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I think for a casual observer it'd impossible to tell whether this is photo'd or rendered.
The door is dark, so the sharp edge doesn't give much away.
Maybe the wall pictures could need some gloss - a thin glass plate or sth? But that's secondary.
Very good work!
Really great!
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thank u! ill try that, i have to make a better version of it, so ill have this in mind.
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Hi there,
there are 2 major things you could work on that stick out for me right now.
1. Shadows
You have some wierd shadowing going on. I realise that the glowy orange things on the table are some sort of lamp, but under them you have a strange sort of light and it's the wrong colour, also a light instead of a shadow under the vase on the left. Consider looking into an Occlusion pass to help create the illusion of things being attached.
2. Edges
Bevel your sharp edges, even if it's just a little bit. There's no such thing as a perfectly sharp edge in real life, and it's a dead giveaway of a render.
I'd also look at your composition, think about the focal point you want in this room, and draw the viewer's eye to it. That big black door on the right just cuts off the frame, and doesn't add anything. The layout of the staircase is quite nice though and you've obviously got some nice ideas on layout. At the very least loose the door
in response to your request for critique,
Cymae @
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thank you a lot for this, i hate the door, but this was a work for a friend who wants i mean REALLY wants a door in front in this image...nothing i can do about it...
the thing of the lights and shadows, the error that sticks uot the ost is the vase on the floor with an alien light on the floor, i didnt know what to do for it, and i havent thought of an occlussion pass, so i will try that, actually its something that i never use, and i know i strongly should. The rest i agree with you, ill work on it. Thank you.
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