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Description Gluttony

Blaze and Scar were at the head of the small troop, exploring the cave.  The Ninetales' light sphere illuminated the tunnel where they walked forward, hoping to arrive to Mikazuki's destination soon.  It didn't take long for Scar to stop, Blaze bumping into him.
-What's wrong?  she asked.
-Someone's waiting for us, the Lucario replied, his eyes glowing blue as he scanned Aura in his surroundings.  There's someone in the next chamber...
-Do you recognize his Aura?  Shadow asked.
-No.  I just know that his Aura's powerful...
Bolt got in front of Blaze, impatient to move forward.  The Jolteon's rashness made Inferno sigh.  He knew very well why he was there, and he was hoping he wouldn't have to fight anyone, or even worse...
-You really think we'll be fine?  Jerry asked Spark as he got closer to him.
-Of course we will, what could happen?  We've got Zapdos, Moltres and Ho-Oh on our side!
-Come to think of it, I never really saw Zapdos' power in battle, the Umbreon murmured.
From what Jerry said, he and Spark had grown very close to each other in the Umbreon's past memories.  Spark found the former human nice, shy and helpful, but he also noticed some strange behaviors in him, like the fact that he seemed to avoid going to the river for some reason.
-Spark?  Shadow asked.  Are you coming?
-Sorry, lost in thoughts, the Jolteon apologized as he followed his brother.
-We can't have you dozing off like that in the middle of a battle, Yami warned.

When Bolt entered the next room, the first thing that he noticed was that he could smell something unusual in the air.  "There's blood somewhere..." he noticed.  "There's blood...  but it's not fresh.  It smells like it's been there for days..."  Blue crystals gave off a cold, dim light in the "room", making Bolt shiver.  He noticed a tall silhouette waiting, immobile.  His fur rose in spikes as it started to crackle with electricity.  The rest of the group quickly made its way in the room, noticing the same smell and sight.
-Who are you!?  Bolt yelled.  Where's my daughter!?
-Bolt, I told you to keep your head cool, Shadow muttered, getting impatient at his brother in law.
-I can see Master Wrath was right, you are an annoying one, the silhouette replied as it clumsily got closer.
-Answer my question.  Where.  Is.  My.  Daughter?!
-She's further in, the silhouette chuckled.  You'll have to get rid of me firs...
-Gladly!  Bolt snapped as he let loose of a powerful Thunderbolt, lighting the cave.
The Snorlax took the attack without flinching, a smirk appearing on his face.  He continued to walk forward, his intentions evident.  The sleeping Pokémon used his Rollout attack to speed up, rolling on himself.  The rescue group quickly dodged the giant sphere of flesh, making it end up hitting the rocky wall.  Pointed rocks started falling from the ceiling, immediately stopped by Shadow's Psychic or destroyed by Scar's Bone Rush.  The Snorlax got back up, his massive height dominating the other Pokémons, and stared at everyone with crazy eyes.  Jerry's ears fell to the sides of his head when he realized what he was thinking.
-I'm going to crush you and feed off your flesh!  Gluttony roared as he ran towards the green-ringed Umbreon.
Jerry didn't move, too dumbstruck to even think.  He didn't even realize Scar had run in front of him and was using his Aura to slow the wild Pokémon's advance.  The Lucario's feet were sinking in the stone floor from the Snorlax's strength.
-Snap out of it, Jerry!  Scar yelled, his arms shaking from the extreme effort.
The Umbreon seemed to wake up from a deep sleep and ran, joining the rest of the rescue group.  Scar then focused, concentrating a large amount of Aura in his hand-paws.  He lifted his head and smirked to Gluttony.
-Take this!  the Lucario roared, sending the entire Aura accumulated in a single blast.
Gluttony took the hit without even flinching, surprising Scar.  He had put his whole Aura control in that attack!  The Snorlax lowered his arms and took the Lucario.  The aura Pokémon tried to free himself, but the giant was a lot stronger than what he looks like.
-You're first, he laughed as he approached Scar from his mouth, ready to devour him.
-Scar!  Inferno let out as he launched a Flamethrower at Gluttony, followed by Spark's powered Thunderbolt and Blaze's rainbow, newly developed Solar Beam.
-Stop, it tickles.
Shadow used his Psychic to stop Gluttony's arms from lowering Scar in his mouth.  The Snorlax tried and tried, but his arms were backing away and losing their grip on the shiny Lucario.  Furious, Gluttony started running towards the Umbreon.  Shadow took the opportunity to jump in the air, spin and use his Iron Tail on the Snorlax's arm, releasing Scar.

