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badboy1817 [2020-06-25 02:09:38 +0000 UTC]
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FederationBolt [2019-11-25 05:44:54 +0000 UTC]
to massam- 16... me and 54godamora are going to make a Story in your comment section kinda based on your art... do you mind if that happenes? XD
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FederationBolt In reply to massam-16 [2019-11-26 06:21:54 +0000 UTC]
have you seen... the before the start of the transformation of the story?
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FederationBolt In reply to 54godamora [2019-11-24 21:46:48 +0000 UTC]
... im just imagening how there Semblence would work in the water when they turn into Mermaids... and XD i think Yang would be alittle OP... one swish of her tail, and a Title wave formsΒ
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54godamora In reply to FederationBolt [2019-11-24 22:06:37 +0000 UTC]
Want to do a story about this scenario?
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FederationBolt In reply to 54godamora [2019-11-24 22:24:11 +0000 UTC]
hmmm... sure... i think it would start off with Team RWBY being Giving a mission by Ozpin, about a strange island that hasnt been Explored, as apparently, the grimm dont spawn there so Ozpin thinking Team RWBY will be able to find out why task them to go to this island, and find why the Grimm seem to not appear on the island, and if said island can be used as a outpost of some sort... oh and i think this would take place during Vol2
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54godamora In reply to FederationBolt [2019-11-24 22:29:35 +0000 UTC]
i have it divided into 3 acts:
Act 1: knowing about the mission, preparing for it, and then leaving beacon in an airship
Act 2: arriving on the island, setting up camp, full moon at night, they are drawn to it, they strip & enter, and are turned into mermaids followed by panic attack and then getting out and falling asleep from exhaustion (i'll do the transformation part, you do their reactions)
Act 3 can either be one of two options:Β
1. They are stuck as mermaids for rest of their lives and have to mourn their old lives and get used to mermaid life
2. they are dry and back to normal but whenever they are taking a bath, go to a swimming pool or swimming in a body of water, they turn into mermaids.
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54godamora In reply to FederationBolt [2019-11-24 22:52:12 +0000 UTC]
ok. oh and additionally, keeping with the H20 theme, they gain powers:
1. Ruby- control air
2. Weiss- freeze water
3. Blake- make water tendrils
4. Yang- boil water.
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54godamora In reply to FederationBolt [2019-11-24 22:58:36 +0000 UTC]
and here's what i mean by transformations:
1. hair becomes shiny and they gain eyeliner and colored tips to eyelashes
2. their ears become elf-like and gain 3 pairs of gills on neck
3. optional: bust expansion. Ruby- F cup, Weiss- E cup, Blake- G cup, Yang- J cup. if not, just give them either revealing seashell tops or revealing scaly tops
4. their lower half turning into a mermaid tail. legs moving closer together, then the legs lock together and fuse into one limb, ankles, feet, and toes fuse into a fin, and finally a cascade of shiny scales glides down their lower limb with their fin getting color as well.
Colors for each
1. Ruby. Top: shiny red. Tail: bright red with pale red fin and pink edges
2. Weiss. Top: shiny icy blue. Tail: bright icy blue with pale blue fin and white edges
3. Blake. Top: shiny purple. Tail: bright purple with pale purple fin with yellow edges. Glows in the dark.
4. Yang. Top: shiny yellow. Tail: gold with pale yellow fin and red edges.
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FederationBolt In reply to 54godamora [2019-11-24 23:03:39 +0000 UTC]
i think Ruby should have some black not pink... and for the top... scaly tops no bust expansion
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54godamora In reply to FederationBolt [2019-11-24 23:05:19 +0000 UTC]
why not the top be red with black straps?
ok. we have everything sorted out. let me know when you get started on it. i would help you write it but cleaning house for family thanksgiving and got finals coming up
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FederationBolt In reply to 54godamora [2019-11-24 23:09:15 +0000 UTC]
ok then, and thats fine, you have your things you need to do so i dont mind
and lets start now
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54godamora In reply to FederationBolt [2019-11-24 23:10:37 +0000 UTC]
as an RP or are you going to upload it as an actual story?
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FederationBolt In reply to 54godamora [2019-11-24 23:11:21 +0000 UTC]
i dont know how to do a story on Devientart XD
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FederationBolt In reply to 54godamora [2019-11-24 23:14:27 +0000 UTC]
Fanfiction is too hard to use... im amazed the many people that use it... well can... i tried but i then forgot how to do things so... nope not touching that and only reading off it
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54godamora In reply to FederationBolt [2019-11-24 23:20:12 +0000 UTC]
i thought that's how you wanted to do the RP?
