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MASbartlett In reply to Jiubeck [2017-03-01 12:04:22 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! in what way are the hips wrong in your opinion? I think they do look a little small at first glance but this is just the angle of the character that makes it look like that. Also the jacket makes the top half of her body look bigger than it is so could give the illusion of the bottom half being to small maybe? I appreciate the criticism its how we all learn though!

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Jiubeck In reply to MASbartlett [2017-03-01 23:07:48 +0000 UTC]

Yeah I am aware that the position the hips is somewhat the problem and that the jacket is puffy. But still the hips are to small and by extension her thighs. It's not so puffy that it could account for the ribcage and around her breast you see how thin the jaclket actually is. So seeing her bottom half in context it just looks to small. Almost as if she was standing sideways but she's standing in 3/4 pose to the camera

If you'd for example made her butt an thighsa bit wider, it would help a lot because right now she looks really top heavy, like she would topple over. With a bit more around the base and the typical hourglass figure it would go a long way to make the pose look more plausible.
I am sorry if I am shit at explaining what I mean since english is not my native language.

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