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Meekiai — Darshgar
Published: 2005-10-24 16:57:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 159; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 7
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         I felt my blade of blacksteel slice through chaos minion after chaos minion.  I felt their cold, black, sticky blood on my face, hands, and in my hair.  I could smell their stench as they burned, like sulfur.  I heard their bones crack as i punched through their ribs and ripped their still beating heart from their chests.
         I felt the heat from the flames all around us.  I tasted the bile in the back of my throught.  I felt their hot reeking breath on my skin.  My eyes stung from countless hours of fighting.  It was before dawn when i started fighting and its almost dusk now.  I could feel my muscles pining for me to release my sword, but my will and pride won't allow it.  My anger only equalled by my hatred of these creatures.
         One of them charges as i raise my sword, almost in a dream like state, and brought it down on his skull.  I hear the grey matter send out one last bioelectric message before it is split in two.
         I can see the gate in the distance across this nightmarish horde.  It sits there, almost serenly, glowing with its own light.  The barrier between this world and the void, like water, was rippling as if a stone had just passed through it.  I felt a sudden surge of power and energy and fought my way ever so slightly towards the gate killing as many as i could wounding more.  When i got to the gate i released a great raor and leapt through.
         As i passed through the veil I felt my memory become complete.  I felt my skill increase, and i felt the gaps in my mind vanish.  On the other side i landed sighlently in a grassy plain, it was littered with the corpses of Chaos minions.  I was standing behing a monsterous creature and i saw Darshgar on the other side preparing to fight to the death if he had to.  Our eyes met for a brief second and i remembered that day.  That wonderous day that changed our lives forever.  It seemed,like an eternity, so long ago.....

                                         13 years earlier

Justin
          Hi! I'm Justin Wade Lowhorn.  I'm your average run of the mill 17 year old person, or so i thought.  I believe in my own things. back then i was 5'11"-6' with a athletic build.  I had medium length curly and very frizzy strawberry blonde hair.  I was a Lifegaurd at Shipwreck Island Waterpark.
          I was happy with my life in all but a few aspects. I didn't have a girlfriend and i didn't make enough money.  I was always wishing i was born with strange powers,elemental control, or anything that would make me stand out.  Little did I know what was soon going to happen.

Darshgar
          Greetings! I'm Darshgar Meekiai Vordrandrishir.  I'm what you humans call a Deimos.  I have mattalic skin that is significantly stronger than a humans.  I have long platinum hair, silver wings, 2 inch talons, and a scar on the right side of my face, going over my eye.
          I use to hate humans do to what a certain clan, The Lowhorn clan, did to my family.  They killed my mother, My sister, My wife, and My son.  For a simple reason as they did not understand our race. so i took up my post as the Silver Winged General to seak my revenge.

Justin
          When i awoke that morning i knew something was different, I knew somehow this day would change my life forever.  So I went to work and upon arriving there seemed to be a shadow lingering on the place.  I had just gotten off a week long suspension and they put me at the Skull Island. There seemed to me to be a lot of energy in the place and it confused me.

this is it for now i will post more later
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Comments: 10

Tiki-Rongo [2006-01-26 03:35:35 +0000 UTC]

i like it man its good so far ill read the rest tomorrow prolly i gotta go to bed in a few minutes right now good job /\/\

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Meekiai In reply to Tiki-Rongo [2006-01-26 13:48:42 +0000 UTC]

thanks man

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Tiki-Rongo In reply to Meekiai [2006-01-27 02:31:15 +0000 UTC]

anytime good job /\/\

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Aleera-Keeya [2005-10-25 21:24:38 +0000 UTC]

I like it. I can't wait to see where the story goes and who all of the people are that play in it. I hope both you and Darshgar see eye to eye one day. I hope you get to post more of it really soon.

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vergil11689 [2005-10-24 20:32:24 +0000 UTC]

....justin wtf...you dont have a athletic bulid...and i know that you know that u need to do a speel check but over all...pretty damn good...lol

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Meekiai In reply to vergil11689 [2005-10-25 12:30:18 +0000 UTC]

fuck you paul its called a f*cking fantasy for a reason things that aren't real ya know like i'm going to put you in it with a shaved head and your going to join a buddhist(Sp?) temple

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vergil11689 In reply to Meekiai [2005-10-25 23:14:49 +0000 UTC]

no i no it's a fantasy but with ur build it would be better for u if u turned that thing u call an arm into musle(sp?) you would hold a great sword with one hand with ease but if u wanna be a dick about it...then b 1 and if u put me in thier with a shaved head and into sum B/S budhist group i will run u over with the car i dont have....asshole!!! i love my hair...DICK!!!

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Meekiai In reply to vergil11689 [2005-10-26 12:40:53 +0000 UTC]

yeah i know you love your hair thats why i would do it because it's fantasy it's something that would never happen

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Meekiai In reply to Meekiai [2005-10-31 16:58:39 +0000 UTC]

yeah your definatly getting a shaved head

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vergil11689 In reply to Meekiai [2005-10-31 16:18:44 +0000 UTC]

...no not even in fantasy...you know what...panda's should be white in your fantasy....whos with me?!...

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