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54godamora In reply to FederationBolt [2019-11-25 05:48:00 +0000 UTC]
re-start with Weiss's transformation (i do Weiss & Blake, you get Ruby & Yang. Promise me you follow this format, please.)
1. Her hair became shiny and she gained icy blue eyeliner and icy blue tips on her eyelashes. She gasped what is this?!
2. Her ears became elf like and she gained 3 pairs of gills on her neck. Weiss- eek! she covered them both
3. her clothes vanished, leaving her with just an icy blue scaly revealing top. she blushed and covered her body
4. her legs moved closed together. she shook her head
5. they locked together and fused into one limb. she whimpered
6. her ankles, feet, and toes fused into a fin. she struggled. Stop!
7. finally, a cascade of shiny icy blue scales glides down her lower limb. her fin is light blue with white edges. Weiss Schnee is now a mermaid!
she yelled I'm a MERMAID!!!
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FederationBolt In reply to 54godamora [2019-11-25 05:53:26 +0000 UTC]
(ok i got Ruby and yang... do you want me to go next?)
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54godamora In reply to FederationBolt [2019-11-25 05:55:47 +0000 UTC]
Ruby is next. now you try with the format i did.
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FederationBolt In reply to 54godamora [2019-11-25 06:03:56 +0000 UTC]
ok ill try
1. Ruby Gets stars in her eyes as she sees how Cute and Amazing Wiess looks before Her hair became shiny and she gained Ruby Red eyeliner and Rose Red tips on her eyelashes. She gasped "I-ITS HAPPENING TO ME TOO?!"
2. Her ears became elf like and she gained 3 pairs of gills on her neck. "w-why i-is this happening?!"
3. her clothes vanished, leaving her with just a Ruby Red scaly revealing top. she blushed and covered her body
4. her legs moved closed together. she shook her head "nononononono!!"
5. they locked together and fused into one limb. she whimpered "t-this feels so weird"
6. her ankles, feet, and toes fused into a fin. she struggled. MY LEGS!!!!
7. finally, a cascade of shiny Ruby Red scales glides down her lower limb. her fin is Rose Red with Black edges. Ruby Rose is now a mermaid!
"IM A MERMAID TOO!!! WHATS GOING ON?!?!"
(this ok?)
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54godamora In reply to FederationBolt [2019-11-25 06:12:10 +0000 UTC]
that's great. now for Blake.
Blake stared in shock before she's next.
1. her hair became shiny, she gains purple eyeliner and purple tips to her eyelashes. she gasped me?!
2. her human ears became more elf-like and she gained 3 pairs of gills on her neck. she shrieked this can't be happening!
3. her clothes vanished, leaving her in a purple scaly revealing top. she blushed and covered herself
4. her legs moved closer together. stop!
5. they locked together and fused into one limb. she whimpered
6. her ankles, feet, and toes fused into a fin. she cried please stop!
7. finally, a cascade of shiny purple scales glides down her lower limb. her fin is bright purple with yellow edges. Blake Belladonna is now a mermaid!
She yelled I've turned into a mermaid! she realized something. Wait. . . it's the moon pool! it's doing this to us!
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FederationBolt In reply to 54godamora [2019-11-25 06:18:49 +0000 UTC]
Yang hearing what Blake said and how she would be Next she quickly tries to get out, but it was too late
1. Her hair became shiny and she gains Golden eyeliner and Yellow tips on her eyelashes. She gasped NO NOT ME TOO!
2. Her ears became elf like and she gained 3 pairs of gills on her neck. "ah! my neck!!"
3. her clothes vanished, leaving her with just an Golden Yellow scaly revealing top. she tried to get her Scroll out but was slow "NO!"
4. her legs moved closed together. she shook her head "GRRR, WHY IS THIS HAPPENING!?"
5. they locked together and fused into one limb. she Struggles to pull them apart
6. her ankles, feet, and toes fused into a fin. she shook agressivly "STOP, JUST STOP!!"
7. finally, a cascade of shiny Golden scales glides down her lower limb. her fin is Fire Yellow with Golden edges. Yang Xiao Long is now a mermaid!
she cries alittle hugging herself "dammit, dame this Moon Pool, WHY?!"
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54godamora In reply to FederationBolt [2019-11-25 06:22:44 +0000 UTC]
they all stare at their mermaid bodies in shock, fear, and slight wonder.
Yang- well this sucks!
Blake- what are we going to do?!
Weiss- why us?!
Ruby- girls, focus! maybe if we get out of this pool and dry out, we'll be back to normal.
