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balinlesavage [2004-11-18 16:18:26 +0000 UTC]
The last four stanzas are excellent, I like the way they move, and the imagery is quite good.
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balinlesavage In reply to Meeper [2004-11-19 05:30:38 +0000 UTC]
pfft... I'm no better than anybody else...
Anyway, I think the 'weaving a decade' lines are beautiful, and there is a powerful, mature resolve at the end of the poem, a strong decision in the face of the past, and that's not a choice many people make. Maybe that's why I liked the last four stanzas best.
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Meeper In reply to balinlesavage [2004-11-20 02:00:08 +0000 UTC]
You're quite modest I see.
I think everyone that hasn't the right one has had the same experiance(s) as I. It's an almost universal pain.
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Xidian [2004-10-26 00:49:31 +0000 UTC]
Oooh. I really like this one, very sweet and pleasant! As mentioned, the imagery is awesome. One of your best, I'd say. ^-^
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Meeper In reply to Xidian [2004-10-26 01:58:35 +0000 UTC]
^-^ I had some serious inspiration behind it. Perhaps that's why.
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Meeper In reply to IrkenSnax [2004-10-26 00:40:42 +0000 UTC]
^-^ Tyler likes you. Doesn't he count?
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