémon chuckled.
While Snowy was being tortured, Shadow was training Marik to use his strength in better ways. The Umbreon father went inside for a couple of minutes before coming back with a strange vest floating beside him.
-What's that, dad? Marik asked. I've never seen it before.
-It's a special type of vest my own father used to train with, Shadow explained. It's designed to feel very heavy on one's back, making it hard to move at normal speed.
-But, how's that going to help me train?
-My father told me that the one training with it will get his strength, speed and reflexes. If you train with it, I'm sure you're going to become much stronger.
Shadow moved the "vest" closer until it was hovering over Marik. He helped his son put it on and, when Marik was ready, let go of his telekinesis holding it. Marik let out an "Oof" sound when he felt the weight of the training vest fall on his back.
-Are you okay? the father asked when he saw Marik's paws shaking.
-I'm... fine... the young moonlight Pokémon replied. Just didn't... expect it to... be this heavy...
-Can you walk?
Marik nodded before putting a paw forward, slowly walking forward. After he was used to the extra weight, he turned to his father and grinned.
-Thanks dad, this'll be perfect, the young boy said. But how am I gonna jump with this on?
-This'll be a different training, Shadow replied. Why don't you try running a little?
When Marik started running, the two Umbreons heard laughing sounds coming from their house's yard. Intrigued, they decided to go take a look, curious about all the noise.
-Oh in Arceus' name! What the heck happened!? Onikuro laughed when he saw Snowy come outside the house.
-Laugh anymore and I'm going to kill you, the Glaceon growled.
-Snowy, stay put, Lightning said.
-Snowy!? What're you doing in Celia's costume? Pyro chuckled.
-Not a very nice fit, Axel commented, trying hard not to laugh.
-Of course not, it's a girl's costume! Snowy protested.
-But you look so pretty! Onikuro continued laughing.
-Shut up Onikuro!
-Watch out Snowy, maybe acting like this might get back to you one day, Raven warned.
"What the hell did they do..." Jerry thought to himself as he stared at the young Glaceon. "Poor kid... Though maybe he does deserve this..."
-Hi guys! a voice called out from the trees, surprising the present Pokémons.
-Yami! Spark replied when he recognized his Absol friend. How are you? Are you okay?
-Yeah, I'm fine, the disaster Pokémon laughed. Mom, Ember and Kasai are saying hi by the way.
-That's nice. What about Father Pederia? Is he okay?
-I don't know... He hasn't woken up yet.
-So, why'd you come here anyway? Shadow told us Blaze asked you to come, but I still don't...
-Oh, you'll see very soon, just don't say anything, okay?
-Sure...?
The girls all came outside the house and bowed to the boys, proud of the result of their "makeover". Snowy was constantly pouting and grumbling, even with Celest and Hope trying to make him laugh. Blaze's stare met Yami's and she blinked, giving him the signal. "Let the fun begin" she thought as she saw her adopted brother's eyes glow of a faint, light blue.
-Snowy Volu! a loud, female voice rang through the air, making everyone jump. You have greatly disappointed me!
-Who's there? the Glaceon asked, looking around him.
-Do you not recognize the voice of the one you borrow power from so much?
-L-L-Lady Articuno! I'm s-sorry I didn't r-recognize you!
-As I was saying, Articuno continued. You have greatly disappointed me! When you evolved, I would have thought that you would mature!
-B-but I did mature!
-No! You became overconfident! You became much too sure of yourself and you thought you could get away with it! You even dared insult your own family! You must be punished for such disgrace!
-No! Please give me another chance! I won't do it again, I promise!
-With what I am going to do, I hope so...
The voice stopped as suddenly as it had started. Blizzard was staring at her son, who was shaking. The young Glaceon was standing there, staring at the sky. Blizzard slowly moved forward, unsure if this was part of Blaze's plan or not.
-Snowy? Are you...
The Glaceon mother stopped, startled by what was happening. While the gown seemed to be ill fitting a minute ago, it looked like it was a perfect fit now. Blizzard also noticed the Pokémons facing Snowy all had their mouths wide open.
-Snowy? Blizzard asked again. Are you... okay?
-Sure mom, why wouldn't... Snowy stopped as he brought a paw to cover his mouth.
"What was that!?" he thought. His voice sounded different. It sounded more... girlish. Shaking, he brought his paw back so he could look at it. Despite being a Glaceon only for a day, he could tell something was wrong with his paw. It looked slender, as if muscles had simply vanished. "What the hell is wrong with me!?"
-Huh... Snowy... his father started. What's happening to you?
-What's wrong with your face? Blizzard added.
-I don't...
Snowy stopped talking again, his own voice scaring him. He started running inside the house to his room, almost tripping on the dress, and looked at his reflection in his mirror. What looked back at him almost made him faint.
-KYAAAAAA!!!! the Glaceon yelled, the female Glaceon in the mirror yelling at the same time.
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ok i get that snowy was a jerk but - while hilarious - THAT LAST PART CROSSES A LINE!!! (at least the involuntarily part does)
still cant stop laughing though...
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PPPPPPPPPHHHHH *Can't hold it anymore* BWAHAHHAHHAHHAHAHAHAH ah aahh that hurt.
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Thought it'd be a fun thing to add to relieve the tension XD
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Why do I keep getting here every time I search '(any eeveelutions) tg'?
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It would. uvu <--- The heck does that mean?
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Oh Blaze... You devious little Ninetales. But then again Snowy did get what he deserved for being so arrogantly cocky and soooo sexist. Oh how I couldn't stop laughing at his torture . This is the reason kinda the reason why you don't insult or even anger a girl because they WILL make you suffer for actions.