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FederationBolt In reply to 54godamora [2019-11-25 06:29:10 +0000 UTC]
the Humming from the Crystals comes back and the water suddenly starts to rise, in a Unatural way, the girls all shook in fear before the water gently puts them on the land before going back into the Moon Pool and the Humming Quiets down "t-thank you... u-um W-water?" Ruby stays close to Yang as the Humming continues, a almost melody which Blake started to pick up "mako..." the three look at blake and she looks back at them "i-i think i can understand the humming, its a whisper... a voice and it said this island is... Mako Island" the Crystals seem to Glow alittle brighter and Wiess then looks upwards "o-ok... M-Mako?... s-sir?...o-or m-ma'am i-is there a way to Dry us off f-faster?... i-im sorry b-but i... i dont want to be a mermaid forever... h-how can i Fight Grimm and be a H-huntress i-if im like this?" (how about you try doing the next bit)
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54godamora In reply to FederationBolt [2019-11-25 06:33:28 +0000 UTC]
then four glypshs appeared on the cave walls and their lower arms glowed.
Ruby- what the?!
Yang- now what?!
Blake- there's more?!
Weiss- what now?!
once the glowing stopped each of them had a symbol of some kind on their wrist.
Ruby- left wrist a symbol of wind
Weiss- left wrist a symbol of ice
Blake- right wrist symbol of water
Yang- right wrist symbol of steam.
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FederationBolt In reply to 54godamora [2019-11-25 06:44:34 +0000 UTC]
(not bad)
Wiess noticed each of the Symbols and realised what Mako Island was telling her "Yang, Ruby... you two can Dry us off Faster!" Ruby and Yang looking at there Symbol on there wrist eyes widen "wait... does that mean we have more powers?!" Yang looks at her Teammates and smiles but then looks up a little worried "if we have new powers... how can we used them without hurting eachother?" the Crystals glowed once again and with its own Glypshs lifted up a ball of Water, showing off Blakes abilitys which she found Magestic, even noticing a few fish in it, then once the Fish flung themselves out it froze into Solid ice a almost perfect ball to Wiess's eyes, the Frozen ball almost fall into the water if it wasnt for a small tornado holding it up and Ruby couldnt help but awe, almost feeling the call to use this wind as her own, then the Ice started to steam half of it at a fast rate like a Roaring Fire at the bottom but then a slow pace at the top, a gentle Flame which made even Yang look on looking at her hand, she understood what she could do and gave a soft smile looking up "thank you, Mako Island... alright... hold still girls, Ruby?"Β Ruby smiled her hand in a wave like pose "ready" (lets see you try making the next scene of Ruby and Yang drying there team off)
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54godamora In reply to FederationBolt [2019-11-25 06:51:27 +0000 UTC]
ruby created an air current on her tail with her hand and yang clenched her fist and steamed started to rise around her tail, drying her out.
Ruby- stings a little but it should work.
a few seconds later, she's back to normal. . . with a few exceptions. the shiny hair, eyeliner, and tips of her eyelashes remain. as well as the faded "tattoo" on her wrist.
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FederationBolt In reply to 54godamora [2019-11-25 07:20:10 +0000 UTC]
they smile and Ruby and Yang get to work on Wiess and Blake along with Yang herself, once they go back to normal... with the few Exceptions, they look at the time and saw it was still nighttime "how long have we been in here?" Wiess checked her Scroll's clock and saw it was past 10:55 PM "it took us a while just to get here... maybe we should sleep here... then... um maybe use the Moon Pool to see if there is a way out?... i-if o-of course Mako is ok with this?" the Crystals hum softly which Blake noticed had a Motherly tone to it and she smiles "Mako Island says this will be like our Second home, because of what we can become and do" Ruby smiled and looks up "thanks you Miss Mako!" the Girls swore the Crystals humming were smiling as it suddenly made four Special beds... a Quadrupal Bunk Bed actually out of Ice and snow, Ruby went first and Ironicly almost Melted as she turned to her Teammates "its SOOO soft, come on, give it a try" Ruby quickly but carefully went to the Top Bunk while Yang went to the Bottom Bunk "just a guess, but i think if we touch water, our... Mermaid selves will come back... wont this melt in our sleep?"
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54godamora In reply to FederationBolt [2019-11-25 13:03:48 +0000 UTC]
Blake- let's hope not.
