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5 days later...

-Okay, Marik, one more time!  Shadow said.
-Right!  the young Umbreon replied as he focused, his tail starting to glow of a harsh silver light.
Marik ran to the practice illusion Yami was using, spun in the air and brought his Iron Tail on the fake dummy, slashing it in half.  Marik followed by a strong Faint Attack, finishing the job on the illusion.
-Great job!  the father congratulated as he hugged his son.  That was very good!
-Thanks dad, Marik smiled.
-Whoa!  Never thought you'd get this strong!  Onikuro complimented.  You, who hate fighting more than anything!
-Yeah, but it's for a good cause.
-Alright, I think that should be good, Marik, Shadow said.  We've been able to enhance your speed, your reflexes, your strength and your attack and defense arsenal.  I'm sure even I would have problems fighting you.
-You're just saying that, Marik blushed, his rings turning pink.  I'm just happy I might be able to help bring Mika back.
-I'm stronger too, dad!  Koneka added as she jumped on her father's back, passing her front paws around the Umbreon's neck.
-Of course you are, sweetie.  You're all a lot stronger than before.
-We're gonna be awesome!  Snowy let out.  Oni, Marik, Zeke, let's go practice our combination move!
-Right!  the three Pokémons replied as they followed the Glaceon to practice their teamwork.  Shadow and Yami watched them go, a smile on their faces.  With Duo's special training, everyone had been able to grow stronger within a week of working hard.  His shoulder healed quickly, so even Shadow had been able to participate in other ways than only using psychic attacks.

The four Pokémons placed themselves in their usual positions: Zeke in the middle, Onikuro on his right, Marik on his left and Snowy behind him.  The four were pitted against Blaze and Spark.  The duo of Chosen was patiently waiting for the children to make the first move.  As rash as he always was, Onikuro dashed first, followed by Zeke.
-What about our formation!?  Marik complained.
-You gotta know how to adapt!  Onikuro replied as he dodged one of Spark's lightning bolts.
Snowy rolled his eyes at his cousin's hastiness.  The young shiny Umbreon charged dark energy for his Dark Pulse attack while Zeke was readying his Aura Sphere.  Blaze was using Ho-Oh's powers to send a powerful wave of heat against her opponents, slowing them down.
-Damn it's so hot!  Onikuro blurted.
-Watch your language, Onikuro, Shadow warned.
-Sorry dad!
Snowy used Articuno's powers to cool down the air around the battlefield, cancelling Blaze's powers.  Onikuro and Zeke launched their attacks, which Spark countered by using his Discharge move, making both attacks collide with powerful electricity.  Marik focused on an opening left by Spark and ran forward.  Blaze realized this and used Ho-Oh's rainbow flames to block the path.  Marik smiled though as he vanished in a sudden glow of light, surprising both adults.  Marik reappeared behind them, his two front paws' claws ready to attack.
-Looks like you forgot about my Double Team, the Umbreon said.
-Very good, Shadow congratulated the fighters.
-You've all improved very much, Duo added as she got up.  Looks like you won't need my help anymore.
The realisation that Duo was going to leave soon hit the children.  They lowered their heads, their ears drooping.
-Aww, it's okay, guys! the Umbrespeon said.  Hope and I will be sure to visit.  I might even bring my mate and my other daughter, Shiroko!
Despite being there only a week, she had grown attached to the united family.  "I just hope it'll be enough..." she thought.  "Stop depressing like this, Duo.  They're going to save Mikazuki, I know it!"  Duo smiled when the children, including Hope who had joined the small group, all started debating who was the strongest between them.  Zeke's muscles tensed up unexpectedly, surprising the others.
-What's wrong, Zeke?  Onikuro asked.
-Someone's coming, the shiny Umbrespeon replied.  No... Three Pokémons...  With really powerful Auras...
Zeke suddenly spun, facing in the direction the Auras were coming from.  Onikuro scanned the area with his psychic powers and confirmed what Zeke said.  The shiny Umbreon warned everyone close to him to be on their guard, afraid of who they might be.  The family members quickly got outside the house, curious and nervous about who Zeke sensed.

