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Hellobaby [2010-08-05 04:01:22 +0000 UTC]

Hi dear,
As you request critic from #Traditional-Media , I would like to have comment here .
Basically, overall it looks fine but I think we are going more on details now . I will make it short cause I am not good at writing anyway.
- Her left eye angle is a bit down, the end & start of 2 eyes should be on straight lines (try to use more guide lines when you draw, you will find out how helpful it is dear.)
- Her head is quite big compare with her face (you can draw it a bit shorter cause it a bit high).
- The neck shadow makes her neck look a bit fat so you can draw the neck slimmer a bit or giving right shadow for her neck (if the light from left then shadow it from right & a bit shadow under her chin).
- Her left shadow is right but in drawing, you can make it looks softer but give it a bit curve from neck to arm (I mean use curve line for it instead of straight line ).
- Clothes texture/ accessories are something which we don't need to critic dear, actually it just need more practicing to make everything look good.
- Her right face shading is better than left because it looks more smooth. Try to use that technical for whole pic to make it looks smooth & soft for whole pic dear.

Hope it can help anyway.
Thanks for joining our critic day.
Take care,

Team at #Traditional-Media

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Everette-kun [2010-02-01 03:36:06 +0000 UTC]

<3 Love it.

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