The rescue team members positioned themselves, Shadow and Jerry at the back, Bolt, Inferno, Spark and Blaze in the middle and Scar and Yami in the front of the formation.  Gluttony let out a powerful laugh, shaking the cave's walls.  Yami closed his eyes, red, deadly energy starting to gather on the horn on the side of his head.
-Jigoku couldn't hurt me with that, what makes you think you will?  the Snorlax asked the Absol, startling him.
-Y-you know him?!  Yami blurted.
-That damned, power craving Zoroark?  Of course!  I was stronger than him, but he was higher in Master Ryu's esteem because of his "smartness".
Yami lost his temper, unleashing his powerful Night Daze on the Snorlax.  The huge Pokémon didn't even move, a barrier forming around him.  The blade shaped Night Daze broke against the Protect, sizzling.  Yami growled, his eyes glowing with a menacing light.
-He he, I can see the rage in your eyes, Gluttony laughed.  Your father would be proud of you.
-Don't you dare talk about him in front of me!  Yami roared as he charged energy in his claws.
-Yami, calm down!  Shadow ordered.  You need to think straight.
The Absol slowed his breathing, his eyes reverting to their original state.  Gluttony, though, didn't intend to let Yami stop and rolled in a ball, using his Rollout.  Shadow and Spark tried slowing him down, the Umbreon with his Psychic and the Jolteon with his Thunder Wave to paralyze him, but the Snorlax's skin seemed to work as a powerful shield.  Unable to actually fight, Jerry was staying back, trying to analyze the situation despite the rush of fear gripping his heart.  "He's gotta have a weakness..." the former human thought.  "But it doesn't look like any attack weakens him..." The Umbreon felt himself being pushed aside, followed by a powerful blow next to him.
-You alright?  Spark asked Jerry, the Umbreon only half hearing him from his ears' ringing.
Jerry slowly nodded, turning his head and seeing Gluttony get back up after hitting the cavern's wall again.  Rocks had started falling again, but Shadow and Scar were taking care of them.  "Damn it!" Spark thought.  "If this keeps on, we'll be exhausted before saving Mika!"  The Jolteon was in front of Jerry, facing the giant.  "Just as I remember him..." Jerry told himself.
-Hey!  Big guy!  Spark taunted.  Pick on someone your own size!
Gluttony smirked before taking a deep breath, his already large belly swelling even more.  A sphere of pure energy started to form in the Snorlax's mouth.  Yami's eyes widened, recognizing the energy as well as everyone else.
-Get back!  Yami yelled as he positioned himself in front of everyone, ready to use his Protect.
When the energy was ready, Gluttony gave the rescue team a wicked smile before firing his Hyper Beam on the ceiling, which was about two meters high.  Shadow's eyes widened, fear crossing his look for the first time since the fire at Pederia's church.  He was about to bind all of his mental strength to stop the falling boulders when a strange humming sound filled the room.  Shadow looked up and saw a pattern of crystal-like things spinning, making the falling ceiling parts disappear.  Jerry was standing on his hind legs, his hand-paws raised up high and his eyes glowing.  The falling trap was gone not even three seconds later.  Gluttony stared as he panted, exhausted from that attack.
-Now!  Bolt ordered as he ran towards the Snorlax, his body electrifying for his Spark attack.
Spark, Inferno and Blaze all focused, their respective powers emerging in the air around them.  Spark then used his Pin Missile, transforming his needles into electric spikes, while Blaze created a very large and bright ball of light to blind Gluttony.  Inferno sent his flames towards Gluttony as Bolt collided with him and Scar finished charging energy for his Aura Sphere.  Yami and Shadow stayed behind, worried about how Jerry was feeling after opening a portal.
-I'm fine...  the former human murmured.
-Damn it!  Spark suddenly let out.
Gluttony grinned at them, not a scratch on his body.  He then took Scar in his hands again, bringing him above his wide open mouth.  Scar squirmed, trying to free himself.
-It's no use, Gluttony laughed.  Your Umbreon friend is too weak and I can't be hurt.  Any last words before I digest you?
-I got two, Scar smirked, freeing his arm from the Snorlax's vice grip, Aura converting in a powerful sphere.  Shut.  UP!
Scar shoved his arm deep into the normal type's throat, blasting the Aura Sphere in his insides.  Gluttony's eyes widened as he seemed to start blowing a little, as if air was being blown in him.  Scar jumped out of the Pokémon's arms and landed on the ground next to his friends.  Unable to support his weight, Gluttony's body fell forward, landing in a very loud "thump".  The Lucario sighed, the lumps behind his head rising while he scanned the present auras in the room.
-He's dead...  the Lucario let out.
Jerry let himself fall on his butt, his eyes wide with fear.  "He's dead...  He's really... dead..."
-Jerry?  Spark asked.  Are you alright?
-H-how could I be?!  Th-that Pokémon just got killed!
While everyone tried to calm themselves down, Shadow went towards the Snorlax's corpse and sat there, staring at it.  While at first he seemed to be studying the Snorlax, his mind was in a complete turmoil.  "What if they're all that strong?  Damn it, we weren't prepared right!  How will we save Mikazuki if we can't even save ourselves?"
-Shadow?  Yami said as he settled his paw on the Umbreon's shoulder.  We're ready to continue.
-Y-yeah...  Shadow nodded, quickly hiding his fear.
"I don't want them to worry about me right now.  We can take care of that later." the moonlight Pokémon thought as his family members and friends entered another tunnel, leading to another room.
-There's someone else there, Scar warned.  His Aura is... even stronger...
-We're all sticking to the plan, Shadow said.  I don't want anyone doing anything rash, and that includes you, Bolt, he added with a dark stare towards the Jolteon.
Bolt was startled by this and could clearly feel both Shadow's fear and anger.  It was kind of true it was his fault for running into trouble like that, but what would Shadow have done?
-I wouldn't have asked for trouble, the Umbreon replied to the Jolteon's silent question.
"Man...  Shadow is really mad..." Spark thought.  "He must be so stressed out, taking care of the operation like that..."
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Comments: 21