It didn't take long for them to know.  After about 5 minutes, three silhouettes appeared at the clearing's border.  Yellow rings glowed on one of them.
-Nocturn...  Shadow muttered.
-Good morning, Fuzzy, Hunter taunted when his eyes met Bolt's.
Bolt tried to remain calm, his fur rising up in spikes.  He clenched his teeth together, staring at Hunter and then at Nocturn.  The third silhouette, though, was unknown to him.
-Hide behind me, Duo ordered Hope as she placed herself in front of her.
-What is it, mommy?  the child asked.
-Those Pokémons aren't nice.  I don't know what they're here for...
The third silhouette accompanying the two others was a Houndoom.  His eyes were empty as he just lay there, staring into nothing.
-No hello?  Hunter taunted the family.  Didn't your mother teach you all to be polite?
-Shut up!  Bolt snapped.  Shut up and tell me where Mikazuki is!
-Or what?  Last thing I remember you didn't do much to me.  The burns I got are all thanks to your filthy rat friend.
-Rat?  Blaze repeated, insulted.  I'll show you who the rat is!
Hunter was about to run towards Blaze to attack her, but tripped over something.  When he looked back, he saw the Houndoom's tail entangled around his leg.
-Let me go, you idiot!
-Wrath said no fighting for now...  the Houndoom calmly said, his voice no more than a whisper.
-Tsk...  the Weavile let out as he got back up.  You're lucky, nine tailed rat.
Blaze was about to run forward too when she was stopped by Shadow's Psychic.  The Umbreon looked at her in the eyes, a stare meaning "Don't do anything rash" and stepped towards the three enemies.
-What do you want?  the Umbreon asked.
-We came to tell you to give up on saving Mikazuki, Nocturn said.
-Like we're going to listen to you, you little prick...  Bolt growled.  Give me back my daughter!
-I thought I already told you she wasn't your daughter, Hunter laughed.  Still clinging to the lie?  I told you, you're not an Umbreon.  That bitch betrayed you!
-DON'T YOU DARE INSULT DAWN!  Bolt roared as he sent a powerful Thunderbolt to Hunter, who blocked it with his Protect.  GIVE MIKA BACK!
-I'm afraid it's not that simple, the Weavile shrugged.  Master Wrath won't let you have her.
-So, you really are "Wrath"...  Blaze muttered.  I thought you were one of the good guys...  I wanted to believe you were the one to have saved Mikazuki...
-I did save her, Nocturn said.  I saved her from the scum that stops her from growing stronger.
-You don't know anything about her!  Onikuro protested.  We're the ones who trained her!
-And after your so called "training" she can't fight off a small headache?  What a joke...
Nocturn suddenly felt a wave of energy pushing him back.  He focused and sent a wave of psychic energy strong enough to counter it.  When he searched for the author of it, he saw an Espeon staring at him with deadly eyes.
-Give her back to us...  Dawn ordered.  Give her back or you're going straight back to Arceus...
-Oh, stop, you're scaring me.  Your little god refused to take my life the first time; I won't give him another chance at it.
-Then I'll take that chance from you!
The Espeon tried running forward, but her mate stopped her and shook his head.  He held her to him and looked at Nocturn with his darkest stare.  The Umbrespeon returned him a look of disgust as he and his gang turned to go back.  He was about to start walking when he heard a faint squealing noise.  He turned and stared at where it came from.  A female Umbrespeon was standing there, a determined look in her eyes.
-I see even Pokémons of our kind betray me, Nocturn growled.  Who the hell are you?
-I'm Duo, and if you keep on like this I'll be the one to get rid of you.
-Funny.  How many of the three powers do you control?
-I control perfectly two of them, which...
-Weak, Nocturn muttered.  You can't hope defeat me.
Duo's mouth dropped when she realized what he meant.  "He can control all three of them!?"  Nocturn was about to turn again, but was stopped by the same squealing sound.
-What the hell is that?  he asked, annoyed.
-Hope, stay back, Duo whispered.
Hope only poked her head out of hiding.  She stared at the male Umbrespeon in front of her, feeling something weird in her chest, like she knew him for some reason.  "No, I don't know someone this mean..." she thought.  At the same time, Nocturn was staring at the Umbrespeon child, his eyes widening.
-E... Eliza...  he muttered before memories of his past came rushing inside his head.
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Comments: 36

xwerewolf99 [2014-04-20 18:39:19 +0000 UTC]

DA DA DAAAAAA! The feels that Nocturn is having must be overwehelming after seeing his "supposedly dead" daughter after thinking she was dead for so long. Also I think the Houndoom might be possessed by Nocturn considering he has a completely blank and empty stare and he does anything Nocturn says as well plus making sure that everyone else follows his orders too. Hmmm I wonder what everyone's reaction is going to be now knowing that Nocturn is Hope/Eliza's father.

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Marjar02 In reply to xwerewolf99 [2014-04-20 22:53:07 +0000 UTC]

I couldn't imagine being in Nocturn's place...  He must feel awful...

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xwerewolf99 In reply to Marjar02 [2014-04-20 23:06:59 +0000 UTC]

Yeah and probably dumbfoundedly confused since he's found his long lost/dead daughter standing right in front of him... Man I'm starting to feel bad for him right just thinking about that...

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Marjar02 In reply to xwerewolf99 [2014-04-20 23:11:16 +0000 UTC]

Yeah...

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xwerewolf99 In reply to Marjar02 [2014-04-21 00:42:36 +0000 UTC]

I just hope that seeing her will help him right his ways...

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DerekTheVaporeon [2012-04-27 15:21:49 +0000 UTC]

I love this chapter, especially when some monster appeared. The swearing was unexpected, though. XD
And Duo is all like "It's over nine thousand!!".

Just asking: What did exactly happen to Zeke's parents?

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Marjar02 In reply to DerekTheVaporeon [2012-04-27 15:28:04 +0000 UTC]

Thanks ^^ And we're going to learn it later >w>

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DerekTheVaporeon In reply to Marjar02 [2012-04-27 15:31:53 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

Oh god... I hope Wrath didn't... them...

