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This can be considered an experiment in creating Kisekae comics. As a result, I would like to request critiques, both positive and negative. I would like to make more of these in the future. So, any feedback would be very helpful.

My idea for this one was to use a basic comic layout with a simple plot in order to be able to focus on the core creation tools. I feel that I did a good job with the facial expressions, but need to work on the speech bubbles the most. In particular, I think the text is too large.

Backgrounds are directly from the Dragon Ball Z anime.

Description

This can be considered an experiment in creating Kisekae comics. As a result, I would like to request critiques, both positive and negative. I would like to make more of these in the future. So, any feedback would be very helpful.

My idea for this one was to use a basic comic layout with a simple plot in order to be able to focus on the core creation tools. I feel that I did a good job with the facial expressions, but need to work on the speech bubbles the most. In particular, I think the text is too large.

Backgrounds are directly from the Dragon Ball Z anime.