They all get some sleep
(Since they'll only become mermaids if they are bathing, in a swimming pool, or in a body of water, they'll be fine)
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FederationBolt In reply to 54godamora [2019-11-25 22:00:52 +0000 UTC]
(ok)
Team RWBY slowly woke up thanks to the Crystals Glow and Hum, they slowly get up and all said Good morning to eachother and also Mako Island, though Ruby said Mother Mako as she felt it was a perfect name for a Sentient Island "so aside from getting back to Camp, whats on the Agenda for today?" Yang's Teammates Shrug but Ruby smiles "i think we should learn how to be Mermaids!, imagen what we coud do if we master our new powers!..." "Ruby does have a point, Mother Mako... huh the name really fits... anyway Mother Mako seemed to give us this power for a reason... it didnt seem to be we were randomly choosin as we were here"Β the Team Nods knowing what Blake means
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54godamora In reply to FederationBolt [2019-11-25 23:07:26 +0000 UTC]
Their stomachs growl
Weiss- I suggest we first get some food
(Idea: why not we give Mother Mako. . . a vessel? A guardian angel?)
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FederationBolt In reply to 54godamora [2019-11-25 23:25:22 +0000 UTC]
(not a bad idea, have a few of the Crystals as a Heart and say a Frosted Water the Body... would you care to give that a start? i dont think i can do it myself right now... also did you like the name?)
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54godamora In reply to FederationBolt [2019-11-25 23:32:16 +0000 UTC]
(i was thinking something else: think Maowi from Moana but with a body plan like Arthur from the recent Aquaman and with Fijian body paint and tribal clothes. Like the name)
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FederationBolt In reply to 54godamora [2019-11-25 23:35:38 +0000 UTC]
(thats pretty neat... though i admittedly think my idea fits more into the 'Mako Island magic' thing, i mean Mako had its Sentient Water didnt it? and we already made the Crystals have power of there own, that looked similer to a Semblence in the RWBYVerse)
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54godamora In reply to FederationBolt [2019-11-25 23:44:40 +0000 UTC]
(so essentially a water/ice golem like Lore from Dark Crystal Age of Resistance?)
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FederationBolt In reply to 54godamora [2019-11-25 23:46:49 +0000 UTC]
(well you said like a Vessel or an Angel so i was thinking something more like that... XD but the Golem isnt a bad idea, plus i could see it being a perfect way to test Team RWBY's new powers as well and learn how to fight with there tails instead of Legs)
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54godamora In reply to FederationBolt [2019-11-25 23:50:30 +0000 UTC]
Ruby- let's head out and get some food.
(Deal. Rather than have actual legs he just slides across the ground and swims side to side)
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FederationBolt In reply to 54godamora [2019-11-25 23:58:46 +0000 UTC]
(ok)
Her Teammates nod ready to Enter the Moon Pool but the Crystals Started to Glow once again and Hum, the Moon Pool starts to Sparkle as it starts to take a form, a small heart Shape Crystal in the middle and the water freezing over, the girls looked shocked and in awe as the Humming quieted but Blake understanding it more easily heared what the hum said "angel?" the now Water being in front of them called Angel turns to them and give them a water looking smile, as it offers four hands to the girls, Wiess smiles and gently grabs the frozen hand, Blake and Yang do the same while Ruby blushes a little, finding this a little embarressing, (lets call the Golem 'Angel') it gently pulls them into the Moon Pool and allows there Transformation to happen before diving down into the water
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54godamora In reply to FederationBolt [2019-11-26 00:09:46 +0000 UTC]
And cue lesson one: how to swim with a mermaid tail
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FederationBolt In reply to 54godamora [2019-11-26 00:21:36 +0000 UTC]
(XD you definitly have the Humor down)
Team RWBY found that using a Tail to Swim was definitly challenging compared to swimming without one, but since they could now breath underwater they didnt have to worry about drowning, but with the thankful help of there Guardien Angel they got Swimming with a tail down, Wiess got it more easily as it felt Elegant, almost like using her Weapon and Semblence, next was Blake mostly thanks to her Faunus Traits, though it was a small problem as well but thanks to Angel she soon lost her problem with the water and Focused on training to use her tail, Yang actually had fun learning how to use her tail as once she got the hang of it, slightly being Stubborn and saying she can do it herself, she found her tail held just as much strength as her own two fists, Ruby had the most trouble so Angel was near her the most, but thanks to Angel she learnt it was like using Cresent Rose "This is FUN!! WHOO HOOOO!!!" "its really is nice Ruby, its still strange being able to breath underwater, but forget about it and you just feel, Free" Blake smiled resting on some rocks letting some of the fish swim nearby "i never thought being in the sea would be so beautiful, i almost never want to leave" "you can say that agian Blake, not to mention my Tail has some Serious Kick to it" Yang grinned managing to break a smal bit of rock and smack it with her tailΒ
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