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Jaeger15 [2012-04-24 11:31:06 +0000 UTC]

Very cool, dude. Very cool.

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Marjar02 In reply to Jaeger15 [2012-04-25 00:32:54 +0000 UTC]

Thanks ^^

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Jaeger15 In reply to Marjar02 [2012-04-25 11:07:03 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome, dude.

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TheRealPhoenix [2012-04-24 10:26:03 +0000 UTC]

That was a very awkward situation, everyone being able to keep calm like that.
Oh and I found something out that I have to tell you xD
It's pretty lol....
Next time on skype remind me if i forget.
Great chapter but well....I want Mika back ;w;
For some odd reason I like her, I have no idea why, she didn't really do much, but I just like her.

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Jaeger15 In reply to TheRealPhoenix [2012-04-24 11:31:03 +0000 UTC]

We both want her back. She's my character's daughter, after all.

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TheRealPhoenix In reply to Jaeger15 [2012-04-25 08:31:18 +0000 UTC]

;w;

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Marjar02 In reply to TheRealPhoenix [2012-04-24 10:28:23 +0000 UTC]

Well they "kept" their calm but they were all very on edge. Some just... couldn't take it any longer. Hum, I wonder what that is? .w..
And yeah, I like Mika too ;w;

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TheRealPhoenix In reply to Marjar02 [2012-04-25 08:34:37 +0000 UTC]

That was incredibly awkward .w.
good thing that I wasn't there, I would have done nothing .w. xDDD
na seriously, I probably would've talked to them....so basically...nothing xDD
(skypes)
I hope you do or... >:U
The funny thing is that I once liked Nocturn aswell .w. damn...
more things I need to tell you on skype xD

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Marjar02 In reply to TheRealPhoenix [2012-04-25 11:21:49 +0000 UTC]

Darn 6 hours of difference ;w;

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TheRealPhoenix In reply to Marjar02 [2012-04-25 14:27:48 +0000 UTC]

;w;

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XxLivingWellxX [2012-04-24 02:21:39 +0000 UTC]

Hehe important stuff is good x3 I should do that too, but who knows if I'll get around to it xD I like the chapter, though! OwO I like the furosity in Dawn and everyone. I hope someone starts a fight.. And I hope that seeing Hope or Eliza really sets him off xD
Great chapter, brovee!

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Marjar02 In reply to XxLivingWellxX [2012-04-24 02:23:38 +0000 UTC]

Thanks ^^ And what do you mean, set him off? Remember that, alone, Duo could easily hold up against four? Imagine Nocturn, who's a lot stronger than her >w>'

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XxLivingWellxX In reply to Marjar02 [2012-04-24 22:30:04 +0000 UTC]

Loll exactly .w. I want to see him get pissed >w>

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Marjar02 In reply to XxLivingWellxX [2012-04-25 00:33:17 +0000 UTC]

I,m sure you can wait a while

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XxLivingWellxX In reply to Marjar02 [2012-04-26 01:57:43 +0000 UTC]

Hehe mayyybe

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Marjar02 In reply to XxLivingWellxX [2012-04-26 01:59:11 +0000 UTC]

Then I'll just have to make you wait >w>

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XxLivingWellxX In reply to Marjar02 [2012-04-26 01:59:45 +0000 UTC]

Aww you're so mean >A<

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Marjar02 In reply to XxLivingWellxX [2012-04-26 02:02:03 +0000 UTC]

I promise you'll see him pissed in next chapter >w>

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XxLivingWellxX In reply to Marjar02 [2012-04-26 02:03:21 +0000 UTC]

Hehe yayy! >W<

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Marjar02 In reply to XxLivingWellxX [2012-04-26 02:04:22 +0000 UTC]

Not for the same reason though >w>

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XxLivingWellxX In reply to Marjar02 [2012-10-04 19:52:19 +0000 UTC]

Hehe nope >w> Especially since I don't remember what we were talking about

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Marjar02 In reply to XxLivingWellxX [2012-10-04 20:39:49 +0000 UTC]

Good question XD

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XxLivingWellxX In reply to Marjar02 [2012-10-05 20:40:39 +0000 UTC]

Haha this is what I get for trying to get through all of my unanswered feedback messages xD

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Void95 [2012-04-24 02:05:13 +0000 UTC]

Wow. Great chapter. I kind of like them when they are a bit longer, but this was really good. Keep up the great work and "I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!

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Marjar02 In reply to Void95 [2012-04-24 02:08:05 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, but I wanted to keep the suspense a little I promise the next ones are gonna be longer .w.

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Ctougas01 [2012-04-24 01:25:42 +0000 UTC]

GYAAA STUPID BATARD >8C HUNTER i'M NOT A DAMN RAT!! YOU'RE A STUPID CRYING CHICKEN!!
raaaaa wanna read mooooorre ;w; what's happening in Nocturn'S mind, who is Eliza, I wanna know ;w;

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Marjar02 In reply to Ctougas01 [2012-04-24 01:49:59 +0000 UTC]

You will in due time >w>

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Ctougas01 In reply to Marjar02 [2012-04-24 01:53:13 +0000 UTC]

ok ;w; 👍: 0 ⏩: 0