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Published: 2009-04-04 00:24:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 2757; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 40
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Description Valley of Angels: Chapter 01

My own original manga. Comments and critique welcome

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Comments: 34

Borelloman [2014-01-21 20:39:24 +0000 UTC]

interesting. she is the girl from the start. the first chapter is really exciting.

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Essteka [2013-01-04 04:42:13 +0000 UTC]

And that's the end of this introduction. Well-done so far.

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Flyerscurse [2012-11-27 22:48:39 +0000 UTC]

actually the minds is what puts limits on your body, if it wasn't for this limits you could actually destroy your body... by breaking a concrete wall!!

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spudfiend [2012-11-25 08:22:23 +0000 UTC]

Interested so far, and I feel invested in what happens to the heroines. But I am hoping for more action soon.

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Tori5 [2012-11-20 07:06:44 +0000 UTC]

Oh my god. I never knew you could draw such a tear-jerking story. I really feel with the poor girls, I really do.

I'm going to read the rest as soon as time allows. It's no NaruHina, but still a great story that deserves attention!

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mattwilson83 In reply to Tori5 [2012-11-20 20:17:43 +0000 UTC]

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THEZEROANGEL [2010-06-20 21:33:52 +0000 UTC]

She should rest. Great story so far!

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loungefan [2009-12-22 23:40:55 +0000 UTC]

ahhhhhh! this is soooooo good! please update more of this one!!!!

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mattwilson83 In reply to loungefan [2009-12-23 00:08:19 +0000 UTC]

Well, I'm on chapter 4 at the moment ^^

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loungefan In reply to mattwilson83 [2009-12-23 00:17:03 +0000 UTC]

yes!

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yuna981 [2009-09-30 07:21:55 +0000 UTC]

very great job.

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mattwilson83 In reply to yuna981 [2009-09-30 12:15:10 +0000 UTC]

thanx.

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Fierce-Dities-Link [2009-04-13 22:17:20 +0000 UTC]

Yay! She got up! but for how long? That is the question. But not really, sence you already have more out.

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Creativesm75 [2009-04-05 14:17:24 +0000 UTC]

awesome

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mattwilson83 In reply to Creativesm75 [2009-04-05 23:31:51 +0000 UTC]

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ThenAgain [2009-04-04 12:29:06 +0000 UTC]

Wow! Did she force herself on her feet through willpower alone?
Oh my! I hope she will get to Tenpu!

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Fixer444 [2009-04-04 07:26:26 +0000 UTC]

Yess she is very admirable

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Artemis347 [2009-04-04 02:50:03 +0000 UTC]

Suzume has a fierce determination. First, attacking military personel, then jumping off a bridge, and now trudging through the forest while injured.

I like how you did the last three panels. The space is the same, but time is passing, and the frames are shrinking as she gets further away... great job!

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VixenTFox In reply to Artemis347 [2009-04-04 23:43:18 +0000 UTC]

I totally agree! Matt-sensei does have a good sense of how to do a good doujinshi!

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mattwilson83 In reply to Artemis347 [2009-04-04 15:26:53 +0000 UTC]

thanx. I thought it would look good

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Ultimate-Zelda-fan [2009-04-04 00:55:21 +0000 UTC]

This is defintely where the beginning left off.

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mattwilson83 In reply to Ultimate-Zelda-fan [2009-04-04 15:25:34 +0000 UTC]

not quite, but much closer.

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Ultimate-Zelda-fan In reply to mattwilson83 [2009-04-04 18:06:06 +0000 UTC]

oh

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KdaAnimefan [2009-04-04 00:37:54 +0000 UTC]

nice page man

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mattwilson83 In reply to KdaAnimefan [2009-04-04 15:25:09 +0000 UTC]

thanx.

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KdaAnimefan In reply to mattwilson83 [2009-04-04 19:18:54 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome

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rageofkyubii [2009-04-04 00:30:37 +0000 UTC]

Suzume rocks so hard!

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mattwilson83 In reply to rageofkyubii [2009-04-04 15:24:58 +0000 UTC]

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Onihikage [2009-04-04 00:30:32 +0000 UTC]

That's almost motherly determination!

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Skierunner [2009-04-04 00:30:09 +0000 UTC]

I like how you did the last three panels.

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mattwilson83 In reply to Skierunner [2009-04-04 15:24:43 +0000 UTC]

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LunarLadyLupa [2009-04-04 00:27:34 +0000 UTC]

There you go! Be strong... For Hana!

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mattwilson83 In reply to LunarLadyLupa [2009-04-04 15:24:30 +0000 UTC]

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SulliMike23 [2009-04-04 00:26:51 +0000 UTC]

Keep going Suzume...you're almost there.

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