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Moral lesson here Snowy... Never. And I mean Never! Piss off, anger or insult a girl or women otherwise you're going through hell as payback. Though Blaze may have gone a bit overboard with her addition to the punishment. I mean dressing a guy up in a dress and jewelery with curls is pretty bad but changing his gender to the opposite one with addition of a dress, jewelery and curls then it's just down right degrading.
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That's true. And yes, Blaze did went overboard, even if her intention was only to fool around.
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Hopefully she saw that what she did was fairly wrong despite it being a way to teach Snowy some manners.
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dont worry snowy i know your pain 
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no seriously rachel gave me a whole manipedi piece of FUCK along with fake earings and shit and it was horrible coming home to my friends and parents XDDDDDDDDD IT WAS FUCKING AWFUL BUT HILARIOUS. ALL THAT PAINT ON MY NAILS IS STILL FUCKING THERE. GODDAMMET LOLOLOLOLOLOL ITS A LOT WORSE THAT IT SOUNDS IN THE STORY BUT THEN AGAIN I MYSELF THINK ITS FUNNY I ACTUALLY LET HER DO IT TO ME
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LOL Snowy, you brought that upon yourself. After all, the legendary bird you get your power from is not a god but goddess. Although, getting turned into a girl is a bit too far, Blaze.
Great chapter, man. Funniest one since the ice slide in "A Jolteon's Story." IMO
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Yeah, that's what I was going for X3
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OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! that is toooooooooooooo funny ,will he be stuck like that?, such a FLOL!
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I thought it'd be funny xD
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I have posted ch 26 XD And ch 27 might be long, I'm probably gonna send a request to Nintendo to make my first story into a personal book.
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rlly wow thats fantastic good luck, that'll be an amazing achievement!
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I'd love to ^^ And thanks >w<
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Lol. I'm probably going to have to make a picture.
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That just made my day xD
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I thought of a cool story that happens right after this chapter................
During the night Snowy decides to run away thinking that if he does a good deed he could redeem himself to Lady Articuno and so in the woods he runs into Greed with the illusion making him a female glaceon still on. A battle ensues Snowy gets badly hurt maybe a limb or two missing and out of nowhere a wrench hits Greed In the Head knocking him out (if not then gets beat up by the Kecleon that threw the wrench) Snowy see the Keckleon beat the Weavile and blacks out. He then dreams that Lady Articuno says if he helps the Keckleon in her mission he will be redeemed. When he wakes up any missing limbs he has are replaced with metal ones and he has mechanical Glaceon sized Articuno wings, oh and his icicle crown is styled like an articunos now (he still has the glaceon hair dangles though). The Keckleon introduces herself as Mirage (*cough* possible love interest *cough*) a mechanic and apologizes for the wings saying she got a little too creative and says that as for the limbs she replaced that if she hadn’t replaced them he might have died of blood loss. They talk for a bit and Mirage asks him if he would like to form a team with her and if so if he would help her defeat a gang in a far way town. To get to the town they would have to go by boat. The reason Mirage wants to beat the gang up is because they have her little brother captive and stole the sacred Icicle Plate (you know one of Arceus’s). So Snowy joins forces with Mirage to form Team Illusion (or something like that). The family in the morning are panicking when they discover Snowy had ran away before receiving A letter from Snowy from a mail Dragonite with a package containing the dres, jewlrey, and any other of the girls items. There is also a letter explaining what happened to him and saying how he is going to redeem himself ending the letter with “I got to mail the letter now or I’ll be Late for the boat bye!”. His parents want to go stop him but the boat already left.
Also the gang would be made up of the leader a Froslass named Isola (Ice-sol-a) being the brains of it all, the right hand man an Druddigon named Rex, the main Muscle of the group an Garchomp named Bruce, the break, enter, and escape smokescreen is a Magmorter named Hellfire, the succubus spy getting the information needed a shiny Delcatty named Rue (roo), and the knockout and distraction artist Cherry the Shiny Jumpluff. The reason th3y have Mirages little brother (a Keckleon named Xavier) captive is he is being forced to show them the locations of where the Legendary plates are being guarded.
.............................. Do you like it? I worked on this during my vacation a bit. this chapter got my Imagination and creativity to go into overdrive.
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I just finished reading and it was a real great idea! 
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gald you like it, that just made my day.
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That was a bit much .w.
that poor boy...
I would've died of embarrassment, no seriously.
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God damnit what was wrong in my head? ;W;
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nothing, you are the normalest person ever existed xD
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I don't find this funny at all! ;A; I would be crying, like, no joke.. ;-; I'm scarred for life, now.. I knew it was going to happen, but I needed to make sure it was true. I don't agree. At all. I'm sorry if I'm digrading your work, because I love your writing, but just, no. If I were Snowy, I would literally run away. Fuck this family, I'd just leave. What's he have now, a vagina too?! Just, oh my God, my breathing is shallow and I can't think straight.. I'm going to have to take a break from this..
You're 24th chapter was great, though. Nice to meet Jerry and he's very nice..
Poor Snowy.. *takes him and runs away* You're not hurting him anymore. I don't like sexism either but this was just horrible. And to think, this is the first time I've really expressed myself over something like this.. I hope I don't offend you at all ;-; *crais* Love you, brovee ;W;
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Dude, calm down ;w; I'll explain everything if you need to ;w;
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You already did, and thank you~~
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A little gender-bending, huh? I can't say Snowy didn't deserve punishment, but maybe that was a bit much.
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Yeah, but then again you don't know the full story
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Snowy was being a sexist pig and (s)he payed for it.
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