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Maui-Ghost-writer — forevermore
Published: 2005-02-03 09:41:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 190; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 6
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this crap hole of a life lingeres on and onit would be so easy to let go of this pain
to have this deadly burden off my back
that is slowly killing me alive
a quick flash of a knife
why cant i ease her pain
and now i have failed her
she is gone
i have lost the battle and now the war
why do i still continue lingure here
i could end this pain so quick
yet i have the hope of saving one more
sad,broken,hurting soul
to save another would make this burden worth the anguish and pain
but to fail again would kill me alive
forevermore gone
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Comments: 17
it's extreamly powerful and touching. it brought a tear to my eye and I'm sad reading it...it moved me
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Wow hunny...thats powerful words....beautifull written, but I don't know what else to say...
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it means everything. plz dont do this to me
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i like it lots. it makes me sad but i like it. good job.
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really good. the emotion really comes out in the poem
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thank you did you read the follow up in my jounal
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yes i believe i did
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hehe your so funny
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