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Published: 2005-12-12 17:13:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 66; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 2
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Description a heart
not living but not dead
pumps the blood
for you to love

But what will happen
when your heart becomes like mine
dead
shrivalled
COLD

I used to love
i used to feel
i had protection
but there was an unknown flaw

down cames the walls of my heart
and it was good
for a time

but then for that which i felt no feeling
for that which i loved not
began to shine
Bright white

hot as a star
bright as a hunters moon

so my heart hid and stopped heating
but then something happened
The light went out
and i feel cold and dead

My heart died and shrivalled
so i ask can a heart that is cold
and shrivaled ever pump warm blood
like it used to

Am i doomed to wonder this world unloving
am i doomed to live with cold blood for the rest of eternity

Unending life on the mortal plain
Make it end, The pain
return to me my heart
so that i may part

For that which i began to love
is gone like the dove
a great glove
stole it and put it out

stealing my warmth and my life
so now i ask you
the one who caused my heart to dissapear
What will happen when your heart becomes like mine

Will you continue on
or will you remember
now realizing what you did
but don't worry i forgive
you knew not what you did
or what you hid

just remember you stole my emotions and my life
so if i do not feel then you should not worry
because i have no fury
only three things exsist

The emptyness
The darkness
and
THE COLD.
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Comments: 5

irishhellgirl [2006-01-31 15:20:32 +0000 UTC]

some one broke ur heart, and now u feel as though you cant love again? now, if that is it.. then i can relate:S congrats on yet another great poem!

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Meekiai In reply to irishhellgirl [2006-02-01 14:03:04 +0000 UTC]

thank you and i'm glad you could understand it

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irishhellgirl In reply to Meekiai [2006-02-01 14:21:05 +0000 UTC]

Ur welcome

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Meekiai In reply to irishhellgirl [2006-02-01 14:22:35 +0000 UTC]

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Aleera-Keeya [2005-12-18 05:57:39 +0000 UTC]

Are you lonely? That is what I am getting from this peice. Your spelling still needs a little work and the lines need a little more structure to make a little more sence, but othere then that it is a really good piece.

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