xwerewolf99 [2014-04-21 17:02:17 +0000 UTC]

Whoa... That was... That was extremely nerve racking... I mean sure a Snorlax can be really tough but HOLY ARCEUS! The only way to kill Gluttony was to shove an Aura Sphere down his throat!?!? I can't even begin to imagine the others... Ugh I'm starting to shiver just thinking about it.

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Marjar02 In reply to xwerewolf99 [2014-04-21 20:20:48 +0000 UTC]

Yes, I made so that Gluttony would be extremely tough, though his weakest point was the only place that wouldn't be covered in his tough skin: his insides.

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xwerewolf99 In reply to Marjar02 [2014-04-21 21:00:29 +0000 UTC]

Yeah since it seemed like his skin was made out both steel and rock for how tough it was and how any attack didn't even phase him but his way of killing someone though... Ugh I'm glad they were able to stop him twice from eating Scar right then and there.

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Marjar02 In reply to xwerewolf99 [2014-04-21 21:01:47 +0000 UTC]

True.  I don't know what would have happened if Scar had been eaten...

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xwerewolf99 In reply to Marjar02 [2014-04-21 21:10:10 +0000 UTC]

Umm... I think that everyone would probably go batshit crazy kill all of the Seven Deadly Sins well... All but Mika since she's now Envy.

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Jaeger15 [2012-07-05 12:19:48 +0000 UTC]

Sorry for the late comment. Great chapter!

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Marjar02 In reply to Jaeger15 [2012-07-05 13:41:23 +0000 UTC]

No problem ^^

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XxLivingWellxX [2012-06-23 06:19:30 +0000 UTC]

Wow! It's insane and badass how Scar killed Gluttony I liked this chapter! I'm actually reall hooked on it now owo I wish my writing was this good ;w; Keep it up, brovee~~

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Marjar02 In reply to XxLivingWellxX [2012-06-23 15:27:16 +0000 UTC]

He he, thanks >w< I need to ask Christina or Jerry to draw that scene owo And it's not that different Thanks for the comment, though >w<

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XxLivingWellxX In reply to Marjar02 [2012-06-28 18:30:42 +0000 UTC]

Lol if Jerry drew the scene it would be awesome! >W< I really need to ask him to commission me something.. I finally have points now owo Lol xD
What's not that different? .w. Your writing is wayy better than mine~~
You're welcome >W<

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Marjar02 In reply to XxLivingWellxX [2012-06-28 20:52:38 +0000 UTC]

He he, thanks >w< And I don't think Jerry takes commissions

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XxLivingWellxX In reply to Marjar02 [2012-06-28 21:02:50 +0000 UTC]

Well, saddness ;w; I'll still have to ask him at ome point, I guess

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Piemaster128 [2012-06-23 03:13:41 +0000 UTC]

YAY! NEW CHAPTER! Glad to see another new chapter. It is as great as always .

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Marjar02 In reply to Piemaster128 [2012-06-23 03:15:38 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot ^^ And thanks for the fav

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Piemaster128 In reply to Marjar02 [2012-06-23 03:19:01 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome. I would fave all your stories but i am still a bit busy. Sorry

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Marjar02 In reply to Piemaster128 [2012-06-23 03:23:23 +0000 UTC]

It's okay ^^

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Ctougas01 [2012-06-22 22:05:23 +0000 UTC]

Nice! Chapter!
Glutony is dead =w= Now who is the next o.o

Hey what happeing with Aqua, Leaf and the mayor ;w;

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Marjar02 In reply to Ctougas01 [2012-06-22 22:07:47 +0000 UTC]

You're a sadistic Ninetales, aren't you >w>' And we'll see that later .w.'

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Ctougas01 In reply to Marjar02 [2012-06-22 22:12:37 +0000 UTC]

XD yup .w.
;WWW; CAN'T WAIT ;w;

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Marjar02 In reply to Ctougas01 [2012-06-22 22:17:06 +0000 UTC]

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Ctougas01 In reply to Marjar02 [2012-06-22 23:44:20 +0000 UTC]

XDD

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