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Published: 2013-07-28 08:24:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 3044; Favourites: 33; Downloads: 0
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First/PreviousNext fucking finally
This took like a month longer than I originally intended to take, and for that I blame backgrounds. Granted, they were mostly trees, but drawing treestreestrees is really tedious, even if they're terrible looking trees.
But yes.
Backgrounds.
Characters are no longer floating in white space 99% of the time! More like . . . 80%. Speaking of characters, we have two new ones! (Their rhyming names were not intended I swear to god -) Of course, I didn't catch a wild Butterfree or Beedrill, I just decided to evolve them hella fast since, well, they evolve hella fast. Fei was actually caught on route 2, and Ray was the actual catch in the forest.
Welp, off to do other things and hope the next update doesn't take nearly as long :'D Except school's coming up, so I better really speed up -
Gym battle's next page!
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Can easily tell what your going for with vision, a funny action comedy for a nuzlocke and it;s turning out great so far. Characters are likable and i want to see them succeed and it only been two pages.
While the concept isn;t original, the style you draw everyone in is. I havn;t seen such normal humanoid forms for gijinkas in a comic before so it def stands out.
This is drawn just like a good manga, only not having to read it like one, whie still having shading and details to the smallest of things.
You sold me just on the first page and the same can be said for the second. I plan to watch this till the end and I;m sure I'll enjoy the entire run.
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UR NUZLOCKE IS HONESTLY REALLY CUTE AND I DIG THAT U COLOR SPECIFIC THINGS. THATS RAD
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well, he may not be perky, but at least he is sassy... good luck at the gym battle, although the main char will be the one doing most of it.
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AHA yeah no bulbasaur in kanto is just
pshΒ
first two gyms are nothingΒ
but yea, thank you~ -w-
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A butterfree and beedril? Amazing. Both are good 'mons for a nuzrun. I've never been so lucky with Butterfree but many people are, but I had a beedril that lasted through my entire soulsilver run. Treat them well now! You'll do great!
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Beedrills seem to die pretty easily in Nuzruns, so I'm hoping Ray won't have to go through that ;;Β
Butterfrees always seem to be damn kickass, but also really fragile, so I'm hoping against that too ;;;;;;;
But ahhh, thanks!
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They do, and it's sad because they're so kickass. The key is to make sure you swap em out before they're too hurt and keep their levels ahead of anyone else, ahaha. And you're right, butterfree are fragile but absolutely amazing if you give them the right move set.
Sorry, you probably know most of this already, ahaha...
Good luck though! Rooting for you!
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Mmm, Butterfree and their special attack just kick ass. Too bad their defenses suck because of it.
Let's hope it lasts to E4 and champion!
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True but they tend to be fast, so that's an additional plus.
Mhm, best of luck!
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I really like your team overview, haha, omg. This is gonna be a good'unnn
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How da fuq is Fei adamant, you lied to me in the library!!!! lyk srsly u didnt have 2 make hr all coldass but u cant have her be all perky nd cheerful DX
(I think a couple of my brain cells just died while I was typing that)
Also, I am being overpowered by Ray's sassiness.
/sarcasm
/shot
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I er. Would critique but I sort of suck eheheh. o.o'
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Members only thing, y'know. Can't critique without that fancy premium shit lol
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Nice update~ I really like your backgrounds and character designs ^u^
Ohhh noo Ray's hoottttttt
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ouo Why, senkyou~
JUST AS PLANNED
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moop! >3< A beedrill /and/ a butterfree? xD that's pretty epic
Another great update >3< muahahahaha
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Totally worth grinding in the forest for like ten minutes to evolve them both
Thank you~!
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XD No doubt >3<
And of course x3 Keep it up : DD
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