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One of the major rules of Felarya:
Make sure the cavern you're about to enter is ACTUALLY a cavern, and not a predator's mouth in disguise ^^
Except that's not what this story's about XD
Also, I meant to say: I'm not subscribed, so I cannot put the "Request Critiques" option into play, but if you could put some constructive input into your comments then please, feel free to do so ^^ I'm very new at this comic-making biz, and since I'm not using a specific comic-making program I'm sort of feeling around in the dark
Please and thanks!
Felarya is (c)
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No! Don't go in, in the word's of Admiral Fishhe- I mean Ackbar: it's a trap!
You have quite the talent for doing short peices that instatly capture this veiwer's attention!
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I would love to critque it for ya, but i'm not aritst and can't tell if anything is wrong. 
I just gotta say that your line art, shading is top notch.
All i think you need to do is add color to this.
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so far I have no critque I can think of, though it is late here, thats probably why lol, but just let me say this D= please don't turn out to be a total asswipe so many artists lately who've entered felarya have turned out like that, ESPECIALLY comic artists, though since you're actually asking for critque I kinda doubt you are XD and glad for it ^^ you're gonna get popluar quick XD just know that
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Thank you for your...words of wisdom and encouragement ^^ I'm heartened to know that someone out there has hope for me XD
Again, thank you
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I do ^^ and I can't wait to see what you draw next
just keep on doing whatcha do and I'll continue stalking your page happily!
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IT'S A TRAP!
P.S. Very nice comic, you are now being watched
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great page again
Good work on the speed effect, it looks very dynamic
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For being relatively new to making comics, you're remarkably good at it. I can't wait to see where this goes.
I wonder what those "vines" really are . . .
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