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Maui-Ghost-writer — forevermore part2
Published: 2005-02-05 00:26:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 266; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 8
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im here yet another dayand so is this pain
lack of sleep has made it so much harder
i lay awake wishing i could have been there
to hold you before you did it
but i was to late
i have failed
you screamed,cried yelled until you no longer had a voice
contemplating death so it will all end
you think for a second what will this do to my dear friend
but you are overwelmed by your previous thoughts
your life has been taken over by death itself
you no longer have control
in your last breath you came back for a second
and your last thought was my dear friend will be fine without me
now it is finished
in your mind atleast
little did you know
you were the last thing i was holding on to
and now i am gone
its such a sad thought that my death will do this to someone else
and this story will go on forevermore
i have failed
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Comments: 13
Wow... very deep!... Very beautifuly written... You should make it into a song...
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i really hope things get better for you dear
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Suicide in all ways sucks i have a mate who tryed to kill him self by Jumping off a building. it was earler on this week. to cope with it im drunk now, while he sits in hospital broken legs, feet, no teeth and more i sit here drunk haveing some form of fun ............ but what the hell ill go back to cutting myself who the hell cares about anyone. the teachers havent even mentioned it in asembily .
[yeah so what i cant spell.... damn you if you care, im drunk thats my excuse. whats yours for being an arsehole!!!!!]
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very well written......keep in mind what you say in the last few lines.......
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This is also beautifully written....you seem to have captured the situation amazingly...we really do connect with what ur saying and see how it will go on forever...I'm just really sorry that you had to write something like this sweetie...
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yes i though it was very good. the repetiveness of like a whole paragraphh caught me off gaurd a little but i think that it really added a lot to it. sounds like a song.
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wow, thats really deep angel. i'm sorry about all the pain
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no its ok...was it any good....be honest
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thank you so much
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