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Maui-Ghost-writer — Let me smile for you

Published: 2005-04-18 15:06:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 182; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 3
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Description Crying in the shadows
I know your fear and dread
All the things you once loved
Are dying now or dead
What comfort can I bring to you?
You who's seen death's reign
What hopeful homilies can I espouse?
To trivialize your pain


Let me smile for you
Let me bring you peace
Put away your troubles now
And think of better things
Let me laugh with you
Let me show you how
We'll go running through the green grass
Where the sun is shining now

I've seen you in the shadows
Looking lost and all alone
I've seen the darkness take you
So far away from home
But you can put away your troubles
For at least a little while
You don't have to cry alone
When together we can smile

Let me smile with you
Let me bring you peace
Put away your troubles now
And think of better things
Let me laugh with you
Let me show you how
We'll go running through the green grass
Where the sun is shining now

And when the rain comes pouring down
I’ll still be with you
It's raining on the whole world
Not just me and you
And we don't have to worry none
The rain's what makes us strong
Grows the green grass greener
And we weather through the storm

Let me smile with you
Let me bring you peace
Put away your troubles now
And think of better things
Let me laugh with you
Let me show you how
We'll go running through the green grass
Where the sun is shining now


And when the sun is shining down
We'll laugh and sing and play
And with the darkness falling round
We'll kiss the night away....
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Comments: 16

Sammi66 [2007-12-08 03:01:15 +0000 UTC]

Once again Beautiful work, you have some amazing talent

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Maui-Ghost-writer In reply to Sammi66 [2007-12-11 23:19:45 +0000 UTC]

well i dont think i would call it amazing but thank you!

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petit-chou-fleur [2005-05-23 13:49:49 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful imagery, such a good poem both technically and emotionally.

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Maui-Ghost-writer In reply to petit-chou-fleur [2005-06-21 10:54:38 +0000 UTC]

thank you so very much!

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petit-chou-fleur In reply to Maui-Ghost-writer [2005-06-21 14:43:41 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome

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AvonArt [2005-04-20 11:12:17 +0000 UTC]

A very nicely written down thought indeed

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Maui-Ghost-writer In reply to AvonArt [2005-04-20 11:54:19 +0000 UTC]

thanx again!

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Aether-Merula [2005-04-19 01:08:52 +0000 UTC]

holy shit this is fucking great!

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Maui-Ghost-writer In reply to Aether-Merula [2005-04-19 03:17:10 +0000 UTC]

i love how you put it

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PunkGothViolinKitty [2005-04-19 00:18:56 +0000 UTC]

whos it about???

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Maui-Ghost-writer In reply to PunkGothViolinKitty [2005-04-19 03:14:53 +0000 UTC]

i dont care to share.... sorry

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PunkGothViolinKitty In reply to Maui-Ghost-writer [2005-04-19 20:04:36 +0000 UTC]

okaykay...

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BurnBurn06 [2005-04-19 00:11:55 +0000 UTC]

Awwwww...*tear*

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Maui-Ghost-writer In reply to BurnBurn06 [2005-04-19 03:14:15 +0000 UTC]

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BurnBurn06 In reply to Maui-Ghost-writer [2005-04-19 03:19:02 +0000 UTC]

Heh..

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goosey1019 [2005-04-18 22:05:48 +0000 UTC]

simply beautiful.....

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