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JetBloodthorn [2014-09-09 22:15:36 +0000 UTC]
It's coming :3
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Skitty-Glameow [2014-07-23 19:45:55 +0000 UTC]
I was cracking up so bad after the first half and so before Koneka was crying on the ground. XD Poor thing, she needs to fight that monster inside of her and have her heart be strong! >:3 I totally think that if she makes a family of her own that will deffinately help her calm down a lot (unless the kids are a pain in the butt x. x)
I lov pyro's twins, Okashi and Omashi. They're sooooo in sync with each other XD I also love Yaku and Celeste (Celeste is the sylveon right? XD) although, I keep picturing Yaku as a sylveon because of how adorable you describe her eyes XDDD I really love this chapter :3 its probably one of your best chapters yet I believe. It would help me if I had a family tree thing for their family and what kind of pokemon they are XD I'm not sure what kind of pokemon Ryoku and Hikari are, (I might just have missed the sentance telling you what pokemon they are, but maybe not. Sometimes I unconciously skip lines, and I hate it when it happens x. x) . Btw, what happened to Jerry? XD I know he was a cross over, but still did he vannish in a portal? XD
I can't wait for the story to continue :3 well I can, but I'll be really excited when they come out XD
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Jaeger15 [2014-07-23 11:16:26 +0000 UTC]
Excellent first chapter dude! I'm loving where this is going to go.
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Marjar02 In reply to Jaeger15 [2014-07-23 14:06:28 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much! Did I write Bolt right? Maybe too strict? That was one of my biggest concerns in this chapter ><
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Jaeger15 In reply to Marjar02 [2014-07-23 17:27:48 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, he's good. After almost losing her, he'd be a little overprotective of Mika.
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Marjar02 In reply to Jaeger15 [2014-07-23 17:59:55 +0000 UTC]
That's true. Thanks ^^
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Jaeger15 In reply to Marjar02 [2014-07-23 18:15:38 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome dude.
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Marjar02 In reply to FlareMew [2014-07-23 14:06:55 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much!!
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ZaneusNova [2014-07-23 04:50:30 +0000 UTC]
Nice chapter. I have to admit that I was confused at the beginning, but then realized that there was a time skip.
I may need a recap on the characters since it's been a while since I last read your stories. So many characters.
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Marjar02 In reply to ZaneusNova [2014-07-23 04:53:43 +0000 UTC]
lol thank you and I totally understand what you mean XD If you ever need help, just ask away XD
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ZaneusNova In reply to Marjar02 [2014-07-23 05:17:44 +0000 UTC]
Oh, I forgot to say in my first comment: I figured we would be seeing a sylveon eventually. I actually thought Celest was an espeon with the "pink forehead" detail. You got me~ ^^ lol
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ZaneusNova In reply to Marjar02 [2014-07-23 05:05:42 +0000 UTC]
I'm going to need quite a bit of help. I'm making a word document to help me keep track. I will note you the questions.
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Voyager15Space [2014-07-23 04:40:04 +0000 UTC]
Yay! A new chapter :3
Don't worry, I won't blow up this time, like the 200,000 other times I did.
Chapter's very good. This is like...what, your 4th series in a series of series?! Keep up the good work!
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xwerewolf99 [2014-07-23 04:39:28 +0000 UTC]
So Spark and Blaze finally got married and had a baby vulpix. It's just so heart warming to see this huge family be so supportive of each other! I'm surprised at how fast Akarui is maturing. Also I agree with Mika with Koneka having a baby could help cheering her up.
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Marjar02 In reply to xwerewolf99 [2014-07-23 04:52:54 +0000 UTC]
Yes, they did get married after a much obvious crush between the two xD As for Yaku, isn't the the most adorable little thing?
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xwerewolf99 In reply to Marjar02 [2014-07-23 05:08:33 +0000 UTC]
She is very adorable and she has some of the same traits as her father. Too bad he had succumbed to her all powerful Baby-Doll Eyes
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Marjar02 In reply to xwerewolf99 [2014-07-23 05:32:25 +0000 UTC]
Too bad he will fall to it again... A poor soldier lost in the adorable war XD
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xwerewolf99 In reply to Marjar02 [2014-07-23 14:37:15 +0000 UTC]
So very lost indeed but things like this make the family so great and enjoyable to watch!
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